Of Course I Have to Cultivate Immortality After Being Reborn.

It's okay, at least it's not witty, and the villain is quite intelligent, but the number of words is a little short.

I am shameless in order to be more refined. The writing of this book is fluent, the writing is superb, the foot is platinum, the palm is the master, it looks like the jade of Hetian, and listens like the sound of silk and bamboo. The readers are also gentlemen and beauties! ! ! 😏😏

I don't want the author to change his plan (and outline), but I want to say one thing, try not to introduce love scenes between men and women. The heroine telling the truth is optional. If you must have a heroine, write it better, and try not to mix up the male protagonist's quest for immortality in the front, and the author has already programmed that the protagonist will no longer have love between men and women after his second rebirth, so I I sincerely request that the emotional scenes between men and women be downplayed. The emotional scenes between friends can be the focus. To be honest, I haven't read a fairy tale in a long time that has almost no emotional lines between men and women in the first 300 chapters. I hope the author can be a little more unconventional and downplay the emotional scenes between men and women. It won't be too late to arrange the emotional scenes after the male protagonist has improved. This way the rhythm will be easier to control.

Maintain this level, count up the words, and visually inspect the quality of your work! 🐉

Emotional scenes are awkward, so practice and practice.

So powerful, 20,000 words is recommended? 😰

Written last year

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