My Magic Panel Is Too Numerical

After reading Chapter 24, the protagonist is still uneducated and knows that he has not inherited the memory of the original owner, but at least try to learn.

This is my first time to Qidian. If possible, I would like some feedback. Thank you all. Please comment 🌹🌹

No dude, I've seen this formula introduction several times, why don't you change it a little bit?

The protagonist's golden finger only has a higher value in the major spiritual items, and the ability to add points is opened by the local crow. There are four major items and 12 small items in total. The crow can see the panel situation, but the protagonist himself cannot open the panel and add points lottery

It's very unique, very personal, and so well written. Mainly through language. The speech is very distinctive, whether it is Miss Crow or the male protagonist. Or other characters. The characters and plot are both perfect.

There are a total of 12 items that can be added, divided into four categories, and each category is divided into three items. Generally speaking, the more such divisions there are, the more severe the pressure on combat power will be, because the points obtained are not enough to increase the number. So far, the growth in combat power has been good, and I hope we will not fall into the same trap in the future.

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The attribute panel is poorly written. For example, mental attributes are consumed should not be directly 1-1=0 attributes that can be restored through rest or potions It is best to do this Elf: Elf 0/1 Because this way you can know the upper limit and the current attributes.

Not bad. The subject matter is quite popular and easy to get results. I will see later how to improve my writing style and make it better.

The writing is good, but I personally feel that the two rhythms of Jiadianliu and suspenseful detective stories are not very compatible. The author is very brave, come on

You say it's magic or you're still wielding a big sword?

Everyone has a panel, and if you write it like this, it's awesome! It's not that my writing skills are very good, and it's not that I just jump into traps.

After suggestions, I modified the panel so that the spirit can be seen more intuitively. In Chapter 44, "The Second Lottery", I explained why I didn't click on the spirit. In order to become stronger as quickly as possible, the lottery must be given priority. Of course, if you have any suitable suggestions, please put them forward. I will definitely adopt them if they do not ruin the plot and look. Finally, I ask you to read more. This is very important for the new book. I will correct the shortcomings and bugs... Please!