The Person Is Conferring the Gods and the Clone Is Traveling to the West

I feel like it's because the female videos came here and they've become immortals, or it's just because of the parents' pettiness, don't you agree? Learning magic is in vain. If you don't agree today, just die violently tomorrow~_~

Don't write that Journey to the West is the timeline after Fengshen later, just have two worlds.

There is no immortality in the world of Journey to the West. This must be remembered. Even the Buddha and the Jade Emperor died, and no one can live forever.

Naughty, affectionate, and petty. Why are you writing about cultivating immortality and attaining enlightenment? The part about dealing with Su Daji caused me physical discomfort. The fighting training is briefly mentioned, and the plot arrangement is taken for granted. However, the love between children and the love between children took a lot of pen and ink to write about. What kind of cultivation novel should I write? Let's write a romantic drama.

In the scene when sending Daji back to Jizhou, the protagonist's character is too soft and the name of Xiongba is too obvious.

If you don't cultivate yourself well, your children will grow more affectionate day by day.

Many places are a bit too modern 🙂 If I write the original work, I will write the original work. Now there are a lot of ancient settings, mixed with some traditional fairy tales, which is really strange.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It's very interesting. The setting is wonderful and the plot is smooth.

Encouragement

Dear adoptive fathers, after reading this great man's book, can you read mine? Hey-hey……