Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Rejuvenation

The following content is too formulaic, and it can be seen that the author does not want to fall into the cliché, imposing contradictions and deliberately intensifying the contradictions. However, the purpose of this book is to continuously reincarnate and cultivate immortality. The protagonist has cultivated immortality for many lives and has wisdom and experience to discover the hidden treasures of time, deduce the skills, and lay the foundation for hundreds of generations. He can also manage relationships and luck. I planned my strategy and used my experience and experience as well as the trump card accumulation brought by the years to do things, but I chose to take risks like an ordinary monk who lives and dies. This is especially true as it goes towards the end. The first part is still very consistent with the intention and setting of the article. I can only say that the writing power is lacking. The later part of the article is not my own and I can't control it.

Didn't the author find that there was nothing enjoyable about writing? If you're not good at writing exciting stories, then you can write about regrets in the plot, about parting between life and death, about a firm heart, or about traveling around the mountains and rivers, but the results won't be good. There is no big villain, no life or death crisis, no world of mortals to refine one's heart, it is pure and gradual upgrade. Then why do readers read novels about cultivating immortals? Watching the protagonist come back again and again, it has always been the same routine between the ages of 8 and 25. Various friends from the past life take care of the protagonist in the current life, and then after the protagonist in the current life becomes full-fledged, he repeats the old path of the previous life, makes new friends, and lets them take care of himself in the next life. . . The upgrade is too slow and not enough fun. It's really about practicing physical fitness in the first life, perfecting physical training in the second life, just starting to practice Qi in the third life, building the foundation in the fourth life, and forming elixirs in the fifth life to rush into the Yuanying. Each life is a routine that is stable (repeated) to the extreme (above) Behind Nascent Soul, there are Huashen, Mahayana, and Hedao. If we change the map, there are also the systems of the Great Thousand Worlds, Earth Immortals, Heavenly Immortals, Golden Immortals, Daluo, or God Kings and Immortals. You can't just follow the same routine that the protagonist makes friends and entrusts them to his friends in the next life, right? ? Now it's time to form elixirs, maybe for the fourth or fifth life, this is the routine. The first few dozen chapters made my eyes light up, and I put up with some minor shortcomings. When it comes to the invincible cool articles or daily short stories about life and death, the result is that I can't do both. . . Repeat a routine several times. It is expected to be written like this later, then I really can't accompany you. Personally, I feel that the mortal stream should not be paired with eternal immortality. Originally, the rhythm of Mortal Stream was very slow, emphasizing on slowly accumulating capital, while Eternal Immortal Cultivation emphasized many repetitions. Once the two themes are merged, the only thing the protagonist can really accumulate is that the next time he is 8 to 15 years old, he will have better qualifications. This makes people very tired to watch, and it is not easy to jump into the plot randomly. For example, in the next life of the fake elixir's rebirth, I skipped through the dozens of chapters to see the chapters I wanted to read. The foundation building and golden elixir made me laugh. In a word, I have been holding back in the sect for fifty years, and I went directly from the foundation building to the golden elixir. Now that one or two chapters are done, what should I write when the protagonist transforms into a god in the next two lives? After five hundred years of seclusion, can you directly practice Qi until you become a god? Anyway, the materials have been prepared in the previous life, so close it. If it were not written this way, the protagonist would have at most two lives left to rejuvenate, and then he would have to clear the level in one life. It's a complete mortal upgrade flow. . . So the two themes are really contradictory. What's more, the author didn't just integrate these two themes, because the protagonist is still very cautious. . . And I feel that the author doesn't want to write about supporting roles, revenge, regret, or life and death. It does avoid the possibility of falling into clichés, but it is too bland, like boiled water. Even so, I have read more than a hundred chapters. Maybe it is because the foundation of the beginning is really good, but the operation of rejuvenating many times after forming the pill is really tiring. I hope the author's next book will be better than this one.

The author really has to write things from the perspective of the overall story, rather than the conflict of a certain chapter. The reason why the new chapter is so shocking that many people have abandoned it is because from the overall perspective of this life, you completely invalidated the previous foreshadowing, which is equivalent to us all watching the previous plot in vain, because your writing skills are introductory, which is equivalent to wasting so many days of reading on this plot. The second point is that people's reactions gradually deviate from the natural behavior before, including this "aunt" who gives too much, and the protagonist suddenly gets too much. You want to write it this way, but you don't have enough foreshadowing. I feel like you have forgotten the character design above. The worst thing about an online novel is that the author forgets the setting, but the readers still remember it. If you don't want to understand why people react so strongly to this point, then you will make the same mistake later, and this book will be off the market.

The writing is smooth and the rhythm is just right. I feel like I have written about this type many times, and this time I have completed all the contradictions and reasonable points in the "repeated rebirth" theme. The most important thing is that there is no pressure on the realm, which makes the reading experience very good. Although it is an old theme, it has been written with a new feel. No matter who you are, you have tried your best this time and will support the genuine version.

The book is good. I can read it. After all, I have been reading novels for more than ten years. From the earliest bookstore, I rented books for 2 cents a day. I read "The Eunuch Who Traveled Through the Qing Dynasty," "The World of Mercenaries," "The Sword Master of the Alien World Warcraft," "The Sharp Knife," and the Sterling Silver Earrings. In fact, I am already past that age when reading books. I am getting more and more impetuous, or maybe I am dissatisfied with the current genre of novels. After reading the first few pages of a book, the subsequent plots can probably form a familiar plot in my mind. Be picky. This book can be read and carefully read. It is not as good as some people's peak writing style, but there is still something to read.

I've almost read half of it. First of all, I want to say that I like the first part very much. Otherwise, I wouldn't have watched it for so long. Some of the characters are deeply rooted in people's hearts. The protagonist is kind to others for his own secrets, survives and develops, fights for one life, seeks for eternity, and dances on the graves of his enemies. I feel It should be that he is alone, walking with the Tao, living in the world of mortals, and not touching a single leaf. However, the protagonist cannot let go of the love between his children. In terms of the plot, he takes revenge from the Liu family and takes revenge with just words. I feel that the plot is a bit far-fetched. Can you say that the male protagonist does not have the strength to do such a thing at this point? It doesn't feel like it. But you are saying that what you wrote so vividly and vividly before will be solved in one go. Is it too hasty? It feels like the plot design has been lightened in order to create a meeting between the male and female protagonists. So I originally thought it was a slow-paced book, but suddenly it became fast-paced. Maybe people like to read this kind of book, but I'm sorry that I can't read it anymore.

The beginning was fine, but when I first started to cultivate immortality, I felt quite baffled from the beginning. Participated in the sect trial at the beginning, and wrote seven or eight chapters for it. After passing the trial, the protagonist regretted it, stopped going, and returned to his family. Okay, in this case, I will be the protagonist and continue to live in the family. It is considered stable. It is just giving up resources for safety. Anyway, you can live forever. As a result, within a few years, the early resources were almost used, and the protagonist went to Fairy City again 🤔 So what is the thinking logic of the protagonist you wrote? Does he care about the progress because he cares about stability, so he grinds slowly, or is he willing to take some risks to obtain resources once the progress slows down? The two waves of operations were inconsistent and I didn't understand them at all. ... But on the contrary, the previous operation of giving up entering the sect was even more stupid. The author tries to describe the gap between the sect and the casual cultivators in various places, and it is an insurmountable gap, but the protagonist's "not joining the sect because of danger" becomes increasingly untenable. Because if you also follow the alchemy master route, casual alchemy masters will actually be recruited by the sect to fight on the battlefield. The reason is that in the eyes of the sect, alchemy masters who practice casual cultivation are not considered alchemy masters. So the question is, will the sect's alchemy master do the same? I'm afraid not. So if the protagonist joins a sect and becomes an alchemist, is there really any danger? Does it mean that in such a large sect, even the people who make alchemy and talismans have to fight monsters and explore ruins? All in all, it is not convincing at all.

Run, there is no point in reading anymore. The protagonist defends himself there to prevent the secret of his rejuvenation from being revealed. Well, the sister surnamed Ning can easily see through this place, and the protagonist doesn't pretend to show off directly. The first hundred or so chapters are all jokes. We got along with each other for a few years in Jueling Land, and then we had sex once, and then we reached the middle stage of Foundation Establishment in several lifetimes with the main character. There was a gap of more than a hundred years, and then we met the main character and revealed his past. The main character mentioned above was so cautious that Gou threw them all into the trash. This immortal has also been cultivated in vain. Author, I really don't know how far behind this version is. Either you just write straight-up novels, harem novels, etc., Or you focus on "career", and everything else is a stumbling block on the road. Taoist lovers don't just refer to wives, but as an author, you insist on mixing the latter with the former, and you are not a human being inside or outside.

After reading thirty chapters, the writing became smoother and smoother, and it seemed to be above average. The abilities related to experience and lifespan are quite to my liking, and I feel that there are a lot of points that can be explored. I hope I can keep them.

In the early stage, low-end games such as Qi refining and foundation building could be seen through by those two women, but in the later stages, the high-end games could never be concealed. Don't say that those two women were able to see through the details, and others couldn't. The protagonist's ability is due to the information gap. As long as others know the approximate ability, you can know everything in an instant by looking up the experiences of the protagonists in the past and the genealogy and growth process of the contemporary protagonist. As long as the supporting character does not reduce his intelligence, it is impossible to hide it. There are too many flaws in the ability to rejuvenate, and it is purely supported by the information gap. Purely relying on poor information is actually a bit of a deception. After all, various abilities are possible in the world of immortality. Even if that kind of ability has not appeared, you can still rely on it if you guess. As a result, you told me that there is no information gap at all. Others just know that those blessed by gods can integrate various laws and use the power of that law (it doesn't matter whether the protagonist is followed by a favored by gods or not) Oh, really, in the later stage, unless the protagonist's camp and the enemy camp are given a strong wisdom halo, I can't think of any way for the protagonist to hide that he can rejuvenate. After all, the meaning of your introduction and protagonist is very obvious, which is to build good relationships and accumulate contacts in the previous life, and then use the contacts to grow quickly after rejuvenating. Without the information gap to cover up, in the later period, besides directly abandoning your previous identity and going the lone wolf trend, you also want to hide your rejuvenation.

It became popular after playing Four Lives, with 22 broken chapters, slow pace, inexplicable hostility and cliched plot. It doesn't take a random person to question the true elixir elders. You have to start from scratch to recruit geniuses to prepare for the next life. One chapter a day is pitiful. Poor grades are what you deserve. Keep it on your bookshelf. It is also foreseeable that you will die.

After breaking through to the late stage of Qi refining, the spiritual consciousness is equivalent to the spiritual consciousness in the middle stage of foundation building, and then the spiritual consciousness in the middle stage of foundation building is as high as 15 feet? ? ? 50 Meters? ? ? Is this right? ? ? Okay, let's just say that everyone has their own way of writing. The interesting thing comes again later. In the qi training period, you get elixirs, and the talismans are divided into junior high, middle and late stages, and then the fun comes. Each period is divided into low grade, medium grade, high grade, fine grade, top grade. Well, this is also everyone's own setting. Here comes the next one. The low-grade teleportation talisman in the late first-order stage can jump 300 miles in one space, and the high-grade teleportation talisman can jump 500 miles. Then it is said that it can escape from the hands of the monks in the early stage of foundation building. Is it funny? ? In the early stage of foundation building, the spiritual consciousness of a monk is 10 feet, 33.33 Meters. According to what you wrote about the golden elixir, the spiritual consciousness is magnified 100 times, which is 3000 meters. You can't find the golden elixir even if you travel 500 miles away? ? ? The data is written as if it has not been thought through.

After reading the public chapter, I just subscribed to a few chapters A "strange" thing suddenly appeared I lost all interest. I was watching Immortal Cultivator, and a weird setting suddenly appeared, which was boring Give me my subscription money back, I won't watch it anymore.

In Chapter 20, you can see that he is a cyber eunuch. I can't say that you are not intelligent, but I can only say that your intelligence is just like that. The palace intends to recruit you as a son-in-law and give you a hug. Are you pretending to be determined to seek immortality? Don't want to write about a relationship between a man and a woman and two female characters appear in chapter 20? You even got into an affair with one of them, and you said that now is not a good time to get married and have children? Isn't it suitable for you to touch others? Play with your hands? I originally wanted to continue reading, but when I saw the author's reply in the comment section, I was so angry that I immediately gave up. What about rejuvenating yourself at the age of 40 and not caring if your wife remarries and gets tied up? In his last life, he was harvested and mutilated, and he was rejuvenated at the age of 40. Even if you have not made much progress in this life, the woman is still 40 years old. How many years older than him is the half-old lady, prince, daughter, remarrying? Are the children twenty years old? I feel like the author is insulting my intelligence. What's even more irritating is that the author said things would get better later and that there was an unexpected way to reunite. I'm looking at that one for you! If this is the case in the past, why should I look back? To sum up, if you survive the 20th chapter of the medium-sized poison, you can probably look back on it, so I will just give it up.

The early stage is really good, it can be regarded as food and grass. Quickly passing through the mortal stage, returning to a child for the first time after cultivating immortality, until the protagonist reaches the foundation-building stage and becomes a guest of the sect, the rhythm and plot are good. After breaking through the fake elixir, the plot began to deteriorate, especially the elixir king, who was extremely poisonous. The protagonist has accumulated throughout his life, and his practice progress is very fast. When he reaches the fake elixir, his life span will increase greatly. If he reaches the point of returning to childhood, the protagonist's accumulation will be too deep. At the same time, many characters in the early stage are estimated to have expired, so the plot is forced to arrange to return to childhood. But life, death, and the changes of time are also a necessary part of this kind of longevity novel. The author is too hasty, and the plot arrangement is also stiff. And this kind of treatment only treats the symptoms but not the root cause. The protagonist of the new life should at least form a golden elixir and look forward to Yuanying, right? Then the lifespan will be longer, is it possible to arrange a plot to return to childhood? Returning to a child once again and embarking on the path of spiritual practice again. The content is repetitive, with few updates, the plot is weak, and readers continue to lose, creating a vicious cycle.

When Pig's Feet continues to get entangled with old friends from previous lives, the book becomes less interesting. Abandoned

I just read it recently. I was in the world of immortality, the eternal master, traveling across a large area by ship due to war, and the plot of the phaseless mask. They were basically exactly the same. ① Some of the plots and the human show were completely copied. I have always ordered this book in full, but it turned out to be plagiarized. I will not order it again.

It was disgusting when it appeared, and now the more I describe it, the more disgusting it becomes. Author, have you read too many light novels? Do you have to add someone you consider to be a 'tsundere'? A funny author with more or less fighting qualities.

It's revealed that Goldfinger is very toxic, and the description of the female supporting character who recently ran away is also disgusting. He had to wear a very obscene mask and lick his face with this and that.

This novel has shown signs of collapse from the early stages. This setting allows the protagonist to have a wife but not a heroine. Once there is a heroine and the secret of reincarnation is exposed, plus there is a character who can accompany them forever, the true meaning of this type of novel is lost. Reincarnation of Goldfinger has lost the sense of freshness and expectation for readers, and the writing style is also mediocre, forcing many unreasonable plots (the heroine is also quite forceful), and readers are becoming less and less patient with your novel. Keep writing, the further you go, the fewer people will read it.

Let's put it this way, the Qi training period is divided into the early, middle and late stages of the normal plot, and then from the early stage to the middle stage, there is basically no way to advance without the realm-breaking pill. I was shocked that the elixirs were divided into early, middle and late stages, and there was also a plot like the Dzogchen, a preliminary level of Qi training.

It's really an old lady's foot-binding. It's ugly and long. How is the latest plot written? Don't you have a clue? I really don't understand. It doesn't matter if the number of words is small. I'm fine with that. But why is your plot getting worse and worse? 4,000 Words a day, brother, if you don't ask for quantity, why don't you ask for quality? There is neither quality nor quantity, I really don't know what to say 🤔

The book has been deleted. The rest of the book after the reunion with the heroine is the eighth part of the summer. There is no need to read it.

Alas, look at the real person Gu Infinite Blood Core said to change the text, he changed the text You are a thunderstorm on the shelves In the end, you just changed the cause And re-reading your piece [Chapter 12] I found even worse details The soundproofing ban set by the fake Dan elder, a junior was inexplicably at the critical moment of seduction Walk in and refuse immediately It means that this junior knows and heard It means there is something wrong with this junior As a result, the fake Dan elder has no idea at all, as if he forgot to put a soundproof ban in the middle The second thing Fake Dan and Zhuji talk about something Push the door when the junior Qi practitioner said it Did the fake Dan elder allow you to push it? Did you see the post I made earlier, saying that you have potential for green writing? Do you know why I think so? When the protagonist is promoted to spiritual consciousness, he has a close relationship with heaven and man, and learns that the elders inside are using his own future as bait to tempt him to get close to the elders Normally speaking, you can push this door? You can only watch So do you know? When you wrote this plot inside the house, thunder had already appeared If you can't get in, it's green If you can get in, it's poisonous, it's garbage, it's bugs What plot are you designing? Have you read too many resources recently?

Well, it's a very traditional fairy tale. The protagonist has cheats, but his cheats are relatively new. Once his body starts to decay, he can return to the age of 8. At present, the plot progress will be relatively slow, because he can only enter the world of immortality after reaching chapter 51. The background setting is not bad. The protagonist rises from a place with no spiritual energy and weather, and gradually moves towards the strongest setting. The biggest attraction of this article actually has nothing to do with cheats. I have read a lot of them. If you are in the Life series, you won't have a particularly big feeling about returning to 8 years old. One is immortality, and the other is returning to 8 years old. There is not much difference in essence. What is attractive about it is the wisdom and calm character accumulated by the protagonist after experiencing returning to 8 years old several times, as well as some people and stories he encounters. For now, it is considered food and grass, and the viewing index is three stars. However, this type is not much different from immortality lines, so you will definitely feel tired after watching it.

What does finessing look like?

The book is okay, and I can give it an average-to-high rating. There are basically no problems with the character. The character of the protagonist changes with his identity. In addition, the author's writing is excellent, and it can be regarded as a little fairy grass.

It's very good. I don't know why so few people have read it. I think it's probably the reincarnation of an old eunuch. The writing style is a bit like the reincarnation of a cultivator, but it's a little more humane than that one. I personally feel that it's a high-quality book if it's written normally.

Ouch, it's so silky smooth, I love watching it!

It looks good, but what is important is to advance slowly, step by step, making people feel like a spring breeze...