
Mortal: Starting from Preaching in the Sea of Chaotic Stars
凡人:从乱星海传道开始
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- Completed
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- 97k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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You might as well create the Jie Sect and call yourself the Master of Tongtian. There is no distinction between teachings. The more disciples you have, the stronger you will be.
What the hell is Feng Leibing? The rules you follow when you travel to a mortal world will not have this kind of spiritual root.
For novels with this kind of thinking, if you don't want to be a prisoner, you need to be fast-paced.
Shennong
I won't comment on how I wrote it before. The most important thing is how I wrote the first small goal after Han Li came out. If you haven't read the book and read the setting in Chapter 1, you can jump directly to Chapters 12 and 13 where the protagonist comes into contact with Han Li. It's not too late to run after reading it.
If you write about thirty chapters of your book, it will basically decide whether your results will be good or not. It depends on whether you can grasp it. The current trend is towards bad results.
Why do you, a mortal, have no heroine?
The protagonist's name was changed from "Xu Xin" to "Lu Yi"
The name "Xu Xin" is slightly younger and more modern, while "Lu Yi" is more in line with the Xianxia worldview.
Let's discuss the female characters in Mortal with you in advance.
Because the plot of "Purple Spirit" will be written soon, and there are many fans of Purple Spirit, I thought of discussing the female characters in Mortal in advance here. The female characters involved in the previous part of Mortals mainly include: Han Yunzhi, Chen Qiaoqian, Nangong Wan, Dong Xuan'er... These female characters can be roughly divided into class-wise: Han Yunzhi (common class); Chen Qiaoqian, Nangong Wan, Dong Xuan'er (upper class women) >Or more detailedly divided into: Han Yunzhi (plain girl); Chen Qiaoqian, Dong Xuan'er (beautiful girl); Nangong Wan (goddess) I once said in a book that Han Yunzhi was the first or even the only woman Han Li "loved", but she was sprayed all over her body... Actually, I have my own reasons. Of course Han Li would not just regard Han Yunzhi as his little sister, otherwise he would not kiss her involuntarily. The reason why Han Li likes Han Yunzhi is because at that stage, Han Li could only come into contact with women of Han Yunzhi's class; At least Han Li thought so in his subconscious, and he also felt in his subconscious that he could be worthy of her. So Han Li's "love" for Han Yunzhi is relatively simple, it is the love of love. As for Chen Qiaoqian and Dong Xuan'er, Han Li's feelings are more complicated and even antagonistic. On the one hand, I long for possession, but in my heart I know that it is unrealistic, so I show disdain, and in my heart I dare to imagine a moment of surpassing it. When it comes to Nangong Wan, Han Li's feelings become simple again, that is, complete fantasy; It is a dream after all... This is because the class gap between Nangong Wan and Han Li at that time was so big that they could be described as people who were not in the same world at all. In the middle period, the main female characters in the mortal world include: Yuan Yao (Yanli is considered the partner), Zi Ling, Ling Yuling... And these three people also represent three different classes, namely the plain girl, the charming girl and the goddess. Among them, "Purple Spirit" is the most controversial! Interpret the character "Zi Ling" from a personal perspective and compare it with others. (Because it is a personal opinion, please correct me if there is any inappropriateness) First of all, it must be clear that an important point in historical materialism is that events cannot be discussed in isolation from the specific environment! Only by clarifying this point can we explain why Yue Fei was recalled by the gold medal instead of rebelling, and why Song Jiang risked his life to become an official... Because under the historical environment at that time, loyalty to the emperor was "right", and this was not based on personal will! Let's change here: Zi Ling is in the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the weak. Using its own advantages, it cannot be judged simply on the basis of right and wrong... In fact, sometimes, right and wrong are not fixed! Using the same advantage, many readers are not so disgusted with "Yuan Yao"; Using the same advantage, most readers are unanimously disgusted with "Dong Xuan'er"; This is actually contradictory to the feelings for "Ziling". If you support Yuan Yao, there is no need to be too disgusted with Zi Ling; If you also support Zi Ling, there is no need to be disgusted with Dong Xuan'er; To put it bluntly, the way they act is only different in degree, and there is no essential difference in nature. To put it bluntly, in such a specific environment, Zi Ling wanted to change his class and make proper use of his own advantages. This was not a big mistake! (Of course, I personally can't stand it, but don't imitate me. I'm a loser, and I'm a lower class than you readers. The beautiful girl in your eyes is already a goddess to me, so I can despise her as much as I want to gain a self-righteous sense of moral superiority...) Having said that, in the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the strong, under such a specific environment, Zi Ling has no better way to change the class. Her background is better than Yuan Yao, so she has more means than Yuan Yao and knows how to climb up step by step; On the contrary, Yuan Yao does not have the same knowledge and experience as her, and only knows how to use her little advantages, but does not know how to use the weaknesses and rules of human nature. Such a comparison makes Yuan Yao more "chaste", and even makes people feel pity and indignation towards the world of immortality. After all, if a weak woman wants to live a better life, all she can do is sell herself. What a realistic and even cruel world this is! When it comes to Zi Ling, "hypocritical moral gentlemen" like me can criticize as much as they want. "What a despicable woman she is. In order to live a better life, she uses her body to seduce men again and again. Bah, despicable!" (Just like in reality, while watching sexy news such as golf and cursing despicable; Watching it with relish and fantasizing about what would happen if One of the protagonists has replaced herself... It's really double happiness! ) In fact, in the world of immortal cultivation where the jungle is strong, it is unlikely that Zi Ling will have a better choice as long as she wants to climb up; and what she wants to fight for is what Nangong Wan and Ling Yuling were born with. Of course you can say that if Zi Ling is content with the status quo and practices hard on his own... It will actually be difficult, because that goes against human nature. After all, immortal cultivators are also human beings, and as long as they are human beings, it is difficult to break away from "upwardness", which is the most important characteristic of being a human being; Otherwise, behaviors including abdication, not bowing down for five buckets of rice, and sacrificing one's life for righteousness will not be given such a high meaning by society. The above is roughly the same. I personally think Ling Yuling's portrayal is a bit of a failure. In other words, Wangda should have been like a young author like me. It is difficult to depict characters outside of cognition, just like I depict the emperor holding a golden hoe. (Personal understanding, just guessing) There should be a Baohua in the later stage, who is also on the same level as a goddess. But I have been reading it for so long that I have almost forgotten it. If I write it down, I will have to make up for it by then. Another digression. There are many times when we really have to think based on the specific environment, and thinking must be considered from two aspects: human nature and social rules. I talked a lot here and there, mainly because I was afraid that the way I would describe things later, especially the way the protagonist treats Zi Ling, would not be in line with everyone's expectations. To put it bluntly, I am still afraid that people will scold me! (Although I know that readers all have their own thinking ability. Unlike me, I can only vent my emotions, but I still have to take precautions.) Although I am thick-skinned, if you want to scold me, I still hope you can scold me lightly. Finally, the Chinese New Year is coming soon, and I would like to give you a first nod and wish you all a Happy New Year in advance!
There is a problem with the settings
You set three Xuantian treasures, why do you have to start from the lowest level? For example, Dao Huang Kai withstood the strongest blow of his level. Wouldn't it make you useless if someone of a higher level hits you? As a treasure, you should have the ability to take on the boss and have low requirements for the bottom line. The setting is too clear and too rigid. Even the most powerful magic weapons in online games have special effects.