Shanngling Fairy Road

The technique settings are somewhat similar to those of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but I've been reading Xuanjian for a long time, and to be honest, I don't understand them very well, especially when they conflict with each other, it's so tiring!

To be honest, regardless of the character setting, story and group portraits, the writing is actually good. As an old bookworm, I can't find anything to criticize. Compared with the characters in other works that are full of loopholes, the characters in this book can be described as upright and peaceful. They have the right advantages in all aspects, without the feeling of being anxious for success. The various settings are also very stable and very thorough and detailed. I feel that a lot of effort has been put into it. It is very rare in this era of fast-food online articles. This should not be a shortcoming. The problem is that the settings are too complicated and the reading threshold for readers is too high. If it can be changed simply Some, or simple on the outside and complex on the inside, can be enjoyed by laymen, and it may be better for experts to see the secrets or something like that, but now that the setting has been roughly rolled out, it is obviously too late to change it again, and the new author wrote it like this from the beginning, without the popularity of the previous work, so the mediocre response is indeed expected. As for group portraits, in my opinion, the writing is quite good. Although group portraits are indeed difficult to write, this book can be described as stable and watertight. I can give it a 9 out of 10 points. However, I still have to suggest that you can tilt it appropriately. The description of group portraits is too average. Change a scene every other chapter, and then change to the next chapter. In another scene, the roles of the main characters are too even, causing some readers to be confused about who is the protagonist. Just like there must be a focal point in the picture, so that it is easier to understand the plot when reading. My suggestion is to adopt the method of light and dark lines, focusing on describing the light lines. The dark lines should also be carried out at the same time, and the dark lines can also be turned into light lines. Just like a drama stage, the center of the stage can take turns to appear.

How many chapters is this? Have you just entered the palace?🤔

He just loves to watch the Xuanjian Immortal Clan 😌

I've made a point, the plot can't be dull, but if the writing turns too much, it's better to be more natural, haha

It's too busy now. Many people are writing new books. Pay attention to the pace of life. Authors

Is there another system of cultivating immortals similar to the Xuanjian Immortal Clan?

Not bad, not bad, not bad, just a bit too young. The writing is smooth and the storyline is compact. I recommend reading it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I want to see the nature of thunder. For example, Da Chixian Sect