Domestic Area: If You Have a System, Why Don't You Join the Chat Group?

As long as you write about one person, even if you are the return of the Immortal Emperor, the resurrection of the Demon God, or the Lord of the World who rules countless worlds, you will still participate in the Luotian Dajiao Competition and act like a monkey to others, and at the same time, you have to kneel down and act like a dog to the company, for fear that the other party will not give you the opportunity to kneel like a dog.

I thought of a joke. The pig's trotters can extract other people's abilities, and then the pig's trotters extract Lu Mingfei's courage, Han Li's talent, Xu Zhu's face, Aqua's IQ, Hawking's physique, and Guiwu Shimu's courage. I don't know who has the worst luck. If there is anything else to add, please remember to mention it.

The character of the protagonist is a bit fragmented. In the first forty chapters, he acted as a knight, but during the demon-slaying conference, as the main character, he could take action, but at least explain before taking action, giving the many soldiers who came from the gang a chance and space to think about quitting. However, the protagonist did not say a word and killed them all regardless of whether they were good or bad, leaving only a few good people in his memory. It was very fragmented. It seems that the protagonist has no behavioral logic, no desire to seek truth, no good or evil, and he does things based on his own preferences. The knight's behavior in the previous forty chapters is very embarrassing. It's understandable that you don't explain it at the beginning. After all, it's useless to explain if the situation is wrong, not to mention that you've already explained it the first time, but if you don't explain it when everyone is gathered together, the character you embody is too murderous. Summary: The character is undefined and the behavior is illogical, but the style of acting is still very refreshing and refreshing, but it is easy to collapse in the follow-up. A protagonist who has no general direction and acting style can easily collapse the entire novel, and the female emotional drama is the same as dog training. I suggest that the harem just stop it, don't engage in meat drama, it is too abstract

The protagonist is living for others, or the author has too heavy a filter on the original characters and always gives too much respect to these characters, making the protagonist look a bit humble. The description is more biased towards the group, and even overshadows the protagonist. There are these signs at the beginning, but they are not so obvious. The world of Zhu Xian will no longer be played in the future. For example, Zhongli is called emperor, which is a name for a superior person. The protagonist is just Zhongli's group of friends and not his subordinates. The limelight is all given to Zhang Xiaofan. The words and skills that are in the limelight are all given by the protagonist. Even the harem is opened, and the protagonist is like a passerby.

I am writing a martial arts fanfic, please change the title and book title 🙂🙄

I don't understand your reason for helping Duan Yu! He doesn't want the protagonist to take on a disciple, and he doesn't want the protagonist to take on a disciple as his master. Normal people should become indifferent because of this. Let's not talk about whether Du Yu will ask for help at this time, and what reason the protagonist has to help him. Although Duan Yu is naive, he is not stupid. He is always attentive to others and is either a traitor or a thief.

Can't we ask the group members and Han Li to save people? The injury of an ordinary person, the matter of an ordinary healing elixir in the world of immortality, it is so complicated, and there are various skills and spells. I don't even ask. Is the protagonist planning to die in Tianlong? There are too few plots in the chat group, and some plots are hard water. Isn't it possible to solve it in the chat group?

It's Chapter 94, and you haven't even appeared in the chat group a few times. You have basically no sense of existence. You have been writing the martial arts article. In the chapter about martial arts, the chat group has not appeared for a while. I logged out and looked at the title. I must have read the wrong book. You didn't write like this in the world of martial arts. Now you still write about Zhu Xian. This kind of ridiculous novel has basically disappeared. There is no fan book written by someone. You picked it up. This novel is not well-known now. How many people still remember the plot? They can't remember the plot or they haven't read it. Are you sure you have the ability to make people interested in reading it?

This title is deceiving. I came here for the domestic area.

The inspiration comes from "I Join the Chat Group of the System Streaming Protagonist" by the polar traveler boss, but don't worry, it won't be plagiarized. Please feel free to watch it. The author will delve deeply into the domestic area.

It's too procrastinating, there are too many plots about Tianlong The later stages of this kind of Zhutianliu are about piercing the long river of time and space and breaking up the relationship between ancient and modern times. So what's the point of writing about Tianlong in the early stage? Those beauties in Tianlong accepted pure vases, and they felt aggrieved not only for beauties, but also for interpersonal relationships. Do you want to have a relationship with Duan Yu and Qiao Feng?

Please change the title of the book. I came to the domestic area and ended up with this

My sincere advice is not to write about strangers

I see that other chat groups have too much chat content, but you are different. You basically don't chat at all.

I feel like Zhongli is exaggerating. A god on a planet shouldn't be that exaggerated! At most, it feels like mainland China!

I prefer the candy heart from the domestic section and the European and American section.

The biggest problem is that the writing is not interesting enough and the narrative is straightforward. If I didn't know better, I thought I was reading an argumentative essay. In refreshing novels, boredom is the biggest original sin.

The protagonist seems to have no sense of existence. Is this what the protagonists of Zhutianwen are like? One hundred chapters later, neither career nor love has improved, I'm a bit disappointed.

With such a subject matter, if you were to write about martial arts, would you still be able to become an immortal with your martial arts skills in Tian Long Ba Bu 😒

It turned out to be such a domestic area. I thought it was a domestic area.

Although the chat group elements in Tianlong World are pitiful, the protagonist's style can be regarded as a cool male protagonist. The copy of Qing Yunian later is inexplicable. The protagonist spends at least half of the time in this world, and is Qing Yunian really worthy of being behind Tianlong? The popularity of this thing is comparable to the name of my neighbor next door. I haven't seen Qing Yunian. This episode is inexplicable. There is no protagonist in the plot and there is no role. What is the point of adding this thing?

I was very embarrassed at the beginning. I really don't know what kind of person can watch this.

The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are now cyber ancestors, and they have to be worshiped in every book. Why should humans recognize their ancestors if they are not from their world? Do you still admit that you were created by Nuwa? Even if Ye Fan, who is a priest, comes, he will call his ancestor and recognize Nuwa as his mother.

The writing is too messy and scattered. . . .

The writing is not as good as the early version of System Streaming, and it feels like the protagonist is just a tool who can run wherever he needs to. And I always kneel down and lick some characters, such as Zhongli and the latest chapter of the Dacheng Holy Body. I feel like I have to lick the back too.

Han Li (foundation stage) and Yao Chen, one cultivating immortality and the other fighting qi, improved the "Beiming Shen Gong" based on "Zhuangzi Xiaoyaoyou" and the "Lingbo Weibu" based on "The Sixty-Four Chapters of the Book of Changes" into the techniques for cultivating immortals in the golden elixir stage and fighting qi Xuan level without having read Taoist classics. It is equivalent to one who writes middle school English textbooks with a primary school Chinese proficiency, and the other who writes middle school Chinese textbooks with a doctorate in French. Chinese people who grew up under the influence of Han culture will not be able to understand Taoist terminology even if they are not specialized in it. These two cross-cultural systems not only understand it, but also improve it. It's just so outrageous.

Oh my god, today I saw that the Song Dynasty has not passed yet

Dou Po,. Is it necessary to write? Baolian lantern, canonize the gods. You don't write

Can we add Qin Mu, Meng Chuan, and Ning Que in the introduction to the domestic area? I didn't see Ning Que either.

I hope to write about Immortal Ni, The Sword Comes, Choosing Tian Ji, etc., As well as Qin Shi Mingyue, Tian Xing Nine Songs, Bad Man