
I Am a Proficient Martial Artist, and I Can Control the Starry Sky with My Fists
爆肝武学的我,拳镇星空
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- Ongoing
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- 410k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I don't know since when martial arts became insulated from science, mecha, and bioengineering. Martial arts must go all the way to the dark side, and other biological engineering, alien implants, and ancient martial arts mechas must be abandoned. Strange.
Let me see if it looks good first
I see that there is a fight between the new martial arts and the old martial arts in it, and I hope it's not a case of trying to seduce others. The protagonist Niu cannot represent the old martial arts Niu;
There used to be a mecha category in the science fiction category. The ancient martial arts mecha in the mecha category. In the past, mechas could also practice martial arts. The power channels inside are the meridians.
From a personal point of view, this female character named Lin has a condescending feeling from the beginning to the end. The protagonist is just a tool for her to climb up, and the protagonist thinks she is a friend. I think friends should not be so cheap. Two people want to communicate but have not communicated, and they are not on the same level. I don't know how these two became friends. Is it quantum entanglement? Or telepathy?
If the purpose of the interstellar era is to develop resources, politicians and capital will not be so eager for quick success. What is the point of raising some people in the interstellar era? Efficiency can only be achieved by using all the people!
The progress is too slow, only one chapter is Braille. Cheluglu said the words again and again. The author needs to pay attention to this. The content feels OK
The writing is okay, but this kind of bad world is still a bit too classic.
Give the author a clear path
When writing about the opposition between old and new martial arts, the logic is not valid. If the old martial arts are more demanding, they will naturally gravitate towards the new martial arts. It will only make you more tired as you write, and the readers will have no sense of empathy. Just write that the protagonist is awesome.
Damn it, forget about the slow updates, there will be no updates for five days...
It's really too risky to read at Qidian. I cut it randomly.
Why do I feel like the beginning of the novel is so similar to another one?
They are all old martial arts and new martial arts, the protagonists are all old martial arts, they are all old streets, they all started in martial arts schools, and even some plot descriptions in the novels are similar.
I voted for the monthly vote and wrote a book seriously.
Personally, I feel like a big contradiction
First of all, the author said that the spirit of old martial arts is to dare to fight and fight hard. There is a sentence in the book that "the principle is to compare whose fist is bigger." So the new star was defeated by the old martial arts, and the old martial arts have set out into the universe? ? Don't some people stay? ? Let Xinwu do whatever he wants? A bit jarring. (The discordant point is that the principle of Jiuwu relies on fighting, so if there is a boss of Jiuwu in Xinxing, he must fight? There is no explanation at the moment, it is unclear. If the boss is killed, Jiuwu cannot have room for survival. If the boss is not dead, then Jiuwu's status will not be so low?) The second one is that the chaebol of the local star suppresses Jiuwu and turns the local star into a cyborg base? ? A chaebol can go to Xinxing because of his merits? But when you went to Xinxing, did you also practice the new martial arts essence or the cyborg? ? ? The protagonist started out using old martial arts because he couldn't afford to practice new martial arts. . Wouldn't it be a good solution to the problem if Xinwu has a lower threshold at the beginning and a higher threshold later on? ? ? Still need to suppress old weapons? ? ? Media brainwashing and free entry? ? The goal of becoming a biochemical base has been achieved.
Looking at the catalog, this book should be a college competition stream.
I haven't watched it for a few days, but I cut it without sending a notice.
Are there any others with similar themes?
It's this kind of competition between new and old stars.
Everyone has different preferences. You can't make every reader like a book. Just write your own style in the field you are best at. I don't know if the author knows that there is an author named Skeleton Elf, who is popular all over the world for his unique skills. He specializes in writing online battle mechas. People like him because he likes several books in a row.
After reading a few chapters, I became addicted and died!
The most annoying thing about this kind of beginning is that the worldview of the old star and the new star is so different that it is as naive as a primary school student 1. The old star is like the current earth, and it is the base camp of mankind under a unified political power 2. Before the discovery of the new star, the technology of the old star (the ancestral star) has also developed to the point of being capable of space navigation. Is it not possible to transform the ancestral star? Or even if you have money and power and most of them are gone, it's impossible for the technology left over from social development to regress, right? Bus? Factory? Now we have a preliminary intelligent system, AI, even when space is still in the moon exploration stage. Food in the United States has actually been able to synthesize protein, carbohydrates, and nutrients that the human body needs for a long time. The price is much cheaper than normal food. 3. As the base camp of mankind, just give up on Ancestral Star? Throughout the history of human development, when new continents and new worlds are found to be rich in resources, priority is given to plundering, occupying, and colonizing, and returning these resources to the motherland (for example, the United Kingdom, which has a small local area, can be said to be an island country connected together. During the Age of Discovery, troops were sent to colonize and plunder. I have never heard of a big Instead, the nobles went to settle in the New World and even immigrated to the New World en masse, leaving their family's local base camp empty. (Nowadays, you don't even have to think about this nonsense. It's completely counter-intuitive. How can a new star be compared to the ancestral star where mankind originated? It's not that it is incapable of transformation and development. 4.