Start with Comic Editing

In fact, we can directly write that the protagonist has always been a woman, and there is no need to be so awkward. The characters we choose in MMORPG, QQ avatars, etc. Are always female characters. We understand the mentality of raising a daughter. The protagonists of several works have always emphasized that they are awkward, and it is really unnecessary. I think it would be good to set a character who, although he was a man in his previous life, actively integrates into women in this life. Or it would be good to simply set the character as a female character in both past and present lives. There is really no need to be so awkward all the time. After all, we all understand that as long as the sides and content of the book are from a male perspective, it is a male video work.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist is very poorly set up, and I don't see any personality charm. I understand that I wanted to use the first few chapters to pave the way for a suitable reason for the protagonist to draw comics, but the direction was wrong. Breaking down the three problems faced by the protagonist, one refused to revise the draft, two delayed the draft, and what is the protagonist's attitude? Spread the flames and go... Go. From a reader's perspective, you raised three questions and then didn't solve them. From the author's point of view, you have established a first impression of the protagonist's character as incompetent and evasive. Is it really impossible to deal with it? The first person who refuses to revise the manuscript can, for example, not publish it in the magazine. Of course, you can find many excuses, such as big names, pillars, and management, but this is a novel, and what readers want to see is a happy and vengeful resolution of problems. There are more ways to cope with delayed drafts - these can all be used to establish the protagonist's personality. No matter what kind of person you are, be it resolute, strong woman, or dark-bellied beauty, in short, the core is "the one who can solve the problem."

To be honest, I feel it's a bit too watery. I originally wanted to look at the career line, but the daily line feels like it takes up too much space, and it's a little watery in itself.

Brothers, the author needs to identify the one he likes and don't be too harsh. Anyone who has a monthly vote should vote for it. It's not easy to find one that suits your appetite. I'm really afraid of losing it 😢😢😢

Personal opinion... I feel like the author's balance between daily life and the plot is not very good. Every time when his career is booming, I really want to see the progress of the plot, but the author is always writing posts... I originally liked watching the whitening, but I wanted to skip it. I hope the author can advance the plot more.

Female video? You don't even have the transformation template anymore, right? 🙂

The way I wrote it a few years ago has changed again. I'm very curious that the author wrote another shrine and super power after Gu Xue's book. I didn't read it because I didn't feel comfortable with the subject matter. However, I feel that the writing power has not improved much, and even regressed a bit. The interaction between women and girls is more deliberate than before, and it is boring. It's not that boring, but it's just boring.

Ever since Tang Yao and Li Xue had a kiss, they started to post for the sake of water. If you push the plot, you will focus on the plot. You can post a large part of the plot to promote the development of the relationship. Now I am posting for the word count of water. Now when I open the update, I will talk about the plot in a formulaic way, and there will be meaningless posts in the middle. As for the plot, I was anxious to see how it would develop, but suddenly I wrote about who and what they were wearing when they entered the office. After that, I started posting. Many people have said this in the chapters. Too many plot posts affect the viewing experience. Does the post in the middle of each subsequent chapter contribute to the plot or promote the relationship between the two? You haven't changed it yet

I hope that I will continue to write about this subject in the future and don't forget our old fans.

No kidding, I really like your writing. I have read the game book three times and the animation book more than five times. Gu Xue and Miss Mihara are still my favorite CPs. Although I am sorry that I read pirated copies, I will slowly make up for them when I have money. I discovered this book recently when I wanted to review the anime one. When it was released, I saw that the author said that this was the last version of the novel. After taking a look at the results, I realized that it should indeed be the last one. But I am still very sorry, because I really have never found another article that is more appetizing to me than you. But it's understandable, after all, the results are indeed not good. If the author changes his mind in the future, I will support the author!

It feels like it's getting more and more outdated. Games are constantly being released and sold. Time passes weirdly. It seems like a game or update is released every few days. It's like a formula.

Although I am an FGO server player, if I say that I overcopy FZ at the beginning, doing FGO is seeking death. Without a series of works such as fsn, fha, and Sora no Kyoukai to pave the way for the world view and attract fans, who would play fgo? Without these works, who would have the patience to read the garbage chapters written by YJG and Miraculous Higashikata in the early stage. Or do you want us to believe that the protagonist or the author the protagonist finds is capable of writing the entire plot of FGO to the level of Nao Mushroom?

Is it possible to focus on games next? I have been honest with you in posts. Do you still want to be cheated next? It's better to improve the game content first. If you want to include some personal stuff, you can write a youth fantasy.

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that I don't like homosexuality. It would be better if it was purely a career article.

The old-fashioned sexual transformation story 🙂 the heroine is still as beautiful as a fairy in Bai Yueguang, and has a lively personality

There are too many interactions between the two. How much did you push the plot? More than half of the daily updates are interactive. Today Li Xue came to the office, and then started describing the heroine's dress and appearance, and then changed the perspective and started writing about Li Xue. There are 3,000 words in the 4,000-word chapter. How much serious plot advancement is there? It's not that you can't write, but you can't just write these, right? Now I click into the chapter without even bothering to read it, and I have no sense of expectation at all.

Now there is one chapter every day, and more than 80% of the content of this chapter is posted, with legs, face, and breasts taking turns to be written. Originally, posting was used as a plot lubrication, but now it is regarded as the main content. The key point is that there is nothing new. It is just writing in turn, and writing more than 30 chapters in a row, and there is no progress at all. It is just posting. I feel like if I continue this kind of content, it will be removed from my bookshelf. I will read it for another week. I really don't have the patience to read it and am tired of it. As a result, I have now lost interest in all lily-oriented books.

When I watched the first episode of Fate Zero, I didn't know much about Xing Yue. I just felt that it was unclear and boring without fighting. I didn't understand it at all, so I gave up on it. Later, I watched the video of Saber opening the Noble Phantasm before I picked up the episode, but I still couldn't understand the first episode. Later, I had to complete a series of Xingyue works to understand what the people were doing in the first episode. So I think the protagonist starts the first episode of Fate Zero without any other works... Isn't this reading threshold a bit high...

Seeing that the mobile game market is just emerging, you are really poisoning me to death by making 100 million a day. Did you know that in 2012, the total annual revenue of the mobile game market was only over 5 billion? I didn't even give you an earlier date. If it were 10 years earlier, there wouldn't be a billion. Angry Birds was a game in 2009, and you said it was the most popular one on the market.

I have basically ordered all the game designers, and I have read over 1 million words here. I came to take a look. I don't know what the first 20 pictures are about, so I will briefly explain the background and hurry up. The previous ones are basically dialogues. I looked at the table of contents and resigned after 60 chapters. At this time, I don't want to read anything anymore. Why is this type of novel so basic? In this book, the protagonist either inherits a company or quickly starts his own business. Because there are so many ink marks in the previous book, he has no meaning, including the designer's book. Although he was not working in his own company in the early stage, the overall feeling of being a game and being looked down upon by others. The fusion of the technique of first suppressing and then rising is okay, but now I don't know what I am doing in this book. Those who write or draw can just work for others. Generally, if you don't start your own business like this, it will make me feel useless. And this author mainly writes orange novels. Am I familiar with Li Xue's pictures after seeing them? Hit it off, love at first sight? How can you just say you marry me and I will marry you? This relationship has to develop slowly, so to speak, and we are not best friends who have known each other for a long time. So far, I have only seen a lot of dialogue in the early part of Chapter 20, whether it is with the cartoonist or the editor-in-chief. You have to write it until the later period, and there are these transitions in the middle period. I'll admit it, it's not overdone at the beginning, or after writing a novel, I will only write this kind of late-stage novel. Don't you need to quickly enter the plot in the early stage? Especially for this kind of copy, isn't it the kind that the existing plot will cause some waves in the new world, be it shock or amazement, isn't this what it is?

I feel like this book is a bit poorly written. The previous book on game planning was the best among the game manuscripts I have read. Unfortunately, there is a problem with the rhythm of this book. It feels like a hammer here and there. In addition, the author always mentions the issue of being banned. To be fair, those harem stories are too large in scale and don't see any problems, because Lily's problem is magnified? Weird.

Personally, I really like the two game production articles written by Song Xian Dao. Whether you are uncomfortable and shy in daily life or slowly experimenting, they are all appropriate. The production aspect is also very good and step-by-step. I hope that if I publish a new book, I will continue to maintain the same style and be innovative at the same time, and don't try that aspect like super powers.

For personal reasons, I may have lost my books and cannot pursue them. I was afraid that the book would die, so I decided to reward it every time I enjoyed reading it. Reward 500 points today

If I don't order them all, I'm afraid I won't be able to write anymore one day. It's too niche and I can't find the same genre.

I gave you more tickets😭

I have read the author's online games and animations, and it is a pity that the author will not write about this genre again.

I've read all three entertainment ones, and I think they're pretty good, but they're too short 🙂, new! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! New! ! ! ! 😐🤐😰😐🤐😁😌🤐😰😐😳😳😌😎😁😰

I said I would open a new book at the end of the month, but it was stuck on the last day.

Although, this book is the one with the strongest girlishness of the main character written by Xian Ge, and it is also my favorite book of the heroine.

Come on, author, I have ordered the first two books, and this one is automatically subscribed. Write more, and don't be a eunuch.