I Saw the Prompt Box, and the Three Hundred Witches

(Newcomers, don't run away if you see it, the book can be read) Author, this book should be similar There is no problem with the writing, but the biggest problem now (personal subjective) is that the main line is too slow and too watery If you can finish something in one page, you have to drag it out several pages. Take the latest chapter as an example. You have to take the three pieces of equipment apart and talk about them separately. The key is that you have not updated enough and you are not good enough on the main line. If you look at them together, you can see that they have not strayed yet, but you wrote too slowly. I will not be able to remember them after reading them today. There aren't many readers in the first place, so it's enough to just break the story a few times to whet your appetite. But if you break the main plot and write it, half of it today and half tomorrow, no one will want to read it after a while. Anyway, there are some scattered minor flaws. I didn't read the book carefully, but it generally doesn't affect the viewing experience. The other thing is that the author has no attitude and doesn't speak. You are too silent, but you act cute and miserable, interacting with readers to increase your sense of presence. You write a book in stand-alone mode, and you read the book in stand-alone mode. Author, are you an otaku? In short, forget it and don't want to type any more The author, you can figure it out, you'll hear a squeak when you see it

I thought it was The Three Hundred Pound Witch when I saw the title.

I saw in Chapter 3 that the indigenous protagonist was threatened by the witch to be adopted as a dog, so when should we kill the witch and kill her?

Why do you treat people like dogs at the beginning? It seems that you are still a native and you are a European and American professional em. The traditional Japanese routine is a bit inappropriate for your brainwave. It slipped away.

Is the title of the book missing the word "year"?

I thought it was 300 witches, but I was disappointed.

A good work, 8/10 points. To put it simply, it is a novel about Tokyo + strange tales + solving incidents. When reading it, you will unconsciously look forward to how the male protagonist will deal with the monsters in the ghost stories next. The emotional line seems to be a slowly mature harem type, with a witch who descended from the sky, a childhood sweetheart, and a shrine maiden who went to the city. The character setting is well done.

This heroine is completely based on Hanami, right? I still hope to see her own characteristics.

It's a bit like your real name has been revealed to me

Brother, the names of the works are all wrong 🙂

Daily guide. This is the most light novel episode I have read in recent years. There are no poison points now. The setting is novel. It's very suitable for a serialized long light novel.

Is the title of the book missing a "jin"? ?

Damn it, I actually came back to life I remember that I traveled to Inuyasha's world and also obtained the system Finally became the God of Soul King Otsutsuki, the God of Samurai I remember that when I created the world in the last picture, there seemed to be something wrong It turns out that you, in Inuyasha's world, found that this world was integrated with Noragami's world, and then you exchanged the seeds of the sacred tree, You fused the seeds of the sacred tree and the sacred tree, that is, the seeds of the Tree of Ages. After merging the seeds of the devil fruit, you forged it into Bengyu and combined it with the power of the Soul King. After that, you successfully planted the seed and cultivated it. You sealed it into your body and performed the most powerful Yuxin reading as Mio. Intention to create the world, but unfortunately in the end, the success fell short and the soul was gone. What the hell is this place?

The writing style is quite suitable, but the writing style can be improved upon, and with some exciting points, it can become a qualified light novel.

It's very similar to the witch apostle, at the beginning

The author is so excited about writing that he can't control his writing style. The tone of the book is a Japanese fantasy battle love story, but he always adds some "what are you trying to stir up" style similar to Hong Kong comics, but the protagonist of this book is not a bad guy, so why should he add some words like this to ruin the writing style. It's similar to writing that domestic public high schools start at 8:30 in the morning and end at 4:30 in the afternoon. It feels very inconsistent. Of course, this is a matter of opinion, and some readers may like it. (I personally don't like this kind of behavior that destroys the overall tone) And the ability to see through the essence of others is basically useless later. I feel like the male protagonist's fighting ability is rather confusing. When an opponent appears, I don't know if the protagonist can defeat it. It's a very strange feeling.

It's been three months since I stopped reading, and this book is too late.

The author cut the novel short because of my words. But it does prove that not many people read this novel at all. It's hard to sleep now

After reading a few chapters, I found that the male protagonist seemed to be unable to get hard.