Starting from the Tiger Demon Yaksha, He Begins to Grow Demons and Live Forever.

There are flaws, but it's okay Safety: No major flaws but not enjoyable enough, the plot is old-fashioned but smooth  It is easy for new authors to start high and go low, and they need to practice more The classic plots in the early stage are gone away from the martial arts arcade. To be honest, I have tasted a lot of them. They are like assembly line industrial products, good or bad Now the second map has just arrived with more than 100 chapters. The author wants to use mythology, but is pessimistic about the author's plot design ability, but the plot rhythm is okay. The following is a subjective assumption The plot tension is not enough (pretending to be cool and being slapped in the face is not fun enough), and the new author basically writes the best on the first map, but then it wilts. All I can say is that the author should not just copy the script of "go away" and learn how other people write to show off and slap in the face. The core of the Yakuza-ryu upgrade flow is the cool writing. It's cool to upgrade violently, it's cool to ravage the enemy with big muscles, and it's cool to resolve the core contradiction of the plot. Just feel good and that's it. Don't worry about your unpopular mythical story. No one cares about it. I hope the author will focus on polishing the plot (write a good article that is good). Now that I see it, I feel that this book is gradually becoming boring. The two gods who appear are too high-level, which seriously reduces the tension and excitement of the protagonist's actions. The conflict between the villain monk and the protagonist is completely useless. I don't know what the author thinks, but what is the main contradiction of the protagonist now? There is no enemy, no crisis, and the protagonist can fight in the ring. The two gods blow their breath and it will be gone. Both gods are nervous, and the protagonist cannot participate. As for watching two old men competing for their apprentices, I can only say that I am totally impressed. No malice, I just want to communicate with the author and see what the author thinks. After all, I can't understand it.

I hope the author sticks to his own ideas and doesn't let the protagonist change his appearance just because others say he is ugly, okay? The protagonist obviously looks so cool and looks like he is not a minor character at first glance. If he really changes his appearance and becomes the popular face in the novel, the characteristics will be gone.

How can I put it this way? The main character changed from a majestic appearance to a male and female character. It really made me feel like I had a breath in my chest that I couldn't breathe out. What a Jidao-ryu you did.

Why are there so many twists and turns in becoming a disciple? Why bother if you don't have to become a disciple after spending half a day?

I have been chasing here in the past few days. I will tell you when I see this. In fact, before Taiyi and Budai monks accepted disciples, it was really written into my heart. They were decisive in killing, repaying kindness and revenge. Not the Holy Mother, they have been working hard, but after rushing to accept disciples, they were given peerless skills and top-notch magic weapons. The future master was so awesome, and the sect behind them was powerful. It gave me a personal feeling that it was basically complete. It just depends on how you choose to succeed. Success is really easy, just like going upstairs. I used to go up step by step, but now I am taking the elevator, and then suddenly I lost the motivation to read, and it lost 90% of its appeal to me. Of course, this is for me personally. The author's writing style and upgraded settings, professional vocabulary, and professional skills are really solid. It is indeed a good book. See you again in the future. Maybe I will read it occasionally in the future.

Foretell a wave. Now the protagonist in the book is practicing both Buddhism and Taoism. Buddhism is temporarily ahead in Taoism, but the connection with Taoism has not been broken. In addition, the fundamental Buddhist Dharma that the protagonist currently practices, "The Supreme Secret Nana Sutra," is incomplete. Based on the origin of the legend of Nezha, make a blind guess. In the later stage, when there is no way forward, the protagonist will create his own fundamental method! Just like in the legend of Nezha, the Buddhist protector god General Yacha evolved into the great god of Santan Haihui. When the protagonist finally creates his own fundamental method, he will also change his path from Buddha, and the fundamental demon will change from "Yaksha General" to "Three Tan Haihui Great God"

Even if I want to write something new of my own, I still have to rely on the old stuff, which feels awkward!

The story in the county town is a classic plot. The tension is well created and very attractive. When I first entered the county town, I felt that the old enemy who introduced Zhang Lishi at the beginning was trying to recreate the plot of the county town, but the author took a different approach and wrote the story of two masters competing for their apprentices. The plot of competing for apprentices was somewhat interesting at first, but a lot of the perspective was focused on the two masters, and the protagonists were too relaxed, making it bland to read. I have been writing about the secret skills that the protagonist has developed and how much his cultivation has improved, but he cannot show it. I originally thought that the rebels were going to go on a killing spree in Lincheng, but it ended very easily. Recently, the protagonist has to cultivate multiple deities, which is a bit like the protagonist in old novels. He wants everything and knows everything. It is very comprehensive and feels like the word count is low. The various settings of the author are very good, and the writing style is also good, but the plot feels like Cunzhi to me. I have practiced a lot of unique skills in the past and have been accumulating. I thought it was going to explode, but it suddenly ended very dull.

She has golden fingers in the extreme realm, but she is indeed a super mother-in-law when doing things.

I have been chasing the two big guys who are vying to recruit disciples, but they are practicing Buddhism and Taoism, which is a bit nondescript. The two world views and understandings at the bottom are different, so they can't get along.

The ugly and vicious protagonist is bullied by the little Yakuza. . . It's not like the little gangster has no eyesight.

A nine-year-old child who has no parents should be sensible. This book is a bit naive and the protagonist has no abilities. In ancient times, common people, regardless of whether they were boys or girls, as long as they were good-looking, were definitely the target of people and gangs. I don't understand why the protagonist wanted to take his younger brother to the theater. The theater is a crowded place, unless the protagonist joins a powerful person at that time. It's a good force, otherwise it would just be a meat bun beating a dog. The protagonist's personal behavior in time travel is very childish. He knows that his brother's appearance is to blame, so why is he pure and innocent? Children in ancient times are not good-looking. Just search on the Internet and you will find that rural children and urban children have poor appearance. This is not the difference between modern society and peace in ancient times.\

Li Cunxiao was favored by Zhang Lishi as his assistant in the early stage, which is nothing. After that, they kept saying that Li Cunxiao's character and style of conduct were appreciated by Zhang Yuelu, Li Shi, Cui Wei and Cui Yao, which gave people the impression that he cared about other people's evaluations. You say that Li Cunxiao is loyal and loyal at heart, and he has been taking advantage of this to gain benefits; you say that this is a performance, giving people the impression that he has been acting as a good grandson to the superior (Li Shi) for profit, which is very awkward anyway. In Jidao Tianmo, Lu Sheng was favored by the old leader of the Red Whale Gang for the passing position because of his outstanding talent and killed the deputy gang leader. The reason why the deputy gang leader was killed was because the deputy gang leader was picking on Lu Sheng. The two causes and effects are different. Li Cunxiao performed for the appreciation of the superior, while Lu Sheng killed the deputy gang leader simply because the deputy gang leader was targeting him, and by the way gained the appreciation of the superior (it's better if there is one, it doesn't matter if there isn't, I'm in trouble anyway). Also, Ye Chengxiao and Shen He also relied on Li Cunxiao's performance to let Zhang Lishi have a negative view of Ye Chengxiao and Shen He. Does Li Cunxiao have no power? He still needs to rely on public opinion to deal with the kidnapping villain. This is just like a palace fight. Wouldn't it be better to just go up and beat him to death? I feel like it's not handled well here.

I have a younger brother... His start is very routine... Can Shen Nong tell me about the follow-up?

After typing, I took cold medicine and my head felt dizzy. After reading the recently updated chapters, book friends have doubts. Let me explain briefly. First of all, the relationship between the protagonist and Nezha was not something I made up for the sake of hot spots. As you will know from the introduction, my outline was set up like this from the beginning. Secondly, I did not write about Taiyi Zhenren and Budai Monk to save trouble. They can be used as soon as they are captured. In the later stage, they will not be mixed with characters from Journey to the West and Apotheosis of the Gods to cause a big fight. Some book friends mentioned the issue of mythology. This is the key - mythology changes with the times. The well-known Nezha is the Taoist protector god in the Ming and Qing Dynasties, and the well-known Li Tianwang is Laodeng who holds the pagoda. However, this was not the case in the Song and Yuan dynasties, or even in the earlier Tang dynasty. I want to show something new, so you will see in the book the Taoist external alchemy and Tantric deity practice that were prominent in the Tang Dynasty. I have researched prototypes of these. Why does Nezha look so vicious in this book? Because as a Dharma protector, he was originally the Yaksha general under the command of King Bishamon. He was the leader of the heretic ghosts and gods, and was the "King of Naga ghosts and gods" and the "Wrathful Naga". Why does Nezha have three heads and six/eight arms? Because this is the appearance of the wrathful Buddha in Tantra, such as the five great kings, which symbolizes the great power and supernatural power to subdue demonic obstacles. Taiyi and Monk Qizi also have their own archetypes in religion, mythology and even historical figures, which will be shown one by one in the following books. Adaptation is not random making up, and drama is not nonsense. I will work hard to code and create a story that satisfies everyone (salute)

There are flaws, but they are few and acceptable. The protagonist kills decisively. The author's writing style is also good, especially in describing the characters. Especially the part between the protagonist, who only knows how to practice and eat every day, reminds me of another book that I rarely read recently.

The book is good, but I don't know if it's an illusion. The Buddhist teachings are too much for the mind to learn, and I can't have much sense of empathy. In addition, the general environment of black Buddha is not as deep into people's hearts as the Taoist teachings! To put it simply, Buddhism is too confusing! There is also Buddhism for worshiping the Buddha, and Taoism for self-cultivation! Reading novels is not to worship Buddha, Taoism can be used to cultivate yourself and become an immortal! An old bookworm's perspective, my personal opinion!

The plot is quite exciting, but the protagonist is too ugly. His master wants to find a partner for him, and he still feels good about himself. It is normal for his senior sister Zhang Yuelu not to like him. I wonder if a normal person would be willing to find an ugly partner?

This book is really weird. It is obviously better than many recommended books, but it has always been lukewarm.

Your back is so broken. I can't stand it at all.

The settings are too vague. Goldfinger charging all depends on the author's ideas. I feel like I'll just fill in the plot when it's about to come, and I'll overwhelm the protagonist before it's over. It's better to stick strictly to the data. What's even more humorous is that killing animals will rob all the evil energy. As a result, killing monsters is not as good as eating monsters in bulk. It's too stressful. On the surface, it seems that the protagonist is more powerful, but in fact it inhibits Gua from being invincible to a genius (relatively speaking in a small place), and the writing power cannot control Gua.

It's not unreasonable that it's not popular, it's really not good, the writing is messy

Three altars, Haihui, Subduing Demonic Pestle? Nezha converted to Buddhism?

At first, ordinary people had ill intentions towards the protagonist. After being killed, Goldfinger absorbed the energy. Then he said that killing monsters has energy, but humans and monsters are different. People's malice is subjective, whether they have enemies or not, but monsters are objective. They not only eat the protagonist, they also eat humans, and even monsters can eat each other. You want to say that you only absorb those that have ill intentions towards you. When a demon eats someone else, if you kill it, it will have energy. You said that others can kill you but you can't absorb it. Others can kill demons but you can gain energy by eating meat. Then this energy can be cleared. This energy is poison when eaten by others. The protagonist eats the golden finger to recharge it. This logic is too far-fetched and I can't stand it anymore.

The great master and Lingbao talked about it in a garish way, and his expressiveness is too poor, and he has no real character.

It's rare to come across a novel that satisfies your appetite. It's refreshing but not a mindless and relaxing snack. The protagonist of the latest chapter also has a sense of urgency. I caught up with the latest chapters in one go. It's rare to come across such a novel that appeals to my appetite.

12 Votes are given, can it be refined

I don't understand why the grades are so bad. I'm a little bit cautious about the one next door. The author's vocabulary is pitiful. The monthly subscription is 2000+, but this one is only 360.

Can't the author even update twice a day?

The first time I chased after writing collapsed