Douluo: I, the Sun God

The plot is old-fashioned, the characters in the plot have no brains, Ning Fengzhi is not as smart as the protagonist, and the other two Douluo also have no brains?

Author, could you please revise it? What you, Ning Fengzhi, wrote has nothing to do with the city. I know you want to write that kind of effect, but what do you think of Ning Fengzhi, his wife, and the two elders?

The latest plot: Ning Fengzhi wants to explode Xiao Wu's gold coins, but Xiao Wu sacrifices Tang San and can withdraw.

Write Ning Fengzhi like a child

Just use the flame martial spirit. Just go to the sun. People open low and slowly strengthen. You can go high and go low.

How does a god who can't stand the temperature of 80 degrees resist the sun riding on his face🤣

I can't stand it. Except for the main character's IQ, the rest of them don't even have brains. I can't believe that Douluo has lost his brain. Although this is a Douluo who can even rob food and grass, it can be called an eternal trick, but it can't be turned into a child. It's great, it's great. This is actually said by the leader of a sect.

I feel relieved when I see that everyone is scolding you.

After entering the sect, I still want to lick Qianjia's feet! Another doujinshi that sucks to the core

After leveling up to level seven in four years, my ultimate martial spirit was much more rubbish than the normal martial spirit. I was persuaded to quit after eating fairy grass, and it was a huge poison.

You don't even need to look at it, the sun starts at level 9,,,

Are you still keeping the fairy grass for Tang San to use? You have a way to die

It's so childish. I still want to write descriptions of battles of wits and strategizing.

The Sun Martial Soul is innate level 9, why are you still writing an egg?

Innate soul power is linked to the quality of the martial soul. Top-level martial spirits are all level 10, and god-level martial spirits are all level 20. The minimum requirement for Sun in Douluo is level 30

The author and the protagonist have no privacy at all! No matter what you do, Ning Fengzhi will find out!

You don't like Qian Renxue's martial soul resonance!

What can I say, after developing for a long time, I thought it was quite strong and just played a role as a sidekick, and it was quite funny after almost ten chapters.

Kill you🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴 🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴. If you torture three, torture three well. You can also have rabbits sacrificed to him. You got it in your head💩

The Sun Martial Spirit must be at least full of soul power. It should be a god-level Martial Spirit, with an innate level of 20

If you like to be a slave, like to be a nanny, and like to show off, why don't you go back to kneeling down more than a hundred years ago.

The "Seven Kills" of the Seven Kills Sword refers to the Seven Kills Star of the Six Stars of the Southern Dipper, which is a star that is responsible for killing. In this case, the Seven Kills Sword should be an astrological attribute martial spirit, and the setting can also be a sword intention affected by the Seven Kills Fate. How come the setting here is upgraded to Nine Kills 😅? Most fan authors have not gotten the original meaning of the original name.

I subscribed a little bit, and a Sun Martial Spirit did something nondescript. I accepted it, but after eating fairy grass, I lost motivation. After reading the catalog, I was born six years early. What happened? What a waste of expressions, the two most important things in Tang San's growth are the chance celestial grass and Xiao Wu, plus his mother's blood. Besides his father, the other helpers are the Shrek Seven Monsters and the forces behind them! ! You're pushing the benefits out again, so you were born six years early to be funny?

I feel like there is a big problem with the setting. The Qibao Glazed Sect is not a charity, but it also builds an orphanage. What do you think? The original work is obviously similar to the ancient feudal dynasty, but with a little fantasy element added. It would be good if the nobles of the two empires are not exploited. The master of the Qibao Glazed Sect Ning He is the prince's teacher and the main beneficiary of the aristocratic class, so how could he do such a thankless thing? Unless the adopted orphan has an unusual identity and is valuable, such as the descendant of a certain strong man, or the surviving son of a noble prince, then there is a slight possibility. Not to mention, the concept of orphanages is too advanced and does not conform to the development of the times. Where did the orphans come from? It was mainly due to border friction between the two empires. However, due to the constraints of Wuhun Palace at that time, it was impossible for the two empires to completely fight. This shows that it was a relatively peaceful era at that time. How many orphans could there be? After all, the Qibao Glazed Sect is still a sect, not a charity. At most, it recruits some ordinary people with good qualifications. It invests a little in the early stage, but your martial spirit has not awakened. Why should others invest in you? What will your martial spirit awaken? At that time, the probability of Wuhun awakening soul power was as low as winning a lottery ticket. Without soul power, it was all nonsense. Moreover, awakening soul power had a lot to do with parents. If both parents were soul masters, the probability of awakening soul power would be higher. You are an orphan, and your parents don't know who you are. Who can be sure that you will awaken soul power? This setting is simply unbelievable.

He was persuaded to quit in Chapter 5. It was really funny. A group of people got upset when he made whale glue. What did they think it was?

It's much better than those systematic articles, it's a masterpiece among fan fiction.

I can only say that it's the basis for writing💩. Fortunately, I just looked at it a few times and was still undecided.

The classic golden three chapters are not used to attract readers, but are used to screen readers.

After seeing the profile of Seven Treasures' Orphans, I would rather accept a disciple and leave immediately.

The Sun Martial Spirit has such low innate soul power?