The Rise of Nirvana That Devours the Starry Sky

Fans all know the ending, but why should we read it? We need to watch the process and the process is exciting to be able to watch it. Otherwise, who would watch it?

The protagonist's talent is simply non-recyclable garbage among the garbage.

This book is getting worse and worse as it is written. The protagonist has plug-ins but doesn't use them. He just needs to set some restrictions. Writing a Goose countryman to kill the protagonist is only a few chapters, and in the end he is released. So what's the point of writing like this? Now the water and sea monsters are attacking the island country. How to attack the sea monsters, what types of troops are used, and how big these troops are. It has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist cannot defeat it. Even if the protagonist knows about it, it will be useless. The author is suppressing the use of plug-ins.

With this kind of strength, all you have to do is take care of the Chinese region, and force the world to establish alliances. You really think of yourself as the savior.

In current Devouring Starry Sky novels, there are very few female supporting characters or female protagonists. As a result, the more you read them, the more boring you become and the less you want to read them👀 In addition, many beautiful girls are watching the Devouring Starry Sky fanfics. The main character is so stupid in cultivation alone. Boss Luo also has a wife, so it doesn't have any influence. If you are not good at writing emotional scenes, you can write less. I have read a lot of Devouring Starry Sky fanfics and the more I read them, the more boring I am. I don't know why eee

Write a comment and set the fan value to 100. I don't lack this. Just to give you a bad review. It has only been ten days since the protagonist traveled back in time, and you can write more than 100 pictures. The water exploded! ! ! Are you planning to write this book for the rest of your life?

I really don't know how stupid the protagonist is. I know it's Swallowing the Starry Sky and there are cheats. It's 160,000 words and it's not yet on the fast track for training. What are you thinking about?

Some people are as anxious as monkeys. They don't know what they are anxious about. They just leave if they want to see something or not. Some people like it to be fast, some people like it to be slow. The earth chapter is more realistic, and the universe chapter is too unreal. I find the universe chapter, especially after immortality, all kinds of unpleasant, too fake and empty. What you pursue when reading novels is a sense of immersion. Only with a sense of immersion can you feel the joys and sorrows of the characters, which requires quite good writing skills to express. Whether it is a refreshing article or a depressing article, the most taboo thing for an author is that trolls will affect the writing progress and disrupt his original idea. You can adopt opinions that you approve of, but you cannot listen to all opinions. For now, the author's progress is pretty good. Although it looks like there are a lot of chapters, in fact each chapter is only about 10 points, which is not a lot of words. Only by maintaining the current progress can it match the title of your novel, instead of wandering into the universe in just a few chapters.

It's a good idea to write a thread. The protagonist had a golden finger to stop Li Yao and didn't use it. He was afraid of death but lacked courage. He only used it when he was about to die. Tmd when he was the master of Jeet Kune Do, he asked Li Yao to escape. Well, you are the master of Jeet Kune Do. I'm afraid you are the apprentice of Jeet Kune Do.

The protagonist's operation is as fierce as a tiger, but the result is still a combat power of 5, which is really difficult.

I've watched a lot of Devouring fandoms. I can watch them on Earth, but I can't watch them on Earth. This slow pace is good.

Go through Devour with a cheat, write more than a hundred chapters, and still sit in a small place and scheming? Slipping away

It seems that there are about a dozen of them, and they only mean one thing: I didn't kill Li Yao, and he still lived for 68 years.

I have read no less than 30 Devouring fanfics, and this article is quite good. The plot is a little slow-paced. The characters in the book are very nuanced. Li Kan, Wangtong, and Sister Hong are all very well portrayed. Lao Ma (Dong Nanbiao) also writes well. Some people say that Mrs. Dong is a holy mother. In the original text, she should have the strength of a god of war when she fights a two-headed tiger dragon alone. If he escapes, there will be no problem, but she chose to take the lead. There is also the fact that the upper echelons of each country's views on warriors are slowly changing. It is impossible to treat warriors equally all at once, and there will definitely be a lot of friction. If a warrior doesn't fight for power, he will definitely not give it to you. The image of Hong and Thunder God must be well described and portrayed. Hong is a killer. Many novels say that Hong does not seek refuge with the country. Hong probably did not grow up in China. Having experienced Hong since childhood, he would not believe in the ruling class. During the Great Nirvana, the country's ruling class would not believe in a killer. It is even less possible to give him great rights. I hope the author can write well and not be a eunuch, come on💪💪💪

If you don't mind that the main character is useless, you can watch it! It took him 68 years of life to become a master of Jeet Kune Do! I haven't beaten an ordinary person, Li Yao, to death yet.

Isn't immortality infinite lifespan?

I don't know if it's because the pacing is too slow, or because the universe chapter has basically no connection with the original work. I don't have a feeling for the universe chapter. It's not as good as the earth chapter. I'll give it another try when I get to Battle of Geniuses. I think there is a problem with the protagonist's genius level. Special elites are basically geniuses in a certain field, while the protagonist is a genius in exerting force and learning secret techniques. There is no doubt that in the eyes of immortals and even venerables, geniuses in the field must be greater than geniuses in the secret method. In their eyes, the law is the most important, and the field is the basis of the law. I don't understand why the protagonist's salary is so high, much higher than that of a genius in the field. Rong Jun, a genius who created his own secret method, is among the top ten. He did not become a disciple of the Venerable by relying on his own secret method of star level, but by being suspected of being a member of the Giant Ax Clan. And if Bolan, a genius of law, had not gone astray, King Feng would definitely be rushing to recruit disciples, and it might not be impossible for His Holiness. Another point is that Babata chose a descendant on Earth because he could not leave the Earth. He is taller among the dwarfs. A ninth-level bloodline like Earth is considered rubbish in the universe. Now that we have left the earth, why do we still need to find people from the earth to be our successors? Wouldn't it be nice to find a high-level bloodline? Babata's definition of Luo Feng is that he can definitely reach the cosmic level, and if he can reach the realm master, he will burn high incense. Why not find an adult at the universe level and domain lord level to be the successor? Hu Yanbo is not from Earth either, so why do he have to find someone from Earth? In Babata's eyes, the people on earth are nothing special, they are just ordinary ninth-level bloodlines. On Earth, Luo Feng's planet-level brain acuity of 21 is barely qualified for Babata, and the speaker of 15 looks down upon him. Not to mention there are many people in the universe who have higher brain acuity than Luo Feng, there should be quite a few, right?

I won't say it in the early stage, but it's my personal feeling that there are flaws. Overall it's pretty good. The transition was quick and timely? But you created a secret code of clones that has no learning restrictions? Destroy settings? Preparing to pass it on to future generations? This is disgusting! I don't know if you've noticed that as soon as your secret book of clones came out, a lot of people left!

You might as well set up a martial arts gym like Hong and Lei Shen, you can also set up a mercenary platform (Star Guild), or a company like Virtual Universe Company But setting up a mercenary group is a bit low, and the limitations are too great. In the fantasy world, making mercenaries is the lowest group.

Not bad, the characters are vividly drawn

Many fan novels of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" fell apart just after they were written. In addition to the opportunity of the Mountain Rider to transform the earth, the biggest opportunity for Swallowing the Universe and the Earth is the inheritance of Hu Yanbo. Many authors also wrote about the inheritance of the king and the venerable. It was too forced and awkward, and the writing was too embarrassing. The protagonist of this article is not a spiritual master and cannot be inherited, but there should be a basic inheritance of warriors in the ruins of the No. 9 Ancient civilization. The protagonist's golden finger "Killing Pearl" can be deduced for a long time. Now I just don't know how to leave the earth at the end of the Great Nirvana. Do I have to wait for Luo Feng to rise? The biggest resource for the protagonist in the early stage is the realm within the realm. It would be great if he could enter quietly. That resource is enough for the genius war. I hope that the genius war Hong and Thor can enter the original law, and hope that they can both enter the top thousand of the virtual company. Ranking last is fine. Most authors do not let Hong and Thor enter because they don't know how to write next. I hope the author can work hard and write well! ! ! 💪💪💪💪💪

There are still monthly tickets, but the number has reached the upper limit, so the author will write as it is now. Your advantage is that you start writing from before the Great Nirvana. No one else has this. This is your characteristic. If you fast forward, it will be meaningless. There are too many people writing like this, and it will be difficult for you to stand out. This is the point that the author must maintain. Devouring fans are good at writing about the earth period, but once they reach the universe I started to pull it. This is because the pace is too fast. I dare to say this. I really think it is good. At least I still vote; One more thing, don't change according to some comments. You have to be quick and accept this and that. In this world, has it reached the point where it is wrong to be single-minded? Don't accept women simply because they are beautiful. Without emotional lines, they are nothing, and they are not. Write a harem novel and devour the original text. How many people were born on earth have multiple harems? I know when I say this, someone must jump out and say that the novel should be enjoyable to watch. If the reality cannot be achieved, I would like to see it in the novel. This is not wrong, but the problem is that logic must also be introduced in the extraordinary world. Some people say that chance does not follow logic. Is it true? Han Li took it The little green bottle can only be cheated, just pick it up on the road, but it has been difficult before, through the little green bottle cheat; Xiao Huohuo has been cheated for three years, and the grandfather comes online and starts cheating; everything needs to be foreshadowed, and the emotional line is even more difficult. In addition to harem stories, there are also grievances and resentments in harem stories. You just say, accept this and accept that. Why do you accept Mu Qiang, who talks about women, and then accept it with peace of mind? What is the difference between this and modern money-worshiping girls? The relationship between Luo Feng and Xu in the original work is Xu's insistence and Luo Feng's struggle, so the image of the heroine is plump. Just use the character creation of the original work to make it fun for a while, and then you will never be able to return to your original rhythm, because the protagonist's character The image has changed; Last sentence, not everyone in the comment group wishes you well, just like the Jews in the country. Since then, more than 90% of the cigarettes sold by Lin Zexu were sold by Jews. After it was banned, Jewish families encouraged the British invasion. Some people are not good people by nature! Attached are screenshots of voting and reading time

I have been subscribing until now. Even if I don't want to write anymore, or there are personal circumstances that prevent me from writing for the time being, I can at least post a single chapter to say it, and just stop updating without saying a word?

If you are delayed for something, let alone, just post a single chapter to say so. What does it mean to stop updating for a day without saying a word?

After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel that the protagonist looks a bit like the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, but the comments section is full of praise. Is it my problem?

Come on, it looks good, but the update is a bit slow. I have also written a Devouring Nirvana novel before, and I couldn't finish it after 30 chapters. In fact, the period of Nirvana is the most realistic and immersive period.

Looking at the protagonist's behavior, it is obvious that South America's No. 9 Ruin is where the protagonist took off, but I don't know when it was discovered! The protagonist is now too poor in inheriting the secrets of Kung Fu! There is no place to use the treasure mountain (hanging)!

You should also write more about cultivation. Don't always mention it in one stroke. When you use a plug-in, just use numbers and point out the key parts.

，     ，， Nowadays, many spiritual recovery novels are influenced by "Global High Martial Arts", and have added a new model of writing called Martial Arts University. This feels a little more scientific. After the Nirvana, the base city was established, and the human order began to be rebuilt. Martial arts universities were established in every base city around the world. A particularly powerful martial arts university, Starlight University 🙂, was established. Hong's elite training camp was called Extreme University, and Thor's was called Thunder God University 🤓. They are the three most powerful martial arts universities in the world. This is no more interesting than a martial arts gym 🙂

I hope the author can re-open an earth chapter which is really good. The space chapter forced hatred.