Something's Off About This Witch

I could tell at a glance that she was also a tea-loving witch who also worked as a succubus. You agree, right, meow?

AI

The beginning is completely illogical. The protagonist was found, so she must be an awakened witch. If that's the case, wouldn't they know? Even if they didn't know at first, they should have found out later. And if they did know, they should have known they were powerless and owed 30 million. Therefore, they should have let the protagonist learn magic first, and then repay the money.

The way he keeps using the word "sisters" is really hard to handle; it gives off a strong Northeastern accent combined with a sarcastic tone.

It's well-written, but something feels off. The female lead's "tea ceremony" (or "manipulation") feels a bit overdone; she seems more like a succubus than a witch. Then there are the supporting characters. They feel like they're portrayed too ordinarily, especially the chief and the two emperors. These three characters are supposed to be high-class, but their character designs are too ordinary.

The succubus/witch concept is refreshing, but the later plot feels a bit off-track. I think an excellent novel needs a good main storyline for the protagonist and constantly interspersed daily life scenes. Like another novel that also features witches, its main storyline is winning the championship in 1994.

[Recommendation]: "What to do if you're heavily in debt?" "What if I can only live in the slums that even witches look down on?" "I have no choice but to rely on my face to make a living!" The premise of a woman who is heavily in debt and transmigrates to another world to "make a living with her looks" is relatively rare in witch-themed stories.

Before the book was published, the author was more restrained, but afterward, it became increasingly padded. Almost every chapter is a monotonous, repetitive monologue, consisting of half a chapter of filler followed by a short section to advance the plot. I really can't keep up; I'll just leave it on hold for now. 😴

In some ways, this is the closest to a certain green tea cat witch, meow (=^･ｪ･^=). They both entered the witch world clueless, both sold alcohol, and most importantly, both were green tea and both were lewd, meow (cat likes it, cat likes it, more and more!).

It actually has a lot of the feel of "Everybody's a Witch," except this one has the added element of pregnancy through touching, and the witch's personality is somewhat toned down.