Heavens, Starting from the Republic of Ghosts and Gods

In the first three chapters, the protagonist's emotions of greed, anger and ignorance are all revealed. He has been complaining about others, about being hunted, about there being nothing new under the sun, and about not having a good person in the Bai family..., One has nothing to do with him, and the other is self-inflicted due to his own reasons. It feels that none of the protagonist's brothers are close to him. What moved the protagonist was that he said that he was not afraid of being chased, and at worst he would have been reincarnated (as for why the protagonist was not afraid of the Maoshan sect with people in the underworld, we don't know). After that, the protagonist said that he was "repaying the kindness" and wanted to repay the favor of saving his life, but in the end he didn't repay you. You are not grateful when someone saves you. You look down on them. He was very reluctant and left with a promise to repay you next time.

A hodgepodge of random stews, various training systems, and the practice of cultivating immortals is not as good as practicing martial arts.

They are all the emperors of the same country, and their cultivation is also at the level of a big boss, but they end up sworn in with a group of thieves. I won't write it if it's divorced from the plot.

This kind of world cultivation system should be replaced immediately. What a rubbish system with all kinds of restrictions.

Let's change the beginning! Isn't it said later that the protagonist and Zhao Gongming are brothers, then it is estimated that the protagonist is the saint's direct disciple who died due to being a god and then reincarnated. The ancient world talks about cause and effect. Except for the incarnation of the Tongtian leader, can other gods and demons be the protagonist's masters? The author can't mess around just because he likes Maoshan!

There are too many crappy, nondescript and fusion things. It's too messy. If it's better to become an immortal than to practice martial arts, who can cultivate immortality? Isn't that funny?

Grab a copy. The setting is dog S, the protagonist and characters are not well written, and the plot is templated.

You can read it, but you can see it all at a glance. Most of the latter parts are either unsatisfactory and cut off or the content is broken and there is nothing interesting. On the one hand, the sewing is too messy, and it is not very harmonious for one person to sew the world view of Jiu Shu. The former clearly does not have heaven, earth, gods, and the latter is dead as long as he is a well-known and upright Taoist priest with some cultivation. Not to mention that you can get a good pregnancy even if you work in the underworld. On the other hand, the protagonist has already died. He thought he was going to start a grassroots counterattack from scratch. Who would have thought that not long after the plot, the protagonist's identity became that of the unknown boss who arranged to be reincarnated in the small world to experience life. Then Zhao Gongming, the God of Wealth, directly fed the resources and took off. How? So, at this point, the protagonist's growth potential is gone. It's unconvincing growth to try to write it out. Even if you have to set up an awesome past life background identity for the protagonist, the author exposed it so early. Even Ye Fan didn't start a little until the middle and late stages of the plot after a long period of time. It is revealed that he may be the reincarnation of someone, and then he has to endure hardships. The protagonist of the urban rebirth novel has to save his first pot of gold step by step after he is reborn, and slowly build up his strength to deal with enemies from all directions. The protagonist has a problem, and he was awesome in his previous life. In this life, he has gods and bosses feeding him resources, and his cultivation level keeps rising. So what else can readers read? Watch him just save some ticket money and then travel across the world to use his cultivation to bully the small ones, or should he ask his immortal friends from his previous life to fight for him? It is passionate to defeat the strong by the weak, and it is refreshing to rise from the grassroots. This is something that most people can take in and gain emotional experience. But the big boss descends to earth and pretends to be a mortal to experience life. This kind of plot is different from playing a game and a high-level player switches to a novice account to fish in a novice-level pool, or even the high-level player shamelessly cheats?

You are not allowed to take revenge if your whole family is killed?

Lin Fengjiao prevents the protagonist from avenging his parents! How does the author deal with this kind of person? Other books are all about gods blocking and killing gods!

I saw Jiushi Zhang talking about the reincarnation of a true spirit. Then after more than twenty reincarnations, the memory may not be awakened. Even if the memory ability is awakened, it still needs to be practiced again. Then you can play it yourself.

Your power system, which is so low, has no future.

It has already collapsed since I started cheating on the protagonist. The first thing I wrote was okay, but as soon as I cheated on the protagonist, it started to improve as soon as the combat power increased.

Want to be a great writer in the Republic of China

It's messy but beautiful

How did Sanqing provoke you?

I don't know if the author deliberately made the protagonist so young or if that's what the author originally thought. Let me talk about two huge poisonous points first Firstly, the protagonist actually inquired with foreign companies when he wanted the holy relics, and even signed a contract in triplicate! ! ! I'm speechless. Second, when the protagonist sees refugees on a train, he actually wants to contact the train conductor to give food to the refugees, and also says that he wants to give out candy. Brother, your understanding of human nature and the times is too shallow.

Does the protagonist like physical fitness? He was directly reincarnated into the period of Pangu Chaos Demon God. When the Chaos Demon God was ready and wanted any immortal body, he was immediately overthrown. The physique is a mess. It can be divided into acquired and innate. At most, the bloodline is better and the essence with some attributes is still acquired.

Forget about changing his name to Narration King, the inner activities are really rich too

The functions of cheats are different in the early stage and later stage. I remember that in the early stage, you can obviously travel with memories and items, but in the later stage, you can directly travel with real spirits. The most important thing is that you directly omitted many plots in it, and you also left without solving the problems in the first world. It is obvious that you added too many buffs to the BOSS in the early stage. You don't know how to solve it, so you just change the world. Later, you can solve it and scatter it if you can't remember it.

If you didn't expect that someone could write Zhe Tian in such a mediocre way, without any explosive points, the readers would be drowsy and forget what they were reading after reading it. The author is not suitable for writing a passionate novel like Zhe Tian, ​​so he should change the map quickly.

To tell a joke, the author's practice setting in the world was rubbish, but later it went to cover up the world and brought down other people's practice systems. The wheel and the sea are aligned to refine and transform into qi, and the four poles of the Tao Palace are aligned to transform into spirits. Return to virtual reality and transform into a dragon. Hedao benchmarks against Sendai. Then it is said that the active aura of the world affects the performance of combat power. If the performance of the Heavenly Master is to return to the void. The sky-shaping dragon went to the earth and even though it was suppressed, it didn't behave like this.

Because there is no need to look at what comes from the sky, and it belittles the system of the sky. The conspiracy theory system is flawed and short-lived. It is also written that Tianxin imprint has problems and existential awareness.

I suggest that the author can open a separate book about the Republic of China period, and mix in the plots of Uncle Nine and tomb robbing. I think it will be very interesting.