Something's Off About This Witch

I could tell at a glance that this was also a tea witch who also worked as a succubus. You think so, Meow?

AI

After reading the beginning, it doesn't make sense at all. The protagonist was actually picked up, and she should be the awakened witch. In this case, don't they know? Even if they didn't know it at first, they should know it later. If you know it, you should know that you don't have the ability now, and you still have to pay 30 million. In this case, the protagonist should learn magic first. Pay back later

The open-mouthed and closed-mouthed sisters really can't stand it. They have a Northeastern accent and a weird feeling.

It's well written, but something feels wrong. I feel that the heroine's tea art is a bit too hard, and she is a bit less like a witch and more like a succubus. Then there are the supporting characters, which I feel are a bit too ordinary, especially the chief and the two emperors, three characters with such strong personalities, but I feel that the characters are a bit too ordinary, lacking some impressive and distinctive personalities and characteristics. For example, if you add a persona of "a mother who likes lolita" to the chief, will the character immediately become more distinct? . The author can refer to the great characters of Quanmin, which are very distinctive and impressive. Finally, just in case, don't force the top witches to be dog lickers or lose their IQ in order to enhance the charm of the heroine. This is a witch story, don't really write it like a green tea novel where all the characters are lickers.

The succubus witch setting is refreshing, but the subsequent plot always feels a bit over-the-top. I think an excellent novel requires the protagonist to have a good main line and constantly interspersed daily life. Just like another book about witches, its main line is to win the championship in 1994. Whether it is selling alcohol to socialize or working in a different world, it is just a side plot. All daily life is to pave the way for the subsequent plot of winning the championship. What about yours? The succubus is the protagonist's setting. The chief witch has been pulled out and I haven't seen the main plot. The orphan setting means that you can't live in the daily life of family. The interspersed plot is either to cultivate or take the postgraduate entrance examination. But the main plot I see from you seems to be 'In order to pay back the money, I accidentally embarked on the path of the succubus and there is no way back. What should I do? ', The main plot is selling wine, and the branch plot is written in a small royal style, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue and blur the protagonist's character. Of course, the above are just my impressions after watching it. If the author sees it, just read it and write it according to your own ideas. After all, I can only talk about it, and I can't hold back a single plot if I write it.

[Recommendation]: "What should I do if I am deeply in debt?" "What should I do if I have to live in a slum that even the witches look down on?" "I have no choice but to rely on this face to make a living!" Traveling to another world with heavy debts and "making a living with my face" is a relatively rare setting in the witch genre. The author's writing style is good and the description is delicate. The characterization is also very good, and the protagonist's personality is very likable. In just a few chapters, the protagonist's image as a pink-haired witch who is broke and has a debt of 30 million has been established. The plot structure is reasonable, and the overall writing is very smooth, without any poisonous points. Transforming into a witch and working part-time as a "succubus", becoming a winner in life by eating soft food is really hot! Dividing Line Work: "Something Is Wrong with the Witch Lady" Type: Light Novel Tags: Time Travel, Magic, Daily Life, Soft Rice Flow Status: 48,000 (signed) Recommendation Index: ★★★ Dividing Line [Plot Summary]: The protagonist travels through time and transforms into a witch, but is still heavily in debt. Looking at my face in the mirror, I decided to "live on my face". Rich Po~Hungry~Fanfan~ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

The author was a little more restrained before it was released, but after it was released, he became more and more popular. Almost every chapter update is a self-talking Che Zuluhua, who repeatedly writes most of the chapter and then writes a short paragraph to advance the plot. I really can't chase anymore, so I'll keep it for now 😴

To a certain extent, this is the book that is closest to a green tea cat witch (=^･ｪ･^=). They both entered the world of witches with no knowledge, both sell wine, and most importantly, both green tea and meow are astringent (cats like cats, they like more, more, more!)

In fact, it has the flavor of a universal witch, but this one has a touch pregnancy setting, and the witch character is a bit lighter.