Life Awakening from the Red Moon

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It feels good, but it is still lacking. This book should have borrowed from Mystery in many places, but it has not learned the essence. The plot cannot be written by imitation, and there is no requirement for this. But the character creation is possible. I feel that the images of these "ordinary people" are too thin. There is only one word "stupid" to describe them. I think you need to spend more time writing group portraits, including that the protagonist should not always be surrounded by young and beautiful women. This is too stereotyped. You can write more men and women of different ages. Family, friendship, love; positive and distorted; sacrifice, dedication, distortion, hatred, unwillingness, hatred, and pain can all be written. It's best to combine several types of stories together, with happy or sad endings to make the characters more vivid and three-dimensional. In the end, the protagonist is too strong. It is obviously impossible to write the protagonist completely into a kind person. Everything can be overcome by the protagonist with his strength, and the main plot cannot be developed at all. If we really let the protagonist fail to defeat anyone, it will be a slap in the face, and it is even more inappropriate. So I think it's best if the protagonist's personality is neutral, more out of consideration for his own interests, rather than for the human group. The protagonist is so strong that he is more suitable as an eye and a platform. Then different supporting characters serve as the protagonist's chess pieces and compete with high-ranking people of the same level as the protagonist on the platform built by the protagonist to achieve some of the protagonist's goals. You can watch "Mysterious City of Mist". It has flaws, but it is not bad. This book still has great potential, come on!

The author hurry up and update

I have been reading this book here for a while, but the number of words is too small, so I still keep it. Today I will simply express my opinion The setting is acceptable. I can feel that the author is trying to construct a larger world view, but there is always a feeling that he has not gotten rid of the novels he has read in the past. (I have A feeling of the first sequence, I don't know if it is), but compared to the first sequence, these fill in the Crimson Party, which is similar to a structure of the Tarot Club, using characters to pull the storyline In fact, I think this is done right, because in the author's structure, the protagonist is more of a supermodel, the kind of monster-fighting and upgrade It is true that the storyline cannot be written smoothly, but then again, the author is not dizzy when writing, the perspective is constantly pulled back and forth 😁 ps: As for the character structure, I think a few of them are still okay, such as the recent Xu Qingbai, Wu Chen and others, the portrayal is pretty good, but the character design is It's quite full, and there's no sudden collapse of the writing, or character breakage The pace of this novel doesn't feel very fast, but it does keep me reading, and I can feel that the author is really writing seriously, so let's wait and see ps: I've been typing for a long time, let me give you the highlights

The strange products of red moon pollution (old system): Abnormal - strange - evil - evil - evil - disaster The guest in red - indescribable - indescribable The extraordinary alienated products of the red moon: 1. Abnormal appearance 2. Mental pollution 3. Depraved soul Extraordinary (Ancient God System): Fear - Struggle - Mourning - Despair - Madness Time Course: Light Calendar - Catastrophic Calendar - Dark Calendar - Red Moon Calendar PS: To add, the basic world lines of this book are mainly divided into three. The first one represents the crimson lords of the old days, the Supreme Han Yuan. My first refugees are mainly in this direction The second one represents the extraordinary ones, who can also be called ancient gods. Most of them are located in the western continent, and a few are located in the east. The third one represents those who look down on the outer gods' starry sky, high-dimensional beings. This estimate should be put aside It's time to come back So I think that the combat power of my Extraordinary is not very bad at least until now. The ancient gods of the Western Continent are originally castrated versions, and most of the Extraordinaries rely on these half-dead gods or the Red Moon to obtain extraordinary. This should be self-explanatory. As for the weird and evil spirits, that is the first old system.

Today's introduction, I am Shennong!

I just found out that you are doing both. Hmm~ Can you write it down?

At the beginning of the new year, I wish you good luck every step of the way.

If you are not feeling well, go to bed early and write when you feel better. To put it bluntly, no one can stand your updated schedule at two o'clock in the morning. Please adjust it quickly You write slowly, I am not in a hurry. I will definitely order it for you if it can be put on the shelves. I will leave it here

Did someone praise me just now? Please don't delete the post that praised me. (´△｀) It's broken

Author, why do you have so few people?

Recruiting supporting actors, recruiting supporting actors, recruiting supporting actors Say important things three times It will appear in the next plot of the Western Continent

Can Shen Nong comment on how well the emotional scenes in this book are written? I liked the introduction quite a lot, but when I saw a female protagonist, I felt a pang in my heart.