The Immortal Longevity Clan: I Have an Immortal Alchemy Cauldron

If you're going to copy a mortal's cultivation story, at least copy some of its strengths. I remember that at the beginning, the mortal's cultivation story didn't make much progress for a long time because the protagonist was a native and the pacing was slow. Is having a native protagonist a significant advantage? Does it offer any irreplaceable advantages or necessity for the narrative structure? Does the fact that the protagonist isn't a native mean your novel's premise is flawed?

There should be limits to how overpowered the cheat system is; it shouldn't be too ridiculously overpowered.

If you, with your five spiritual roots, reach the Foundation Establishment stage, I, as a Golden Core expert, will have to perform a soul search. If I figure out the method, it will be a benefit to your descendants. (The protagonist dies)

In various clan-based cultivation systems, the focus is on nurturing geniuses, primarily based on their spiritual roots and aptitude. Without talent, only technique will get you to a late-stage level at best; you'll never reach the higher levels. It's all about strength; those with exceptional talent usually work alone. Okay, you've gone off-topic in your clan-based novel.

A mortal cultivation path is acceptable, but constantly clinging to a family-based path is not. You can become powerful, repay your family, make it the strongest, and then leave it to your own devices, living as a free spirit. Do you really expect to lead your entire family to ascension? (Terrifying!)

When people write about cultivating immortality, they always use terms like magic tools, spiritual tools, magic treasures, and spiritual treasures.

It's exceptionally well-written. The early battle descriptions are on par with Wang Yu's *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*. Spells, magical artifacts, talismans, puppets, divine sense, and body cultivation are all beautifully showcased, and their interactions flow smoothly and naturally. It's not just a tedious, repetitive leveling-up story. A masterpiece in the *mortal cultivation* genre, easily scoring 95+!

I think it's very well written. I love reading this kind of novel, and I've been subscribing to it for a long time.

Please feel free to comment and share any opinions you may have.

Author Lao Deng, please remember I wrote two posts criticizing you for always acting like a spoiled dad. Even with the sect raising children, the posts weren't deleted, and the character development and drama... Given that the plot development was written quite well, it's now exploding on Qidian.