Mortal: Start by Becoming Senior Brother Lu

Funny article, the only highlight is killing Han Li and Nangong Wan, but in the end you kill the original Han Li when you switch hands. Then you put your name on it and you become a fan? Can it still be written like this?

I think people who come to see Mortal Fans come here to interact with the old devil. You destroyed the old devil in the early stage. I guess the subsequent plot will follow the same path as the old devil in the original place. There is nothing interesting. It is better to watch the old devil in the original place.

Most of the mortal fandoms are obsessed with Nangong Wan, and a small number of them have no intersection with each other. The male protagonist of this book kills her without even blinking👍

This author has written several books, and each of them is lasting and all the eunuchs are not interesting.

If you don't practice the exercises that have reached the stage of transformation into gods, but practice a set of exercises created in the foundation-building stage, can the exercises created in the two realms of transformation into gods and foundation-building stages be the same? The gap between them is as big as a primary school student and a top professor in the industry. They have different thinking structures from the most basic concepts of exercises. This is too much to complain about. You already have a little green bottle, why are you joining the Chen family? Is this really powerless to complain about, or does the author himself want to get married? Please understand the grievances you feel after getting married. In addition, you have a Taoist companion, so the small green bottle cannot be used frequently, and you have to open up a secret medicinal field, which is useless even on rainy nights. This directly semi-wastes the biggest advantage. I accepted it. The author obviously has not graduated from college. This is all bullshit and dog-licking thinking.

The protagonist's decision to kill Nangong and Han Li in the forbidden area to obtain the small green bottle is very decisive and full of novelty, but there are also many flaws. The protagonist of Fenglinggen is forced to practice the Qingyuan Sword Art. The original book clearly states that Feng hope senses that Han Limu has strong attributes (three-turn heavy element). The author of this book believes that the Qingyuan Sword Art can be practiced with any attribute by saying "many disciples in the valley practice it." When the protagonist established the foundation immediately after entering the Scarlet Forbidden Land (a few years faster than Han Li in the original work), all the pseudo-spiritual roots of Han Li before leaving Tiannan had been cultivated to the late-stage foundation-building stage. The protagonist, who had a foreign spiritual root and had a small green bottle, estimated that his fastest cultivation progress would be in the middle-stage of foundation-building, and he thought that at most it would be the mid-stage Great Perfection. Are you a five-spirit root or a foreign-spirit root?

The only highlight was the killing of Han Li Nangong. After that, the plot just followed the plot. Changing the protagonist's name was not new.

666 Kills the male and female protagonists and is not afraid of being reported and taken off the shelves 😂

He was worse than Han Li when he snatched the little green bottle. When he was fighting the blood jade spider, he was taken advantage of by the old monster Qiong who took away the second level Suanni.

1. The protagonist killing Han Li is great, but there are problems with handling it. I remember that Han Li did not bring the little green bottle in the original novel. Secondly, when he killed Nangong Wan, he should give up Nangong Wan's things, because you don't know if your storage bag will be checked when you go out. It is too risky. You have to know that as long as the Hiding Moon Sect's Jiedan and several other Jiedan make up for some resources, there will definitely be a Jiedan that agrees to search the storage bag 2. The subsequent plot is similar to Han Li, which is not interesting 3. How dare you expose the Mo Jiao materials. The people of the Hidden Moon Sect know that they died at the Mo Jiao. Isn't it obvious that you brought out the Mo Jiao materials

Killing both men and women while they are having fun is considered novel, but the follow-up becomes boring 😰

Author, what do you think? Let's discuss it. You think there is no problem with Star Palace being unreliable, but you need to marry on the territory of monsters like Biling Island? Do you think the protagonist Yu Ying can't attract the transformed monster? A bad fight between the two sides would expose the mineral vein. The Inner Star Sea is so big and you don't want to make a knot. Even if you think that the islands in the Inner Star Sea have enough aura, there are people occupying a place that is as big as the Outer Star Sea. You won't change it? Do you have to form a knot in the protagonist's exclusive gold mine?

I don't want to see the Big Eye Technique anymore when I see it. How about a technique created by a mere monk named Empress Yuan, and there are still a bunch of people treating it as a treasure? And the Big Eye Technique can only resist charm in the first four levels. Use more magic weapons and magic weapons, but the magic weapons and magic weapons are not too many. One powerful one is enough. It means that the Big Eye Technique is only used to resist charm. Just compile a book of exercises and it will be fine. As for the puppets, they are just heretics, and Big Eyes only dares to bully monks with poor family backgrounds.

This book is more interesting than what I said. The main character tricks Han Lao Mo to get his treasure in different ways. Even if Han Lao Mo dies, it's still a joke, especially now that anime is so popular.

Yes, unlike other authors, they have to take care of this and that. No matter what the protagonist is, a dead protagonist is not a protagonist.

Get rid of Nangong Wan. Anyone who comes out of the Bloody Forbidden Land without any background will have to die. Those who have a background will have to use the Heart-Question Talisman and the Ecstasy. You have to know that the Bloody Forbidden Land is full of qi training disciples and they are worthless. It's totally fine for the Hidden Moon Sect to go through it at some cost. Don't say that there is nothing you can do about it. With Xiangzhili's character, you can escape by yourself without taking care of it. Everyone else who enters the Bloody Forbidden Land will be finished. The protagonist is no exception.

Mortal flow also talks about invincibility 🤭

Overall, it's okay. This isn't really licking Chen. It's not much better than those licking Han Li next door. Worth a look

What you wrote is worse than changing it directly to Seizing the Body and Han Li cultivating immortality according to the original work.

The only bright spot is that the protagonist kills Han Li and Nangong Wan without hesitation and grabs the little green bottle. The rest can be written however he wants. The plot and logic cannot withstand scrutiny.

I read this book today. All I can say is that the author thinks too much. How many golden elixirs does Yue have in total? A golden elixir died in the Bloody Forbidden Land. The ancestor of Nascent Soul did not respond. Moreover, it is a golden elixir that promises the Nascent Soul. It can be said that every disciple who comes out of it has to be soul-searched. After all, there are three sects of the Nascent Soul. Such an important person died. He will not care about other sects. The protagonist must die.

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment!

It's just that there are too few updates, and one update a day is too short. Like next door, there are 3 and 4 updates every day, that's what it's like to watch

The highlight is killing Han Li and Nangong Wan, nothing else. . .

The natal magic weapon is an auxiliary space magic weapon. It is quite novel and interesting. It can be used for collecting treasures like the Flower Basket Ancient Treasure and income similar to the Race Bag.

The protagonist kills Han Li, and then takes the same route as Han Li, but it is even less able to withstand scrutiny.

The first part was fine, except for the explanation period, I didn't watch it at all. Because you didn't pay attention to improving your cultivation later on.