Immortal Estate!

I thought of several buildings that I could try. One is the Gua divination building, where the protagonist learns some divination skills and can divine for himself before going out, or to avoid other people's predictions; the other is the corpse raising ground or the Yin ghost altar, where Tuyue and Yin ghosts are cultivated to speed up the cultivation and produce benign mutations.

In the later stage, I feel that the high-end combat power comes out immediately. In the early stage, Cangluo, Jiyuan, Huanggu are at the top of Nascent Soul, Transformation God Phoenix Feather, and Lianxu are almost invisible. The span between the early stage and the later stage is slightly larger, which is more impactful in terms of perception. The plot is quite exciting, but after all, it is different from mortals. After going to the spirit world, the difference in combat power becomes very big. In the same human world, there are many monks in the New World, such as Yuan Ying, who transforms into a god like a dog, and who refines the void and merges into a body. The perception is relatively impactful. But the plot picks up in the later stages, and it's more enjoyable to watch without the early stage drama. The protagonist's skills are getting better and better. Personally, I feel that the plot after the Nascent Soul stage is still very enjoyable to watch. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

First of all, there are no recommended buildings Secondly, it is very important. If the author can see it, please don't hesitate to add more female protagonists, 😃 I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortality, and the author's writing is very flavorful. Advantages: 1. The system is very abnormal but the author has a good rhythm and the values ​​​​are just right. There will be no situation where you are invincible at the same level in the early stage. A common problem of many systems that are popular in cultivating immortals is that the system is too strong, which destroys the world view of cultivating immortals and makes cultivating immortals casual. 2. The author's emotional drama is really good, which is very good among the popular fairy tales. The master-disciple relationship and brotherhood in Shuilong Sect are well written, not blunt, and quite touching. I like many characters very much. I only watched it once, and the shortcomings are not very obvious. There are currently no problems such as the plot being homogeneous or the villain losing his mind. The protagonist in the article does not fight for the moment but only seeks to achieve immortality. I hope the author can maintain his status and the work can be completed smoothly and successfully.

A good book, with good writing, good plot, and good pace. It neither blindly mentions the combat power nor suppresses the combat power based on the water story.

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I was a little disappointed with the latest plot of Ji Yuan joining the Bone Nightmare Sect. Specifically, he was dissatisfied with the plot where he was threatened by the Nascent Soul monk, had no choice but to hand over the Yinshen in order to gain trust, and was forced to become a disciple. My dissatisfaction mainly stems from the lack of growth of the character: when he is weak and helpless, he chooses to endure, and readers can sympathize with him; but when his cultivation has reached the golden elixir, he still falls into a situation where he is absolutely crushed by high-level monks, so much so that he has to surrender the Yinshen and lose his autonomy to save his life. This makes his previous growth seem futile, and the sense of powerlessness exaggerated by the plot is also very depressing.

Why don't you have any negative reviews? This is unreasonable. Great works such as Cover the Sky and Lord of Mysteries were criticized a lot when they were written.

This book has been very well written until now. It is not toxic to me. It is a fairy tale. I recommend everyone to read it. However, there are some minor problems in my opinion. Of course, I still recommend this novel. It is very good. I just have some ideas that I think would be better 1. The fish pond that transforms into a dragon can only turn into one kind of dragon, which is a bit like Pokémon. Carp can only turn into an ice dragon. This is probably because the author conceived the fish pond next to an ice dragon, but to be honest, this kind of targeted evolution looks uncomfortable and feels destined. 2. Tu Yue, the protagonist always doesn't I am willing to let Tu Yue do this and that, saying that I am not willing to give it up. In fact, Tu Yue was bought, and it is really not that precious. The author thinks it is precious, probably because Tu Yue is so powerful in the future he conceived, but the current Tu Yue is not precious. You build her foundation. To be honest, it is much more cost-effective for you to buy a new female corpse with foundation building. Lord If the author keeps saying that he is reluctant to give up, it seems so precious and unnecessary. It is better to say that he has feelings from the beginning, which seems more appropriate and reasonable 3. The soil dug by the chicken pen, the author writes that the chicken will grow sharp claws, and then dig out the precious soil, but in this way, the understanding of that soil should be that the more chickens there are The more you dig, but the written amount is a fixed amount per month, it seems very conflicting 4. The upgrade conditions written for several buildings are to practice Qi to kill the foundation, and to build the foundation to kill the golden elixir. I think this kind of thing is very bad, because it seems that there is no fault tolerance, just like if you have not practiced the Qi to kill the foundation, and the foundation to kill the golden elixir, Then I found out that the building could not be upgraded until I got the foundation pill. The building was stuck at that level. Although this is a novel and the author would definitely not write it like that, it still seems very bad. If you want to write it, it would be more appropriate to write it like you need to cross a large boundary to kill enemies (minimum kill to build a foundation). , Or simply kill the foundation or golden elixir 5. The word "mother" is a little too much, and the protagonist has a bit of a mouth habit, but it's not a big deal. It's just that these two words are a bit dramatic. When I see it, I think of bandits, and I feel like I want to kill him These are some of my small opinions, but I still think this book is very good, and there are no poisonous points. The above are at most my prejudices, not shortcomings, and the characters are all very well drawn. Come on, author. I gave my monthly ticket and everything else. I hope it can continue to be good and don't end up being a bad ending or a eunuch.

Ask me, is there really such a stupid plot?

You basically didn't depict group portraits in the previous chapters (to be honest, your dragon pets are more impressive than those group portraits), or you started with the sect style, how could you change the style midway? The subsequent plot would be too different if it were from someone else's perspective. How to unfold the subsequent plot from someone else's perspective? Whether you are looking for the master or going to the Demon God Continent to find the sister you recognize (I don't remember the name), Ji Yuan himself needs to be the introduction to guide the plot line of the new continent. Besides, your cave can be upgraded to accommodate people, don't you remember? You can bring your trusted senior sisters and brothers to Cave Heaven to open up a new world together. This is also feasible. The Immortal Prison itself is carried with you. If you want to play Zongmen Style and use your spiritual effects on the sect for a long time, the secrets will definitely be leaked. There are only a few geniuses in the Water Dragon Sect, and the rest of the rotten fish and shrimps cannot be supported at all Senior sisters and brothers who can be trusted will still have spiritual effects to improve them if they are put into the cave. Your cave spiritual effect is your biggest secret. How dare you improve it for everyone in the sect? Are you crazy? Only fellow disciples and brothers who know the basics can improve their talents and strength and accompany you to grow and develop without fear of revealing your biggest trump card. The open effect of the sect flow is not feasible. It makes no sense with your cautious and cautious character Ji Yuan. It is better to improve yourself and develop with a few team members. The foundation of the sect is the upper level. As long as the upper level's combat power and talent can keep up with the little Karami below, they can recruit as many as they want

Master

It's really a scam to order all the author's books.

The overall impression is okay, and the plot feels a bit simple. After reading the first part, you can roughly know what to write in the following chapters. Perhaps as book friends said, it is due to a lack of imagination and experience, but the writing style is still quite good. You can read it when you are short of books. Mainly, it is average overall, compared to other good books. 🙂

The map of the Human World was redrawn based on the author's hand-drawn map.

I would like all interested Taoists to help me think about which buildings can be upgraded, and what are the building effects of each level? Let's brainstorm and crowdfund a book!

I have to praise this book. Even my piracy websites can't read this book. I have to pay to read it. The anti-piracy work is really good.

Didn't I start to want to read it after reading the introduction? Then I opened the table of contents and saw that it was more than three million words before Yuanying. There was also a book at the beginning that was more than four million words before it was Yuanying. According to your way of writing, it would not have to cost ten million to finish. I really don't like to follow updates. It's too torturous. Author, how many words do you plan to write in this book?

There were several books, including this one, that I couldn't put down. After a while, I looked at the results and realized that they were not good.

The author should be careful not to lose his realm and combat power. It is normal for the protagonist to move to a lower level. It is also reasonable if he has a powerful trump card to move to a higher level. But in your latest chapter, a passerby said that he could not beat him at the early stage of divine transformation, which is like the peak of Yuanying. How can you do this if you write like this for a passerby? Yuanying has reached the chasm of divine transformation, which is a huge chasm.

The protagonist seems to know everything, but he is not good at it. Most of the buildings have no effect on the existing combat power. Can't keep up with the protagonist's realm. Many of them are useless. Fu: Transition in the early stage, almost no writing now. Qi: It's been a long time since we last met. Dan: It feels like there are no other elixirs written about in the whole article. Zhen: There is no need for him to fight now. Lingtian: I guess the protagonist doesn't even farm his own land until later. All magical effects are useless. There are also spells, but I haven't seen them before. The protagonist has other spells.

At such a young age, he has already mastered all aspects of the novel very well. This book is very likely to become more popular. As a 20-year-old bookworm, I have a few suggestions. 1. The protagonist's combat power system after foundation building is relatively vague. It can be felt that the author wants to create a double vest, but the magic system is not the future path of the protagonist after all. After the foundation building, the entire system does not give a particularly clear feeling about the improvement of the protagonist's combat power. To be clearer, the protagonist's upgrade, expectation and power introduction of the righteous means are vague. If the sense of clarity is poor, the sense of refreshment and substitution will be poor. 2. The same system feels a bit messy and not so clear. In fact, around the time of foundation building, the system was laid out and set up very well. Fish ponds, pens, pig pens, spiritual veins, meditation rooms, and Tiangongfang are all more than enough to support the protagonist in upgrading and fighting monsters in a very satisfying way. If there are any more, it will collapse. If everyone upgrades later, how many chapters will the protagonist have to write just to upgrade the system? This is an issue that requires some attention. For example, I don't think the honeycombs and mass graves are very necessary, and regarding the issue of Touring Souls, I personally don't like the protagonist finding zombie puppets cute. 3. The protagonist's cultivation speed is slightly inconsistent with the intensity of the confrontation between the forces in the entire environment. With the current strength of the protagonist, it is difficult to have any impact on the overall situation of Shangdong and Shangxi. The author has laid out the entire background and story line very well, but if the protagonist's cultivation level cannot match the intensity of confrontation in the general environment, the protagonist will either change maps like a mortal cultivating an immortal, or his passion will not improve, and his passion will not improve. It will be difficult to achieve results quickly in online writing. After all, not everyone is Wangyu, and even Wangyu may not be able to eat well now. The above are some of my opinions. The author has written very well, but there is still room. I think there is an opportunity to write a book to become a god, and the systematic writing will produce a great master. It is recommended that the author's writing method be used as a reference to the global martial arts. If you lean a little more on that method, the results will be better.

The protagonist must not be a eunuch. If you can't stand it, you'll engage in pornography, and you'll be a virgin for hundreds of years. It's too poisonous.

Stop writing Tu Yue's dialogue, it will give people a headache

I have read so many novels, but what I like most is the first third of a novel. I watch the protagonist grow up from a low-level person, cautiously and step by step. On the contrary, in the middle and late stages, the protagonist grew up and gradually lost interest. Now that the protagonist is about to enter the Nascent Soul, the map will inevitably change after the Nascent Soul. Which continent will the next map be changed to? Martial God Continent? Demon God Continent? Several dragons will also break through the mid-stage Nascent Soul transformation, so I'm looking forward to it. Tu Yue also became conscious. By the way, when will a phoenix emerge from the chicken coop, and how will this unfold?

So what is the logic behind killing friendly troops in Chapter 220?

I would like to ask, why don't you build a training room to increase your training speed? The protagonist's qualifications are not that good to begin with. Wouldn't it be good to have this to refresh your training speed? It seems that the protagonist has never tried to write about whether the training room can trigger the system and deliberately suppress it? ? ? If not, why not write down and try?

I haven't read it yet. Can you stand this name?

It doesn't have the refreshing feeling of having accumulated a lot of experience in the farming genre, and it doesn't read like the mortal genre. Overall, it's not a fun article. If you have read too much Shuangwen, you can read this book to wash your mind. I feel that the function of this book is to wash my brain and calm myself down 😎

This book is quite good, and it ranks first in the audiobook list next door