
I Build the Shadow Corps in Douluo
我在斗罗打造黑影兵团
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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[Starting Point to Raise Gu King]
The starting point of professional breeding and popular themes to follow the trend Welcome to place a bet, like to see the odds, and click to dislike the odds. Let's see who can survive to the end and become the King of Gu Results of the first issue of 2021.03.18: 108 Books included, 29 books of Eunuch, 16 books of Sanjiang, and one book of Jingjing. King Gu is "Signed in the Cold Palace for Eighty Years, I am Invincible in the World" The ratio of likes and dislikes is roughly consistent with th
Douluo Fan Fine Collection
Focus on collecting excellent Douluo Dalu fan works Inclusion conditions: Works with an average subscription volume of 2,000 or above/Top 50 works on the new book list/Other works with good reputation Welcome to recommend Douluo fan works that are already on the shelves~
It's Rare to Have Pen and Ink Written Down
The wind below you carries the clouds, and the sky shines through the clouds. This jade pendant expresses purity, while the sun and moon hide in shame and go alone. The infinite spring breeze produces green eyebrows, and the sound of bells can be heard far away across the moraine. My heart is mysterious and far away, but egrets are flying here, and the long river is not clear enough to wash away its fragrance. How can I be jealous that the beauty is like a painting, the rain of flowers is light
Douluo#bad#panlong
Recommended by conscience, I am currently reading it
Douluo Dalu Fan
Most Douluo Dalu fans are extremely poisonous. One way to judge is that if the protagonist seriously studies his martial arts, upgrades seriously, and improves himself, then he is probably a good fan.
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A rare piece of fine Douluo writing, not brainless, not exaggerated, but logical. Come on, author. More updates.
It is recommended to run away after watching it for free. The protagonist acts like a person with no emotional intelligence and kicks his teammates in the face (similar to the author) It's okay to kick the heroine Duguyan in the face at the beginning. After all, the plot is really unfamiliar as it is written, and it has the effect of establishing authority ( In fact, I really complained about it. Since the protagonist wants to keep growing, he even kicks Dugu Yan in the face. Fortunately, you wrote it with your own pen. If you put it in a normal situation, someone will definitely explain the situation to Dugu Bo, or Dugu Yan should be more careful. I made a small report, and I was immediately lit as a sky lantern) Later, I teamed up with Dugu Yan to fight the combination of Yu Tianheng and Ye Lingling. It was obvious that they were teammates. They defeated Ye Lingling out of the venue and kicked him in the face. It was obviously written by him. No, it's a matter of emotional intelligence. This is a teammate. Isn't it enough to kick him out by kicking him in the butt or kicking him in the waist? Readers of other normal comments about Yin Yang said: Ouch, the soul master is so powerful. What should I do if something goes wrong with the five internal organs? Those readers thought that the author was answering them seriously, but they foolishly asked if kicking the head wouldn't cause a concussion? Why, the author just wants to write about the protagonist beating a woman. What can you do? Or do you just want to slap your wife in the face, for fear that your future wife will not be disfigured? You are just readers, and you can't control the pen in your hand anyway That's it, I'm busy anyway. , Read it for free and go out to watch it. Hey, that's called an authentic (all white female ticket), I just don't spend a dime to pass the time, thank you (I guess some author will delete the post and ban me if he is not convinced? Hahaha, I'm waiting)
It felt good before, but recently the plot of giving elixir feels a bit too silly. Judging from the protagonist's current position, Yu Tianheng should be considered an enemy from now on. The author's explanation is that it is unkind to send Ye Lingling alone, so the protagonist goes to the enemy just to save face? It should not be just Yu Tianheng. If the protagonist does not have the ability to win over his current teammates, then all the elixirs given out now will be to cultivate future enemies for himself. Neither the sect nor the nobles can possibly side with the protagonist, right? So why does the protagonist give the elixir? He went to the enemy for the sake of face, and he used magical elixirs. Doesn't the author think that this makes the protagonist very brainless?
Chapter 216
I don't think it's necessary to deliberately write about hitting a woman with fists or kicking her in the face. I just need to simply write about kicking her out of the venue. If I keep writing like this, it will make me think that the protagonist has some psychological problems. I said earlier that no matter who the jelly grass and women belong to, it will be uncomfortable if they are given to others, and then they will be crazy and crit monsters, right?
Is this book a novel called My Martial Spirit is a Shadow? Is this book the author's test of the waters? Has he started working on it now?
Is there any shadow crocodile that can hurt the shadow and hurt the body?
Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
. . . . I feel like I've seen it elsewhere, and it feels like I copied it.
The new plot actually saved Tang San, I felt like I was going to die from poison🙃
I haven't read a chapter, but I saw that the comment section was very quarrelsome, but you don't hit someone in the face, and you don't expose someone's shortcomings when you scold them. These two are the easiest to hold grudges. You said it would be fine if Dugu Bo didn't exist, but that bastard keeps grudges.
It's getting more and more poisonous now. It doesn't take a lot of time to learn these and other methods of refining medicine and poisoning. If you want a list of immortal products, just exchange them directly. If you want to solve the problem of Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan's poison, wait until you become a god. God will give you a wave without any problems. There is something in Dugu Yan's ice and fire eyes. The earth dragon and golden melon should allow snakes to evolve. Don't forget, Qian Renxue can quickly become a god after returning to the Spirit Hall. Bibi Dong is already on the way to becoming a god. Tang San's growth path has also begun. The protagonist also wants to spend a lot of time learning to refine medicine and poison. Isn't this putting the cart before the horse?
It feels more in line with my image of Ye Lenglen
Your plot is more or less disgusting 😅. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is extremely low. Why do your own teammates do such a heavy hand? Moreover, there are too many yy elements 😅 and later it is forced to be related to Wuhun Palace 😰
The author talks about the nine-headed bat king's soul ring. What do you plan to do with it? How about a soul beast that can parasitize level 99 quasi-god Tang Chen? It won't be much worse, so with the interference of the Rakshasa God, you shouldn't be able to get a nine-winged soul bone that can be resurrected nine times, right? This type of soul bone should not be written by your wild imagination. I look forward to your wild imagination and write a different external soul bone.
There are many books written by fellow Douluo people saying that Tang San's outlook on life was incorrect and he was so accurate in reading people! But the protagonist in the fanfic actually has more crooked views, setting a new lower limit
I'm speechless. It's so vicious. You can understand that others have scolded the protagonist to death, the protagonist has no temper at all, and the author is terrible at word count.
And I found that your word count is very high. Sometimes when I listen to it, I don't even feel that it's fake.
I don't understand at all why I have to waste the soul ring given by the system when hunting a century-old soul beast? Wouldn't it be enough to just go find a team to help hunt soul beasts?
I specially rewarded you with a monthly pass for the comments. First give me a rating, between 7-7.5. (I give 8 points for the one about Douluo Thunder and the one about electric blue silver grass) Let's talk about the flaws first. The setting of this book is very strange. What's so strange about it? The author always writes a lot of space directly to the introduction, which makes people unable to understand. Some parts of the plot also lack some logic. I can't say why it is strange. I feel that some parts can be mentioned in one stroke, but he has written a lot, which makes it very complicated to read. Advantages: The writing style is better than most Douluo fans. I can only say that it is better. After all, it is still ➕splendid. I can't think of other ones at the moment. When some people complained about the poisonous points in the last chapter review, the author always put on a posture of whether he liked it or not. Let's talk about these first.
Want to be more refined🙂
Why can't I find your new book? Changed your name?
Author, why don't you write a sequel to the first book?
Will the next book be Dou Yi or Dou Two?
The black light virus that killed the original form, various viruses from Resident Evil, the most famous one is the Sun Staircase Progenitor Virus. The g-virus and the T-virus, as well as the Godzilla monster universe, the g-cells on Godzilla, and the destruction spores of DC's first Doomsday in ancient times. Authors can search for these to broaden their horizons and increase the upper limit of the progress that the protagonist of your new book can make
Ma, I suggest that the protagonist of the next book add an ability to him, which is the Ultraman Space Alien Beast. Their vitality is so exaggerated. If one of them is divided into 1,000 parts, 1,000 identical ones will be born. Even if there is only one tiny cell left, they can be regenerated and resurrected. Moreover, the resurrected guy can copy the fighting method of the thing that killed him and share it within the body. There is only one way to eliminate the alien beast, which is to kill it at the molecular level. There is a famous scene in Prototype of Killing where a monster crawls out of its blood with a bullet. Do you understand what I mean? Combine these two abilities and then strengthen them to create a violent force. There is also the Dark Lord in Happy Star Cat. You can search for his abilities. Even corpses can be resurrected, but there is no original memory. This kind of resurrection is not the same as the undead and is completely different from the undead. The Dark Lord's power allows even inorganic objects to become his, and his subordinates, even robots, can be contaminated.
Author, will you update the book or continue the sequel to this book? Okay, how many months have you been working overtime? By the way, why hasn't your body arrived yet?
A new book is being written, but when will it be released?
Author, will the new book add two neighboring planes next to Douluo World? Will the Divine Seal Throne and Dzi Bead Transformation add some plot? There are many things in these two worlds that cannot be taken away. We are evil gods.
Author, protagonist of new book. I started with the Evil Soul Master, mainly because I think a different start is more interesting.