Martial Spirit Sharingan, the Difficulty of Playing with Beasts in Douluo

Author, did you know that Sasuke's three magatama can be microscopic to the millimeter level? Isn't it a joke to improve your eyesight? 🤣

The role of a female character, the introduction is so gross

The author made too many personal assumptions. The Sharingan does not use spiritual soul rings. Instead, he looks for animal soul rings with good eyesight. He explains a lot to prove that this is reasonable, but it is unreasonable no matter how you look at it. No matter how good the eyesight of others is, they are not specialized in eyes. It is outrageous to think that his soul ring can be useful for the eyes.

After arriving at the Qibao Glazed Sect, the writing was very bad and made people feel bad. You might as well join Shrek, at least he won't try to kill you at every turn, and then treat the protagonist as a dog. After arriving at the Qibao, it is destined to look at Ning Rongrong's face, and let the protagonist face dangers that cannot be solved in a short time. It is really irrational.

Can the three magatama defeat the non-spiritual Soul Emperor? It is recommended to wipe the neck. Not to mention that Sharingan genjutsu is not just a pure mental power, but also includes eye power. Just speaking of this mental strength, let alone Yu Hao at the same time, it is not much stronger than Tang San at the same time. Is this the Sharingan?

I'd better write it down before quitting it. I originally posted one but deleted it because of its radical rhetoric. But this kind of low-level fan fiction is really speechless. The more I write it over the years, the more I come back to it. I don't believe this is the second one by the same author. 1. Killing a thousand-year soul beast requires the soul emperor team. 2. The protagonist has just hit 30 and has a team of 60, and he still dares to fight back. He is lucky to be able to use Qibao's identity and exoskeleton to run special. The soul emperor is already a middle-level and high-level brother. I really think it is a mess. You really dare to step on the pitfalls of the original. With the probability of awakening in the original, the soul emperor has nothing behind him, and he leads the team to do it for a thousand years. 3. Such a large space soul guide can be given away on demand. I remember that in the original work, Tang San's was only as big as Bibi Dong's gift. Tens of thousands of gold soul coins were given on demand. Do you know how much this is? 4. The protagonist's character is really a puppet. Do you know why he practices? What kind of boss was the protagonist in his previous life? Work hard when he says it's hard, work hard when he says he's hardworking, pure big robot 5. The idea is obviously good, for example, for the sword part, why not show part of the talent so that the sword can accept disciples, strengthen the protagonist, and get rid of the stalker. The previous words are so clear, I feel that I am really not afraid of death. 6. The first part is not written by the gunman. After 60, the speed of light collapses, but in fact, you can still see the first part with your eyes closed.

It can be seen that the author is very stubborn and belongs to the type of stand-alone writing. Be confident that your withdrawal points will not affect your performance.

Keep it up, be steady, don't look like the skeleton one

It can be seen that the author is very stubborn, and all the comments criticize him, but he still refuses to change his mind.

The plot of a fairy is like a lunatic heading towards the brainless plot that readers want... The protagonist mentioned earlier is very good. How about fighting the soul? It's not all at full strength. I have a bad feeling when I go to the soul hunting group later. What the hell. I'm convinced.

The first part is pretty good, but the second one is not right when it comes to Qibao. The more I write about the protagonist, the more he looks like a dignified bitch. It's awkward no matter how you look at it. I won't talk about the setting of the blood wheel eye. I'll look at the protagonist himself. After all, this thing itself is a second set. It's mainly about the plot. The later stage was too monotonous, as if there was nothing else to write about except licking. His licking was not kneeling licking. I couldn't tell. It was just that the woman had a background and then you showed off your skills around the woman. You wanted to show off but had no strength. Obviously, this plot could not be written.

The plot is almost like a joke, and the reasons given are simply unconvincing. How can a spiritual soul master who is at the peak of the Soul King fight against a Soul Emperor who is not a standard match, still be able to let people escape? Isn't this a joke? What's even more funny is that your hypnotic ability is not a soul ring skill. What does this have to do with the type of soul ring you practice?

To write a cool article, you have to cut this and that, which is unreasonable and which you should be careful about. You are also smart enough to think that your setting is more interesting and reasonable. . . Author, are you from Tomato?

The first part is just okay, the middle is tasteless, and the last part is completely bad The Beginning of Qibao The Third Ring Comment: I only read about forty chapters ago, and now I am suspecting that the author wants to turn the protagonist into a clown...

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20230211225335149","UserId":408541679} Your mental ability is already comparable to the spiritual martial spirit at the peak of the Soul King. How could you let the Soul Emperor break free? Why did Huo Yuhao have such strength in the first place, Soul Emperor, so he could just aim at everything? You don't care about anything and just keep writing. Why don't you come out and explain? The three-hook fish is already a top-notch martial spirit, but you also created a six-hook fish. In this case, you can still let people escape. What reason did you give, how can you convince people?

Forget it, the author, dogs don't believe the words that there are no useless martial souls but only useless soul masters. Are the Dragon Martial Spirit and the Insect Martial Spirit the same in power? No kidding. Whether it is a dragon or an insect is not up to you at all, but it is the same innate soul weapon. Can the dragon spirit and the insect spirit be the same? Or is there no useless martial spirit, and only a useless soul master is a liar?

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20230211225335149","UserId":408541679} You don't want to be hunted down all, just the flower tube from now on. If you really want to create such a disgusting plot, you should stop writing it as soon as possible, I tell you. With the protagonist's strength, how could that Soul Emperor be able to break free? You have your own soul skills. If you have sufficient mental power, you do not have soul ring skills. It has nothing to do with the quality of your soul ring.

…………No, I was persuaded to retreat. The three Magatama Sharingan was actually weakened like this. Keep it up...

The ones starting from 60 are disgusting, but the following ones are still like this and can be deleted.

This is the first time I have seen all negative reviews in the comment section. The author is quite capable of writing like this.

Chapter 44/45, hard to collapse, slipped away

As soon as I clicked on the table of contents and saw the name of the protagonist in the first chapter, I lost 70% of my interest in reading.

Let's take Ye Lengleng as well, I really like this character.

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