I Draw My Fate in Douluo

Has the demon from outside the territory come to Qidian to prove the truth?

Look at the introduction, is this destiny? This can barely be regarded as talent, talent, right?

Chaos Divine Sword hahaha, what an ancient name, it reminds me of the Hongmeng Pearl, Taichu Ring hahahaha

This style must be from an outside station 😅

Disadvantages: This is probably the author's first time writing a book. The writing style of the novel is immature and white. The novel is illogical. It is the first time I hunt a wild beast and I hit the target with an intuitive blow. It's awesome. Fighting with Tang San, it was as if Tang San had learned all the martial arts from the Tang sect in his previous life in vain. He could still defeat Tang San with his half-baked free fighting skills. Advantages: No brains, just torturing Tang San, torturing the master, and starting a harem. It's pretty cool when you look at it like this.

Chaos Fairy Sword, if you are a Zhu Tianwen, it feels pretty good. You are a hydrogen man who is limited to the Excavator Continent. Isn't the whole Chaos Fairy Sword a bit outrageous?

Sword of Chaos🤭 Are you embarrassed, the author?

It's a bit poisonous. Tang San is just a double standard, not a playboy.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the protagonist is too ambitious and weak-minded. He pretends to be cool even though he has no strength. He is not the aura of the protagonist and cannot get out of the Holy Soul Village.

Looking at the latest title of Entering Tiandou Academy, the protagonist will not be a nanny for the people of the Tiandou team. Someone has written this before. The protagonist took two or three of the jelly grass that he tried hard to get from Lonely Bo, and shared the rest with the rest of the team. He is really not afraid that the family behind Yu Tianheng will end up killing the protagonist. Someone scolded him in the comment area, and the author even had something to say about developing power and winning over people. Heart, isn't this funny? After Yu Tianheng ate the fairy grass, he was basically the next generation clan leader and would treat his protagonist as a dog. He really thought that his protagonist was very important. Yu Tianheng was not Dai Mubai. Dai Mubai would have died without Tang San. Yu Tianheng would still be able to compete for the clan leader without his protagonist. The funniest thing is that this protagonist even soaked Lonely Yan away, just to win over people's hearts.

There are too many supporting characters in the mentally retarded plot 😅 There is not a single character with normal intelligence in more than 30 chapters.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is almost meaningless. Although it is a cool article, it has some logic. The Iron Sword cannot reach the high-level spirit variety after one evolution. It is at best excellent. The protagonist is a commoner from a poor family. His physique is about average. He is definitely not as good as the nobles and Tang San who has been practicing martial arts since he was a child. How long does it take for you to absorb the first ring for 1,000 years? If you get it as a reward, I won't say anything, just absorb it yourself? Do you think Qian Renxue's god-level martial soul plus the innate level 20 soul power increase dares to absorb the thousand-year-old first ring 😅? Even if your second martial spirit is a god-level martial spirit, you will still die. 1 Small paper cup cannot hold 1 bucket of water🤫

The whole story is just a sword.

This is the third novel similar to Douluo that I have read. Each one has no more than 20 chapters. I don't know if this book will last.

First of all, let's not talk about it before. Awakening the martial spirit together with Tang San and then using the work-study student quota to make him do nothing? Tang Hao's hammer has made people immortal, right? Even for Tang Hao, who has a conspiracy theory, Tang San who has awakened his twin martial spirits is his hope. If you treat his hope like a bull and a horse, it would be weird if he doesn't get beaten to death.

The front has to be changed. Tang San, an adult soul, wouldn't be able to catch the rabbit himself, so he would come to snatch the protagonist? Hunting in the Tang Sect Assassination Book should not be too easy! !

Let's not talk about anything else about the introduction. The name Chaos Divine Sword is really not good. It's embarrassing to see this now.

I feel like these soul rings are a bit confusing. The protagonist's first soul ring is one thousand years old, and his third soul ring is three thousand years. I remember Tang San's third soul ring is two thousand years old. What are you kidding about? It is reasonable for the third soul ring to be at least five to six thousand years, so that the fourth soul ring can be a ten thousand year soul ring. There are benefits to absorbing soul rings beyond the level. In fact, the first ring can last for a thousand years, and the third ring can last for ten thousand years. Just like the configuration of yellow, yellow, purple, purple, black, black, black, and red, the strengthening of the two purple rings will touch the black ring.

Looking at the introduction, where did you, a hunter, come from? In ancient times, people would become hunters only if they had no fields.

Just by looking at the horoscope entry in the introduction, you can tell that this name is a waste and has no appeal at all.

Will you die if you don't write about Holy Soul Village?

That arrangement didn't cure Liu Erlong's love brain? ? ? This is a bit outrageous. After such a good show, Liu Erlong should have clearly seen who Yu Xiaogang is. How could he forgive him? Can you explain the idea and reasons?

I don't know why this book gives me the illusion that I am reading a courtyard house.

I have a question: why did you target Xiao Wu in the first place? Xiao Wu didn't offend the protagonist at first, and it seemed that the protagonist was cruel enough to other Shrek men, so Oscar felt a little innocent. Your protagonist is no different from Tang San, right? Same character, same sanctimoniousness. But you did a good job of torturing Tang San and Yu Xiaogang. I will give you a monthly pass.

The subject matter is good, but the protagonist's actions are too flamboyant.

Let's replace the horoscope with words. Don't make a mistake a mistake.

I recommend the fanfics I wrote. If you are tired of the traditional plot, you can read it. It has logic

There are so many female protagonists that I can't stand it anymore! Qian Renxue is basically on top

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

It's a little more deliberate, this plot