The Ancient Giant Bear That Lives in the World of Immortality

Test the poison and see chapter 200. Persuaded to quit, the poisonous points are constant. The protagonist's attribute column comes from the blood inheritance and the mother bear's fault. He has been frustrated from the beginning to now. Chapter 200 has not opened up the situation, and he is still being hunted. There is no main line wavering, and it can be seen that the author has no outline, and the daily routine destroys the previous plan and temporarily changes course. It is said that he is a righteous person, but he is reckless every day. This is the first time I have seen someone who adds points without reaching the limit. He goes out to rush and gets blood every time. Then he adds points temporarily and gets stuck in various ways. It is extremely unfriendly to obsessive-compulsive disorder. Emperor Yan stuck points to save people, but you are stuck in everything! You often add points to practice something until you are just one step away from stopping. Are you playing with me here? Because of being stubborn, there is no fun point, the game is constantly wavering without development, the levels are confusing and the levels are unclear, and there are a lot of data calculation errors. Anyway, I withdrew it, but I spent money, so it is reasonable to leave a negative review. I read this thing because it is one of the few stories about exotic beasts, and it gave me a lot of trouble.

After reading Chapter 266, I feel that the protagonist is beginning to collect the harem 🙂, but the protagonist is not fully developed yet, and the whole world is the enemy of the protagonist. One person is wandering around and becomes two people. I didn't believe anything I said before and started to believe in Snow Wolf. I couldn't accept it, so I slipped away.

Write the Baby Crying Curse here. It feels too intellectual. Out of nowhere, he went to fight a second-grade sea monster. Still fighting them in their home court - sea water. What about your previous caution? That's not how breakthroughs happen. And General Wolf would rather be petrified for three thousand years to save her daughter, who has rebelled. Still want to save?

It's nothing but the protagonist's luck. Some people are not smart enough to use tools to create traps and transform the environment. He has also been plotted by bugs and beasts. There are plug-ins but they are not developed and used to grow, and they all rely on recklessly practicing resistance 😅

It's poisonous, it's too poisonous. What the author wrote is different. There is no sense of satisfaction, and upgrading is useless. Do you really give the protagonist room for development? He just closes his eyes every day and runs away. Running away does not mean being lazy! If it doesn't work, let's go and see how Han Li escapes. It doesn't feel comfortable at all. It makes me feel tight in the chest and short of breath. Anyway, I don't recommend it very much. I'll give it a try.

The front part is pretty good, although there is no female protagonist, but the middle part directly takes the wife, and the back part opens the harem, it feels so vulgar, I have to abandon it.

It's good. The protagonist breaks out of the encirclement. The fun part is to break free and let him do whatever he wants. You can look at the reactions of demons and humans from a different perspective: confusion and helplessness. The protagonist should be able to flow smoothly without any delay. The foreshadowing of the snake demon here will dilute the feeling of escaping and make it seem a bit procrastinating. In order to get out of the circle perfectly, there is no need. Anyway, the human race has surrounded Centipede Ridge. Do they still have the energy to surround Tiandao Mountain? It can make the humans doubt whether the escape was an illusion. The human race even sent people to search, and the protagonist escaped during the pursuit, leaving the human race unable to find him. The human race was in a dilemma between searching with all their strength and continuing the siege. There is much to write about. The main character's stroke epidemic can be written in more detail. Just like rheumatism and ventilation, the aura is used to slowly remove the poison. Otherwise, it would be useless to experience hair loss all the time and pain all over the body. The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality Han Paopao also has a plot of jumping out of the encirclement. That is to escape thousands of miles and never look back. It looks pretty cool. Come on, old bird, the reversal should be more foreshadowing. Old fans can accept it, but newbies may not be able to read it. In the end, the book needs to be written a little more, but it always ends abruptly. You don't want your sister-in-law to feel the same way, right? If I can't continue writing, I will write about farming. Everyone likes to read it.

Why not write about the genre you are good at, such as doomsday hegemony, farming and black city, with less conspiracy.

When I saw Chapter 273, the protagonist, a bear whose whole family was killed, was chased from the Western Wilderness to the desert, the desert to the sea, and the sea to the Bee Kingdom. Hundreds of thousands and millions of monsters and humans died. Suddenly the protagonist turned into a virgin, divided the human race into five qi, and said that the human race was bad because of people who cultivated bad qi. He went to the West Sea Monster Clan to challenge the second-grade monster clan for a human baby's baby crying curse? ? ? What the hell, what level of moral kidnapping is this? You can't kidnap a racial enemy. You are being chased like a dog. In a war with tens of millions of dead people, you go to save a baby and you are exposed. The Leshan Giant Buddha has to make way for the protagonist. .

The style of this book is a battle royale, which means you have to constantly suppress the protagonist, use swords, constantly create various adversities and accidents, and constantly struggle for survival. If you like this kind of thing, you can read it. Those who like cool writing, invincible flow, farming, family fun and other elements need to retreat. Generally speaking, food or poisonous weeds

And I can't stand it anymore. You are not thorough, but you are causing trouble in various ways, and then you are hindered by the troubles you caused, and then you finally get better. Then you change the map and cause new troubles, and then you are delayed by new monsters. Is it interesting for you to keep suppressing it? As long as the main character develops stably for a year and has more than this attribute. If you encounter a monster and stay there for three months, the big monster will not cultivate, right? Because it is a bigger thing, it will stare at you for a quarter. How did he survive? He is raised. Let's see when.

Be patient when you should gamble, and gamble when you have to change your attitude. In addition, the author has a strong ability to screen readers, and screens them every dozen chapters.

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I didn't react until I finished reading. It has always been quite depressing. I would call it the history of pressure cooker cooking

Development flow, running account, if you write slowly, you will definitely fall into the street. Learn some light novels, although it is not good, but it is enough to fill it up.

Although I have been following this book, there is a flaw. In the second stage of the ancient giant bear, the infants were tired after running one kilometer and needed to recover. This is nothing in the animal world, but this is the world of cultivating immortals. Is this data wrong?

The demon path is the demon path, and it doesn't eat people. Isn't it interesting? It's gone, it's gone

The more I look at it, the more confusing it becomes. The basic data for upgrading are both unreasonable and verbose. 1. The origin setting of the protagonist is quite contradictory. Let's say that the protagonist comes from a good background. I won't say that the basic attributes are low. Each time you increase the basic attributes, you only add 1 point. Can you reach the full level attribute? It's hard to say 100 points, and the body grows slowly. As a giant bear that can use mountains as weapons, it can't be less than 10 meters in adult size. How can this combat power data match the top monsters? The protagonist is a wild species and is coveted by various monster kings. The protagonist's mother He was even able to compete with the top human monks, but the protagonist was bullied by all kinds of goblins, including little goblins. This was very strange. Even if he was a cub, as a wild monster race, the basic talent should be higher than that of the low-level goblins, just like the young cubs in the animal world. The difference in body shape and strength between an elephant and an adult mouse is obvious. The protagonist is a monster, and it should have high basic attributes, high ceilings and high talents of its race. As a result, the attribute data of the protagonist... 2. The combat power of humans and monsters are completely unequal, and it feels like It's similar to how modern people go hunting in the primeval forest. If they want to play, they can team up with bows, arrows, and guns to go on an adventure. If they don't want to, they can drive a tank and forklift all the way. It's more fun as a human, but the protagonist is placed on the animal side. He has to survive in the forest and avoid it. If humans come to hunt, logically it will be a tragedy in the future; 3. The world where the protagonist lives should be a world of immortal cultivation, and the protagonist is a wild species. What is the lifespan of the protagonist's race? How many years does the protagonist's race usually take from childhood to adulthood? What is the strength of the protagonist after adulthood? Which level is it? What is the approximate range of attributes that each level of strength can be converted into? Then there are more than 100 chapters. The protagonist is in a world that has not passed 2 years, and the strength attribute is at kindergarten level. I have begun to explore the new world, because it is impossible not to explore, and humans have to fight. Here, the protagonist is not unwilling to be stubborn, but the environment does not allow it. But according to the author's writing, the Great Demon lasts for thousands of years, and it takes eight or nine hundred years to open up wasteland and build a city. How many years does it take for the protagonist to reach adulthood, how many years does it take to reach the strength of the Great Demon, and how many attributes are needed to reach the top of the world and live peacefully.

Author, you always start but end, and there is obviously something wrong with your writing method. I really recommend that you save at least 200 chapters before publishing the book. Before writing every day, spend half an hour to an hour thinking about the framework before writing! ! ! In this way, when the writing period is over, you will still have manuscripts saved to buffer you, and you will not be in a hurry to write. Also, try to keep the manuscripts saved at more than 200 chapters! ! ! If you often receive monthly votes, rewards, and extra updates, then save 250 or 300 chapters before publishing the book! ! ! The more manuscripts you save, the better the logic of the full text will be, because you have enough time to think! ! !

It's frustrating, it's so frustrating, there are almost 300 photos, I'm just being chased all the time, I'm frustrated all the time, there's no moment where I'm pretending to be a slap in the face. This is no longer cowardice, this is already true, everyone will step on the mice on the roadside.

In the introduction, he is very stubborn, but in fact, he is always reckless. It is strange that he only has a solution after encountering trouble. He can go to places without threats to get things but he has to touch the tiger's butt. If he wants to be stubborn, he should first click on hiding and perception, then agility and defense (note that agility has a higher priority than defense). After all, who is willing to fight you head-on? They don't always hide first, and then get caught. Run away when you find it, and do your best if you can't run. I can understand why you don't use agility and defense, and look around the wolves. The block has been cleared later, and you still spend 500 spiritual energy for a little defense, and you don't want to use agility of 20 spiritual energy, or concealment and perception of 100 spiritual energy. You are really a super reckless "gou" style who has always been beaten, right? 🙂

Does anyone subscribe to this book? Are the results okay? Top hydrology. There was no content, so he put it on the shelves. According to the way he wrote it, he couldn't write 100,000 pieces. Just write one. Hide under the foot of the mountain to soak up some sunshine. I sigh that those big demon monks are really awesome. Then go drink water. Take a look at your own page to see which resistances you need to take. Eat some grass and some fruit. Okay, this chapter is over and it will be repeated in the next chapter.

After the Snake Guard appeared, I started to feel like I couldn't stand it anymore. There is a subtle [change of flavor] feeling. Just like Uzumaki Naruto, a poor orphan who was bullied, he got everything after working hard. Then the plot comes out and tells you that his father is the Fourth Hokage. The previous encouragement and injustice suffered were all logically flawed. The same goes for the protagonist. He was so miserable when he first appeared, wandering between life and death every day. How does he look like the son of the ancient bear king? Then, after working hard on his own, he achieved some results, and suddenly three hundred Snake Guard subordinates appeared. What did you do early? [Grassroots Struggle] just turned into [Prince's Revenge]. The whole taste was off. The traveler's golden finger is very good, and he must create a [Demon Emperor Dad]. Is this because a system cheat is not enough, and a grandfather cheat is needed? Logic is broken. ————————————Dividing Line Of course I followed more than 200 chapters because I still liked it very much from the beginning. I loved it until I was forced to part ways with the team. I thought we would all go on an adventure together in the Black Forest. The part that foreshadows so many emotions. Although the sudden separation feels a bit strange, I am also curious whether the protagonist will return to the original "solo training" mode. The result is that the biological grandfather of the Demon Emperor has 300 Snake Guards... It feels the same as watching hundreds of episodes of Naruto Uzumaki and then learning that his father is the Fourth Generation Me Ichimo.

After reading what one person said in the comment area, I think it makes sense. He thinks that Gou already has the strength to kill, but he still insists on continuing to accumulate strength. I think there's nothing wrong with it, but what the author wrote is that the protagonist has always been at the bottom of the food chain, and is about to die at every turn. He works hard to reach level 10, and a level 100 monster appears. He is going to die every minute. Then he works hard to level 100, and a level 1000 monster appears, and he is going to die again every minute. How can I put it, it's hard to stand up. I feel that the protagonist is too suffocated.

Before, he was still as ruthless and ruthless as an old dog, but when he met Snow Wolf's mother, he changed into a different person. He told others everything from his heart and soul, as if he had been taken away by some breeding boar Madonna, which is quite rubbish.

After reading Chapter 15, the protagonist's life hangs by a thread almost a dozen times, and he almost dies once in the last chapter. What kind of novel is this? The author doesn't think what he wrote is interesting, does he?

Increase in body weight and size does not add attributes. . . What is this writing about? Is it reasonable? . Don't you need a little common sense?

The author's writing style and brain are very good, but sometimes the plot development is very well controlled, sometimes he lets himself go, sometimes it seems like there is a missing link, and he doesn't know why he is so anxious, and then he adds drama randomly. Does the author really not understand what the readers want to see? Sometimes logic can be more self-consistent. I have been writing books for so many years and they often end up unfinished. I don't know what I think. Many books obviously have the potential to become hits, but in the end they are ruined by me. Alas, there is nothing I can do.

Write slowly, don't make your imagination too big, don't make the hole too deep, just be steady and it will look good.

In the previous waves, I was almost beaten to death by others blocking the door. I relied on the protagonist's aura to survive, but in the end, I had to stay still for 3 seconds to use the stealth function. The key is to add stealth. Every time, he returns to the cracks in the stone and gives away his head. After being squatted several times, the protagonist always feels that others are just like him.