Starting from the Two Realms, Controlling Beasts and Cultivating Immortals

I have subscribed to the latest chapter. The little fox and Wu Qi Veng are very ordinary, with too much thought. As a reader, you have always been on the protagonist's side. The protagonist's secret is a very private matter. Before, I deliberately ignored the fact that Jin Dan and Tiedan followed the protagonist and learned about the protagonist's cheats. Now, as new pets are being made, more and more outsiders know the protagonist's secret. This is really not handled well. It is also good to create a genius character, but the protagonist should not know who he is. A monk who has just entered the elixir formation stage and can surpass the strength of the Nascent Soul has become more and more arrogant. He has become arrogant after some achievements, and the portrayal is not good. Cultivation through beasts, if the setting on the beast is not tenable, and you are simply pursuing the so-called noble beasts with a bunch of nouns, and you don't think that suddenly writing a beast with noble blood is worthy of the opportunity that the protagonist is now mature enough to use, the protagonist lacks this, otherwise you will not be able to read it.

Haha The book reviews were all good before I read them I subscribed to hundreds of them, but I can't stand them anymore Everyone in the comment section said they were ugly It's a pity that I didn't see the ugly comments earlier I regret subscribing so many

I followed this book on Tomato 🍅 and I got 4,000 updates a day. Not to mention the free ones. Can you get more updates for the paid ones? How many subscriptions are there?

The rhythm is bright and refreshing. The setting is good, the Golden Finger function is powerful, there are no obvious poisonous points or logical contradictions, and there is some humor. It is easy and enjoyable to read. It can be regarded as the best among similar books.

The setting is excellent, but it is recommended that the author improve the writing style of describing the fighting scenes and not just write the results directly because the protagonist is proficient in illusion. This makes it uncomfortable to watch. Furthermore, there are also some problems with the division of realm combat power. I hope the author can improve the setting map. Come on, the author, I hope I can write better and better. 😁

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This protagonist is like a district. Every time he spends a lot of effort to find the strongest golden elixir for flawless foundation building, and then others brag about a rare genius. When it comes to the competition, the protagonist is confident and promises to defeat five opponents. In the end, he almost fails to defeat even one person on the opposite side. He boasts very loudly, and he only squirms a few times when he comes on the field and almost gets kicked.

Now let's start playing the "Half-Step Golden Elixir Dzogchen Perfection Ninth Level Late Intermediate Grade" set, so spend your money here! Change books and write slowly

The author scratched his head and didn't know what to write. The protagonists are all masters of immortal magic and are only worthy of competing with the Tianjiao of the same realm. The Saintess was different. One of the nine clones instantly killed the Dongtian Tianjiao who was a small level above her. In other words, the protagonist was kicked to death by the saint who crossed the border. The co-author's saint's fairy magic is fairy magic, but the protagonist's is just a pile of mud, right? 🐷🐷🐷

Other books with low qualifications have more than 100 chapters to build the foundation. The protagonist here, Tianlinggen, in order to pursue the ultimate in Qi training, does not build the foundation in more than 200 chapters. It is too slow.

I originally thought the subject matter was quite good. The protagonist relied on golden fingers to become stronger step by step, and slowly caught up with the children of the big families. It was quite inspiring. However, after the golden elixir was formed, it turned into a pretentious novel. The span of combat power was too large, and then he crossed the realm directly without any training, and his combat power felt like it collapsed.

Write hundreds of chapters on Qi training, all kinds of combat power. The previous Heaven-level skill breakthrough required two materials, but I couldn't get it. It was done in another world. The resource supervision here is so strict. Didn't you get exposed as soon as you broke through?

In this Cultivation University credit system, it is outrageous to miss classes and not get credits. For example, the protagonist's landscape has been taught by God, so why can't he still get credit for the landscape course? Do I need to continue taking landscape classes to get points? ? ? Is this cultivating immortality? ?

​ ​ Let's talk about the advantages first: 1-The idea is novel and it creates new ideas in the traditional cultivation of immortality. 2-There is a system in terms of skills and realm that is consistent with the logic of cultivating immortals, and it also has a somewhat mysterious style of cultivating immortals There are many shortcomings: 1-There are many poisonous points! Especially after Chapter 300, the brain has to be pressed to the ground and rubbed repeatedly 😁 2-It's very wet! The simple plot is very complicated to write, and the rhythm is not ideal. The author is not good enough in this aspect, and it is very uncomfortable to watch! There are other detailed issues that I won't go into. After all, this is an online article and it is impossible to write it with the quality of a classic

As expected, he is the protagonist of condensed young elixirs. He is in the middle to late stage of the golden elixir of combat power. He is still a young man. He probably only boasted about it once with the help of his high school classmates.

Not worth reading The realm is under pressure, and the foundation has not been established in two hundred chapters. It is conceivable that the work will not be very long. It would be fine if it was written by a great god and has a fan base. Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, and Shen transformation. According to this rhythm, it will take about 800 chapters to write Yuanying, which is too long. The setting is quite good. It uses animals to cultivate. It's a pity that some other elements have to be introduced. The Qi training realms of the two worlds are different. One has twelve levels and the other has thirteen levels. It's easy to get confused.

It's so disgusting to write, and the new talent of the monster is updated every day and I got over it.

Around Chapter 300, after the formation of pills started, the quality of the book dropped significantly. It was as if it was written by another old Pulu. The future is uncertain. Pulu stuff.

After Jin Dan, he pretended to be cool and started to make false claims.

The foundation building is slow, the pace is slow, and the plot is the same. Although the foundation was established after Chapter 240, the worldview suddenly became rotten. The ancient world of immortality was less helpful than the real world of immortality, and there were too many nonsense and low ceilings. There was nothing to describe the hard-written events, which slowed down the plot.

If cultivating immortals only depends on resources, I can tell you with certainty that those people will monopolize cultivating immortals to the point where ordinary people will kill their whole family if they take one more breath of spiritual energy.

The author enjoys writing so much that he can't get enough of it, and is often half satisfied.

The protagonist has cultivated the Yuanshi Golden elixir that has not been seen in ten thousand years. In the end, he only gave two words of verbal reward and did not even give him an evolution method. He even had to go out and work hard to get it. This evolution method does not involve personality or anything like that. There can only be one person in one kind of evolutionary beast. This is just written knowledge at most, and it does not require the resources of your sect, so why not give it to you? The Sanqing sect is so stingy that it deserves to be that the New Era cannot defeat the Five Great Cave Heavens. The Yuanshi Golden elixir, which has not been available for ten thousand years, is the orthodox inheritance. To put it bluntly, it is the orthodox inheritance. As a result, it does not provide resources and does not provide any information. What is the use of your sect? Just stand in the back as a backdrop? Then they ask the disciples to go out and fight to the death. The method of evolution of Gouzi must be given by the protagonist with the self-created Young Pill method. Otherwise, who cares what the use of the Yuanshi Golden Pill is, it is purely a roadside thing.

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After the elixir was formed, the book slowly began to collapse, and it was a little round and never came back. First, the Yuanshi Golden elixir B was as high as the other elixirs, and the Yuanying's combat power collapsed. Then, in order to show the protagonist's powerful fighting ability, the plot began to deviate in the direction of pretentiousness, becoming more and more clumsy. The content is empty, the characters of the supporting characters are unimpressive, and they are basically passers-by. I hope the author writes better and better.

The special funny protagonist has reached Jindan, and Yuanying's character has been infinitely improved. When the protagonist reaches the level of Nascent Soul Transformation, his level will be infinitely higher. I completely don't understand the logic behind why the main character Jin Dan is targeted by the God of Transformation. According to the character of the God of Transformation in the back, the protagonist will be annihilated at the first thought. The former protagonist's golden elixir peak can beat the mid-stage Nascent Soul, but the subsequent protagonist's Nascent Soul's combat gap will be infinitely higher when the protagonist reaches the Nascent Soul. It feels like any late-stage Nascent Soul can beat the protagonist. The characters in the previous transformations that were too high-level were all clowns. Anyway, the protagonist was possessed by God. In the early stage, there was no one to spy on the protagonist, so he could only apply a golden finger to block it.

This subject matter is in vain. The comparison from beginning to end is smooth and smooth. If you just write the ending now, it will not affect it at all.

That fourth-level wine sent by Nascent Soul, a gourd, only a few dozen drops? ? ? Generally, there are about seven drops in one milliliter. The capacity of your gourd is only about ten milliliters? ? It shouldn't be such a small gourd. I guess it's because your drop is so big, right?