I Refine Longevity With Ten Thousand Gu

Recommendation: The IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters in this book are quite good, but it is not exciting enough and is very depressing to read. The biggest joy of this type of abortion is the reaction of the person who has been cheated after knowing the truth and being played by the protagonist. However, if the author writes this way, it is inconsistent with the character of the protagonist, because the protagonist has no need to tell others the truth, so you can actually set up a voodoo that absorbs this negative emotion. The more you hate the protagonist, the more negative energy the voodoo absorbs before dying, and the faster it grows. This not only conforms to the logic of the protagonist's character, but also takes into account the fun.

It doesn't feel like a novel. The protagonist has been in the center of the whirlpool and jumped around repeatedly. There are many opportunities to escape from the whirlpool. He himself has the memory of a third-level alchemist and golden elixir and has the plug-in Time Gu. When he goes out, he can directly open up the world. You have to find ways to survive in the cracks. There is a way of forcibly using the protagonist's halo to deceive everyone. Everyone wanted to kill him, but he deceived them all. Like always using his IQ to survive on the edge of the rift. But there is obviously a good chance to escape directly from the crack. There are plug-ins, alchemy techniques, and practice experience. I feel like I can live a good life in any other place, but I have to hide it and live in the Wang family!

The logic of running away from the Wang family is wrong. The protagonist has the Time Gu, the memory of the golden elixir real person, and the inheritance of the third-level elixir technique. He also has to risk running to another place where he can be killed easily. The key is that there are all kinds of calculations in this place. He is threatened by others throughout the whole process and becomes his grandson. He can't help himself.

This book is depressing to read, unlike Gou Daoliu. The most important thing about Gou Dao is the sense of security. This book is more like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Personally, I feel like the biggest pleasure for a protagonist with such a shady character is the moment when he shows his cards to the villain. He explains to the villain bit by bit how he cheated on him. I tell the villains who look down on the protagonist that you have been fooled by me. I slap those villains in the face, achieving a double crushing of the villain from IQ to psychology. But the protagonist of this book is just a simple evil person. He finally killed one of them, but before he felt happy, a villain came in less than half a chapter and treated the protagonist like a dog. The most important thing is that most of the people who died in evil did not know that they were plotted by the protagonist. This is like the difference between the pleasure of killing your enemy with your own hands and the pleasure of framing the enemy and killing someone with a knife.

There is a problem with the author's pacing. Although he was looked down upon and abused in the past, he quickly came back with revenge and gained benefits. However, when the Wang family was destroyed, not only did he not gain direct benefits (the elixir was never available), but he was used until death [fn=40 ], you can't resist yet, you need to fake death to escape. Brother, what you write is an online article, not an abuse article. Please don't write a routine until you die, be looked down upon, abused, fight back, and gain benefits. These are all routines from more than ten years ago. You can use them, but don't use them all the time.

Isn't this just a grandson, and has always been a grandson? Why do so many people like this?

He has been a foundation-building monk at the intermediate level of Qi training, and he has deceived everyone with his love-loving and righteous persona, and planned the resources of the alchemy-forming monk to create babies; in order to achieve his goal, he even poisoned the master who was as kind as a mountain of kindness. Protagonist's character: On the surface, he values ​​love and justice, but on the inside, he forgets love and loyalty, and is ruthless.

It's almost seventy chapters, and it's not exciting at all. The protagonist has never met a normal person. He has the Time Gu and the memory of a Golden Core monk, and yet he looks like this.

Good-looking and good-looking. The author's plot design is reasonable, showing the protagonist's step-by-step calculations to seek benefits, without making the villain's wits fall off. The protagonist is not a virgin at all. Everything he does is for his own benefit and has nothing to do with morality, love or hatred. He is a pure pursuer of immortality.

The plot design is still not very good Since it is Gou Dao, why do you keep designing the plot of desperately getting into the whirlpool of events? If it is the devil, why does the description create a person who is forward-thinking in doing things instead of being thoughtful and sophisticated in doing things? Too many descriptions of the protagonist's psychology and explanatory paragraphs sometimes fall behind There are also online articles that are not as good as physical books. The plot of this book is always tight, just like squeezing toothpaste. Sometimes the dry transition is very poor, and sometimes it feels too crowded and falls to the ground. The good climax part ends hastily 😅 The author should have confidence in his book. After all, you are the driver of the car, and the readers are just passengers Of course, you should also take a proper "rest", break out of God's perspective, and sort out and understand the written plot from the passenger's perspective. The author should also be able to see that many readers still like some of the supporting characters you created. If you just treat them as "pure" tools and throw them away after use, how many people will be willing to continue reading? You can count on one hand the real demons who put self-interest first in the Internet literary circle. They have overcome or suppressed the weaknesses of human nature and have stood in a new spiritual realm. Cutting off love and sex is not a true immortality, and the world described is just a gray and boring world. I wrote a little too much, I hope the author can understand what I mean. The protagonist is a red flower, and the supporting role is a green leaf. Sometimes only a short plot or even a sentence is needed to bring a character to life. He may not be of much use in advancing the plot, but he can play a finishing touch.        ，，…🙏🏻         ，                                 ，