
This Is a Game About Cultivating Immortals, but the Operation Is Bad
这是修仙游戏,但运营烂了
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The writing is okay, but I don't think it will last long.
I got it from watching the promotion of sand sculpture animation. It's a decently entertaining book about cultivating immortality, and the density of the plot is high, but it doesn't feel like it lasts long. In fact, I can see that it wants to expand the worldview. For example, in the main plot, if you kill and kill, you will fall into the devil, but if you don't "fight monsters", you have no materials and no experience, this is very conflicting. It seems that the author is downplaying this, for example, only the main plot choices will affect the fallen demon. There are also many side jobs in cultivating immortals. As the first person in the first echelon of the fourth district, he is now engaged in alchemy. Talismans, formations, weapon refining, and spiritual pets have not been covered yet, but there is a risk of homogenization. Maybe the author didn't intend to make it long?
After reading the first few chapters, it turns out that everyone is cultivating immortality. No one can receive 5 spirit stones every day. RMB: Lingshi, 1000:1. They can also trade spiritual stones with each other. Is this economy going to collapse?
Some people are so strange
Why do some people think that 0.1% Off makes no difference to rich people? In reality, some people get 0.1% Off on anything they buy. They just want to be rich without any brains.
The author took advantage of the lack of people and quickly changed the part about elixir training. The success rate of high-level alchemists who practice low-level elixirs is too low.
Many people struggle with the issue of purchasing power and failure
First of all, when the district was first opened, not many spiritual stones issued by the system could be circulated after being removed for personal use. The state may require civil servants to hand over some excess spiritual stones and capital may be obtained through some methods such as nursing homes, deception, and some people who sell spiritual stones to improve their current lives. However, it must be scattered, but it is still not large enough. In addition, these spiritual stones cannot be concentrated on one person, so some people may have spent more money than pig's feet in the past few days. But after the pig's trotters snowballed and sold equipment, the gap became wider and wider. The amount of spiritual stones collected by others could not be infinite, because after the zone was opened for a period of time, everyone's demand for spiritual stones became larger and larger. The second pig's trotters began to sell equipment, and others in the world The collected spirit stones are recycled. This cycle is about 20,000 spirit stones per day, and the purchasing power is equivalent to 2 million spirit stones. The spirit stones obtained by the state cannot be used by just one person. There may be bias, but they will still be distributed in large quantities, that is, the resources given by the school and the resources of the army. According to the latest bloodline, 120 million spirit stones, one thousand for one spirit stone, 120 billion yuan, who in the country can get it. But the rise of pig's feet krypton has reached the later stage. To be honest, according to the settings, one district should not be able to buy many spirit stones with RMB, because food, clothing, housing and transportation can be solved offline by synchronization, and the necessity of improving life offline is also very small. And this game can make people become immortals and live longer, so selling spiritual stones as necessities in RMB is a very, very loss. When all the necessities of life can be solved by games, RMB will normally be replaced by spiritual stones.
To be honest, even if you get a 0.1% Discount, it's still not as good as others.
Personal impression
After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's imagination is not rich enough. It has been several years since the server was launched. The country still has order and the government is still there, which proves that the army still obeys orders. It will not assemble all the troops to gather spiritual stones. First, cultivate a few powerful powers, control the world, gather global resources, quickly become an immortal and explore the universe. The first team still has a few golden elixirs and it's funny
Some of what the author wrote is conservative. In reality, the text-based immortality stomping game is more exaggerated than this. One person plays on a server, and the first in the district server fights the remaining 99 people. The upper limit of the copy reward damage is 2 billion, and the krypton guy has more than 10 billion. It can only be said that the author is still conservative.
I haven't read the book yet, but the 0.1% Discount in the introduction is so much? Is the difference between ordinary people and ordinary rich people really only 100 times? Even if the protagonist is really only 100 times different from ordinary rich people, what about... What about the top class?
The subject matter is good, but the setting is rubbish. The protagonist's plug-in is 0.1% Off, which means he has a hundred times more spiritual stones than ordinary people. Ordinary people get five yuan a day, and the protagonist gets five hundred yuan a day. But the spiritual stones can be traded for 1,000 to 3,000 yuan each. So why can the protagonist compare to the rich people who spend money on krypton gold?
In fact, when I saw it later, I recommended that the author give the protagonist some ways to obtain spiritual stones, or write a lottery so that the protagonist can get more, because the protagonist can easily fight in a large area and it will cost tens of millions of spiritual stones, and there are only so many ways to obtain spiritual stones. A single spiritual stone mine can only mine one million. Spirit stones can be solved with European energy in the early stage. In the later stage, everyone else can get relatively high rewards in this chapter's anniversary benefit, but the protagonist directly downgraded their sect level after seeing their screenshots. Do they think that the protagonist was so lucky in the past that he failed to explode good things this time? To be able to squander tens of millions of spiritual stones by selling magic weapons must be very European, but why can't you get good things from an ordinary free gift package? In order to maintain your character, shouldn't you forge some methods of obtaining spiritual stones? This spiritual stone must not be washed, or there are more channels to obtain spiritual stones in the world, than If you buy more spiritual stone mines, or open a large world trade, you can obtain spiritual stones from NPCs, and then resell props to NPCs, or NPCs can recycle props, brush up their own alchemy refining tools, sell elixirs and magic weapons to NPCs, and claim to the outside world that it is so easy for high-level alchemy refining masters to make money.
Just your realistic way of writing
To be honest, none of the badly written ones are as rigorous as the main character in the ancient family capital robbery virtual game.
The subject matter is somewhat creative, but the setting seems to be full of loopholes.
It's too watery, and there are so many little poisonous points that I'm too lazy to complain about it.
If you turn in a discounted plug-in at the beginning, you won't be promoted directly. You can directly ascend.
You can buy things with a 0.1% Discount and directly cooperate with the country to directly draw a layer and earn a lot of money.
I've finished reading it with my unlimited reading coupon. I'll give you a spoiler. You don't need to read the rest of Chapter 400. It's almost the end and it's all about attribute numbers.
I feel like there are some loopholes in the smuggling plot.
When Chapter 100 comes, monks from other districts appear in the protagonist's area to resell equipment. The amount of resold equipment even reduces the price of the protagonist's equipment by a large part. It can be seen that there are a lot of them. Then why doesn't zf also participate? You can arm the Taiyao Department with the skills and equipment from other districts. Since zf can let monks from other districts come over as teachers, why not bring a group over to the fourth district? Or is it because of camp issues that only demonic monks can "illegally" carry supplies?
Please reduce all kinds of verbal descriptions
I have read hundreds of chapters of this book, and I feel that in almost every chapter the author describes in detail the conditions for completing various tasks, or the detailed attributes and skills of various equipment, and various system prompts (the world prompts are repeated three times at every turn). To be honest, the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. It is recommended that the author conceives more plots and occasionally writes about frustrations (although it is a refreshing article, it is boring to be happy all the time). And if I remember correctly, I seem to have written about reality in terms of Qi Refining and Foundation Building. How long has it been since I wrote about reality? Even if you meet some people you can meet in real life from the game, at least you have to write a heroine, or lay out some foreshadowing. Finally, is District 4 the only protagonist worth describing? It seems that almost nothing about District 4 has been written since the formation of Dan. As the number one in District 4, I should write more about the interaction with District 4 and my own sect. That's all I have to say, author, please take care of yourself.
Is there too many holes that the author forgot to fill in?
Not to mention that there is only one Taoist companion slot out of the 100 for the protagonist, and I completely forgot to add a new Taoist companion. As a result, this only Taoist companion has not been online since he took the bloodline The so-called main plot has not been described for a long time. At that time, it was said that there was a realm bottleneck, but now that I am a Nascent Soul, I will not describe it Chi There is almost no description of the Lian Shenzhou NPC. According to the author's description, it should be a very large main plot and side plot. In the end, the only intersection point is that the protagonist is taken to the dungeon The sub-class of drawing talismans has been around for some time, but it has not been described yet. The only talisman that the protagonist knows currently is It's a Tao level, and the low-level ones don't know it, which is obviously a very huge gold point The protagonist's sect is basically an official staff, and they are developing with all their strength every day. Logically speaking, they should be very strong, but the author has never described it I bought four of them in one go during the combat power improvement week. Spiritual roots, two constitutions, but the result is that the four spiritual roots have no plot at all. Those two constitutions have been described as adding buffs during the battle In the latest plot, the protagonist received a recruitment letter and added 10 points of luck, which directly increased the protagonist's explosion rate by a large amount. But haven't there been pills that increase luck before? There is also a day during the combat power improvement week where five titles that increase luck are sold. The luck added in these two places is fake.
Is he cultivating a fake immortal?
The protagonist is just an ordinary person playing online games. There is no improvement in realm skills or anything like that on the protagonist. The feeling of building a foundation elixir is just a numerical value. There are no physical manifestations or changes at all. According to the protagonist, there is no improvement in mental energy. After all, he is a fake immortal.
The subject matter is novel, but the content is relatively general and can barely be regarded as food.
It makes no sense. There are so many inspirations for this kind of theme. Why are updates so slow?
It is recommended not to write so many swear words, it feels very young.
Give some advice to the author
The protagonist has now established a foundation. He has passed the novice stage and can further develop the game content (version update?) For example, adding different optional branches and hidden branches in the story mode. After all, it would be too monotonous for tens of millions of players to share the same plot. It allows players to diversify the plot and develop sub-careers, such as alchemy, weapon refining, formations, talismans, seals and other krypton gold content. To develop life players in the player group, you can gain experience through sub-professional behaviors, such as "You have insights into the avenue when refining alchemy/refining weapons/laying out formations/drawing talismans, and your experience increases***" The experience growth rate can be smaller than that of cultivation. After all, they produce resources in the process. Cave pets and other content can also be put on the agenda. Recently, the protagonist has been reselling magic weapons, and the number of spiritual stones has increased dramatically. They can also be re-consumed through these two bottomless pits.
There are a lot of bugs. Even if I don't want to think about it, I can't accept it.
Let me give you an example. After killing the first monster in the Blood Demon Deep Sea during the last merit grind, the merits were 3.91 Million. Then fifteen days later, "the merits came to more than 3 million." I'm QNM, why don't I go and eat💩, and then something even more outrageous came, the protagonist and Ye Hao In Sakura Showdown, the protagonist said that it would be nice if he had that middle-grade fairy weapon. He blamed the planner for blocking his merits. I fucked up the author M. The fairy weapon has one million merits. Not to mention the bugs, you already have three million. You should go and change it. You didn't change it yourself. What did you post to me?
Is Fu Qiluo really sexy? Is there no plot behind it? Fill in the holes
This is too short, I would say ten chapters a day
Not rigorous, Shuilinggen! Taobao? No record?
This book is like all books where the protagonist in cross-level battles is a genius. In the end, the protagonist won entirely by luck, and it had little to do with whether it was a 0.1% Discount. He was suppressed by the high-player guild and acted like a turtle throughout the whole process.