Devouring Star Sky Thunder

After getting the Locke Divine Water, he forced Luo Feng to give him 40%. In the end, Luo Feng insisted not to take so much and only took 20%. This actually doesn't matter. After all, the three of us came out together to support each other. It's just that your 40% was indeed a bit too much, and you didn't even consider giving Hong a share. Later, you sell the money and directly buy resources to start seclusion. After a few months, you come out of seclusion and compete in the resurrection match. In the end, it is the same as the original work. You almost have to go wandering with the Lord of Time. There is nothing wrong with this choice. After all, he is almost able to join the Qianwu branch. Since he cannot join, it is also a good choice to follow the Time Realm Lord. Then you saw Hong choose to wander with the Lord of Time, and you gave him one hundred thousand Hunyuan and several secret books on time and light. Seeing this, I want to ask, couldn't you buy these secret books about light and time from Hong through the virtual universe before you retreat? You know, his original work almost made it into the top one thousand, so you can have better choices. If you give him this basic and high-level secret book a few months in advance, the possibility of him breaking through before the battle is not small, but you directly choose to retreat first, not even willing to waste a few minutes. In the end, Hong failed in the resurrection match just like in the original work. To be honest, the relationship between Hong and Thunder God is actually closer. Luo Feng is just a latecomer. You deliberately brought Luo Feng along with you. You deliberately broke the news about Locke's divine water in front of Luo Feng. You forced Luo Feng to give him 40% without mentioning Hong once. When Hong failed in the rematch, you gave him 100,000 Hunyuan. Originally, when the three of us were together, you forcibly gave Luo Feng points. It was not called licking, it was a matter of brotherhood. But in the end, you deliberately brought Luo Feng to give him points, and only gave him a small change when Hong was eliminated. Of course, one hundred thousand Hunyuan is a lot for Hong. This kind of plot is purely licking Luo Feng, and it is obvious that he doesn't like Hong, even though Hong is closer to the Thunder God. If you were to directly explain in the narration that this Locke Divine Water was used to establish a relationship with Luo Feng and invest in the future, then you wouldn't say it. But you didn't say it, but it seemed that it was a brotherly relationship. I thought your rhythm was good and the plug-ins were okay, so I wanted to finish reading it. Then when I saw this, to be honest, I no longer had the desire to read any more. It's not that you have to give Hong a certain amount of points, but you simply ignored him. Actually, they went into seclusion first, and when Hong was eliminated and about to leave, he bought him a tome on laws. In the end, Hong could only follow the route of the original novel, instead of joining the Qianwu branch, which was a better development route.

Author, I have basically read your first two books, but haven't finished them. How can I put it, maybe it's because your writing is a little bit literary, and you don't want to go too far, but I think it's like taking off your pants and farting, and making a weird story. It is very useful in the early stage, but it seems unsustainable in the middle and later stages, but it just grows back from other places. Anyway, it gives people a very strange feeling that it is not mainstream. I hope this can be changed.

I don't understand. Your cells are hungry. You shouldn't use your guidance technique to absorb the original energy of the universe. Instead, you roast some meat to replenish it. You really know how to bend the tree and seek the truth.

What the hell are you writing? Are the branches of the five major human companies competing for geniuses? What kind of genius has I never seen before? Do I still need to grab him?

I'm sick. If there is a heroine, why don't you label me as someone who doesn't have a heroine?

Dude, this book is well written, but don't be a eunuch.

A few cosmic-level ninth-level slaves spent a Hunyuan unit? It's just a shame. One Hunyuan is equal to one trillion universe coins, and one universe coin is equal to 3,300 dry witch coins. As for the black dragon coins, I'm too lazy to forget them. The author should go back and see how much a slave costs in the original book, and then write the book after the conversion is clear!

If the writing is more detailed and vivid, Zhang Haobai's early stage work is good. Later, for cheating, don't engage in the Ten Laws. It's good to specialize in the Thunder Law, and then try other routes.

I can't figure out why your immortal body has a corpse. In the original work, the soul is destroyed to have a corpse. The divine power is annihilated and only the treasure is left. You don't swallow anything at all.

I really can't figure it out, why don't you create a clone of the mechanical clan? The growth of the mechanical race is actually a ball of energy. The steel on its appearance can be replaced at will. It is only integrated when it reaches immortality. I remember it was written in the original article. In addition, the amplitudes in the Devouring Starry Sky are divided into the warrior's: force amplitude × the divine body amplitude in the warrior's secret method, and the spiritual master's: the telepathy amplitude × the soul amplitude in the telepathy secret method. Warriors use their bodies to fight, and spiritual masters use their soul power to fight. It's too funny for you, a warrior, to go to the Magic Mountain to receive the inheritance from a spiritual master. Is it true that you won't be able to write the original work once it's published? There is an iceberg next door! Even if you write about the inheritance of the Ice God General next door, it will be better than trying to gain popularity from the Magic Mountain.

I could barely read it as a cool article, but I couldn't stand the last few dozen chapters. Many settings completely subverted the original work. For example, what has become of the initial universe and the three strange secrets of the original universe? I'm speechless.

No eunuchs, no eunuchs, no eunuchs! ! !

He is obviously a warrior who went to grab the inheritance of the Demonic Music God General. He has no intention of being original at all, so he just follows Luo Feng.

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes! The front is okay! Can I get nine clones with one million points? Can the clone break through the realm master and practice on his own? With this kind of secret method, not to mention millions of points, even a hundred treasure points can't be obtained.

There is no harem

Isn't there any book that doesn't mix with Luo Feng?

Don't be a eunuch, write a female protagonist

The author is Luo Feng, the fictional protagonist🐶🐶🐶

Why do you suddenly write a fast-paced article again?

Can you recommend any other books with Ai Chen as the heroine? Basically, what I see is that it's useless to find a random woman on earth to get married to. 😖

I recommend a book by the Devouring fan "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits". It's really good. I highly recommend it.

There is no heroine in the story I wrote, but there is Ai Chen