Why Are They All Passive Skills?

It's so damn toxic that I can only bear to read it. The subject matter is a good one, but it's a pity that the author keeps writing about toxicology, and many illogical things just happen. In such a dangerous place, the protagonist takes a few people with no ability to protect themselves and goes deep into the most dangerous place. Then the heroine insists on going deeper to find out. When danger occurs, the heroine also has parents, so she doesn't dare to gamble. That's totally wrong.

When I read more than 30 chapters, I didn't want to read it. The protagonist's character was described as Voldemort. Then, I felt that the protagonist was a bit forced to be smart. If you want money, can you sell healing medicine? Why do you still have to fight for life and death? You have to give a reason, and when you see the protective shield, you can enter as soon as you see it. If you encounter a big boss fighting, you should come to the side. Brother Flathead, let me go. There is a huge contrast in personality between the two.

The characterization is too clumsy.

This battlefield is about playing house,,,, I have read a lot of novels, but this is the first time I have seen this. It doesn't matter that the two women are more clueless than the other, and the protagonist also has no clue in his heart, and he traveled through time. Author, it's okay for you to insult the protagonist's IQ, but it's inexplicable if he is a time traveler. Author, would you be like this on the battlefield? If you can't do it, neither can we. Then who can you write it for?

I don't know how to complain. After leaving the city to run away and rob, the plot was too fast and too blunt. I just pushed it. Wang Hao is a profiteer. He saw a barrier in front and went in without thinking. Hua Yu is a genius, but her brain will be gone if she enters the barrier. Jing Jing's father has a passive that stops when he dies. After he dies, other big-shot characters won't chase the second commander. Why not just grab a bucket of popcorn and watch four students perform a play? There are still some places that I don't know if they are considered poisonous points: The earth is broken, where did you come from the north and the south? Can you tell north from south and still get lost in the forest? Go north from the forest south of the city! (Being able to distinguish north from south means there are obvious signs. Is it not easy for the fire demon to burn something on the tree so far in the forest to identify the direction?) Also, since the protagonist can't deal with the wanted criminal, can he attack the fire demon with a heavy blow? And the protagonists never encountered other fire demons when they got lost in the forest? You have to be responsible for the characters after they are created. Wang Hao's characters have completely collapsed in these few chapters. Quiet is okay. He doesn't appear much. As a flower in a post-apocalyptic greenhouse, he is very qualified. It has the look of a domestic brainless drama. But yysy was interesting at first.

Someone told me that a good reader must be able to tolerate the poison and pick out the bright spots in the poison. But there are better books, so why should I taste this poison? I am not a divine farmer, and I cannot put myself aside. There is a limit to how readers and authors can complement each other. You have not brought much change to me. I haven't read the subscription chapters so I can't comment more. This is my review of the previous chapters: It's reasonable for Anjing to call her dad because her father will be anxious after being missing for a few days, but you were too abrupt, had too few scenes, and too little foreshadowing. As a result, everyone saw that Anjing led to his father's death, which made people feel helpless. Brain, I think more clues can be buried in the previous chapters, such as the spies in Tianhuo City inducing Anjing, otherwise Anjing can wait a little longer. According to Anjing's character, and the environment where strength is respected, she should know that she will only become a burden. The poisonous thing should not be Anjing's sudden anxiety, The first person to enter when seeing the light curtain should be Anjing. She doesn't want to give up all possibilities. Wang Hao should not forget his life. Author, you should put yourself into this world. Strength is the first priority, so you should be able to measure your own strength. If you go up recklessly, you will only fail. This should require high IQ PK. The protagonist should be passive, rather than expecting passive triggers. It is impossible to rely on European energy. We should not put ourselves on illusory luck, so passivity does not necessarily require probability. Then we can set up several plans to turn the tables against the wind, which makes people feel more comfortable. A protagonist with an IQ makes people feel more relaxed. The terrain and the characters of teammates are all calculated, so readers are not afraid of asking why there are such pig teammates. The above personal opinion is that the free chapters are more discouraging. As I said before, I am not a Shennong, so I say goodbye.

What about Chapter 42? Got eaten! ! !

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not very reasonable. There is a system that doesn't make money and draw skills to scare people away. When you get money, you don't rush to draw prizes and mess around.

I could bear it before, but when it came to the vampire, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The front foot was fighting for life and death, and the back foot was not far away from entering the harem. Did the author write something high in the back?

This book is a book of shock. Pig's feet look like they have no knowledge. They are shocked by everything they see, or are frightened out of their wits.

When will it be updated? More than a month

Some people give bad reviews just by looking at the book title and introduction, or they are not readers But there are really many small bugs, which is a pity It's like a grain of salt in a dish, you can still eat it slowly

The author would like to make a few comments here: 1. If you don't understand something, you can use Baidu. It doesn't take much time, and it can also reduce poisonous points. 2. The poisonous points reminded by netizens in the article can be changed. After modification, it can prevent later people from abandoning the book after seeing the poisonous points. 3. After writing a chapter, you can read it first to avoid more poisonous points. Finally, I wish your books will get better and better! 🌹🌹🌹🌹

Author, I rarely write long reviews. I usually just make jokes in this chapter. If I am bolder, I will drive. I may not have read too many novels, or even very few. But I really don't understand why all the enemy's IQs are online, so they need strategies, means, and strength? The upright protagonist group's IQ is off the line. (First of all, let me state that this book review only reviews the free chapters. I didn't read the rest because I really couldn't stand it anymore.) Let's talk about the character Wang Hao first. After a big change, he said something like "Practice medicine can't save the people of the country." But what about his actions? No, he still played games with his classmates after returning home (you wrote this paragraph when the protagonist borrowed money from Wang Hao). What about his efforts? What about his changes? I didn't see it. And it was the protagonist who saved his life during the big explosion, right? Look at his attitude when the protagonist borrowed money afterwards. Are you still pursuing that storage ring? ? You are already a high school student, why do you think of a primary school student when you write it? Anjing, distracting her father on the battlefield, and her father also died to protect her. To be honest, this is not a big problem, because other works and even excellent film and television works also have this kind of character setting to deceive relatives. What is the problem? The problem is that no one comforts Anjing afterwards (after the war). Why is this? I know that the author must have seen this chapter and was slandering, so he directly marginalized the character. However, this kind of marginalization is too abrupt and unreasonable, which is very uncomfortable. And it is indeed a character that can embody growth. The author may have been too afraid and simply deleted this character due to the advice of book friends. There is also the language of flowers. I really don't blame the book friends. I have no idea what the purpose of such a character is. Is it used for fun? I don't quite understand why it is shaped like this, directly swallowing the protagonist's star stones, and there are thousands of them, buying exercises for himself, *, arrogant and domineering. If I were the protagonist and would ignore her, would I be so at ease? Who did she rely on to survive the big explosion? The same goes for the old professor. I don't understand this character either. Before the explosion, he had a very good image and the image of a strict teacher was very eye-catching, but his IQ was also off the line. He knew it was a trap, so why did he go there? It could be for the sake of his classmates, but did he really think about the protagonist? The protagonist is a tool man! **** Earns money for Hua Yu's exercises. He does everything. Where is the old professor? It's obviously a conspiracy, why can't you go to the deputy city lord to fight for it? Funny! And since the conspiracy has been exposed, why can't it be reported to the federation? The federation won't even take control? Let's stop here for the character issue first, and then let's talk about the incident. I would like to ask if there is any direct connection between the events? Am I watching a unit drama? First of all, Wang Hao was a profiteer before the explosion, right? Everyone knows that, so why did they still buy from him after the explosion? It's really just leeks. Also, the protagonist buys a gun to blow up the core. How can he be sure that the gun can blow up the core with one shot without even a reference? Is it possible to break the lock and the door? What if the gun doesn't explode? No backup plan? And after the core exploded, the explosion was described as being so strong, but I didn't see anyone else's actions. Why, it was really just crayfish in the whole city, and who died? It's the principal! It's not a cat or a dog. If the school principal dies, will he die? What should students do the next day? ? ? ? ? There are many, many more that I won't go into one by one. It's really painful to read. I hope the author will stop worrying about it. Now that it's on the shelves, he can write it well and don't let down the readers who subscribed. Since it can be put on the shelf, it is good to explain, maybe I am being pretentious. I wish the author can write better and better and gain more fans. I have written so much, but I don't know if it is fluent, I don't know if anyone can read it, and I don't know if anyone can read it from beginning to end, so let's leave it at that.

Except for the outstanding plug-ins, I really can't hold on to anything else... To be honest, the first few chapters were okay. They were about the daily life of classmates fighting and fighting, and they were quite interesting to read. Unfortunately, they started to change a lot after leaving the city, and began to attack the intellectual latitude in various ways. When you met Wang Hao and learned that your father might be a key figure in betraying the city, you were right in saying that you couldn't bear to kill him. You could just go ahead and kill him with the help of others, but it was a pity that you didn't choose to continue to maintain the relationship. Then follow Huayu Jingjing and Wang Hao to the canopy set up by the high-level and the fire demon? Can the four of you still go in? So what is the use of this imprisonment? Don't talk about what to do if the Fire Demon comes to support you. Just pretend that the four of you went in with touristy looks on your face. I can't even figure out what you want to write? Tell him that the deputy city lord is also a traitor? And then he killed his own potential stock because of a deal with the Fire Demon? Okay, then there will be a melee inside, you can still think of taking advantage of it, how many people are there in total? After the fight, the opponent can annihilate 99% of their high combat power by paying a self-exposure. The four of you survived because of your passivity, plus a destiny high combat. Very reasonable. Then when you go back and find out that your father was indeed raped, your reaction is very serious. You say that you cannot accept killing people casually, but you can accept that your father harmed Gucheng. What are your three views? Being pulled over by the principal and finding out that the principal was also a spy and returned to Mission Impossible, and then threatened you, and also wanted to get your password that only your father/former city lord of eighteen years knew? In eighteen years, is this city so big-hearted? After your father left, you closed the canopy to protect the city? The villain? What do you want to explain? How many people did your father kill? Because you were threatened by the principal to hand over the password, you stole the energy in the previous school. Well, after you got it easily, you pieced together a few things and bought a gun. Oh, by the way, you have made the system of spiritual stones here depreciate and become valuable. Then you were picked up by the principal again. Let's not talk about the rank of those people. Except for a female supporting character who survived the intelligence attack, you successfully eliminated the conspiracy of the principal and his group. Not to mention that one principal died suddenly. There was an explosion in the city and no one cared about it. Then the school notified you to take the exam in advance and become cannon fodder. The principal is dead, the sky is closed, aliens invade, the city's masters are damaged, the world is in dire straits, but the world around you still looks peaceful. It was as if nothing had happened, I was developing well, and none of the things that happened had any impact. I really can't hold it any longer. No matter how exciting the plot is in the back, I can't hold it in the front. I always wonder if it will be better in the back, but unfortunately it's not.

After reading Chapter 40, I just want to say: Stupid article! It is recommended not to use your brain when reading the book. This chapter said that it is recommended to block it. The Sa family couldn't bear the poison and ran away.

Some reading suggestions for this book. First of all, those with low poison resistance can leave after reading Chapter 20. Otherwise, don't blame the author if you die from a poisonous attack. After all, after twenty chapters, the author will be like a different person. He will not be able to write the interesting jokes before, but will only write bloody and brainless routines. As for the bloody routine, let me explain in detail. First, the protagonist meets the gangster. The city was about to be destroyed, but three young gangsters got stuck on the road and started robbing. . . Look at this stupid IQ logic. Then the protagonist and the gangster are afraid of killing people. . . The aliens are coming to slaughter the city and destroy the country, but you are blocking the road and robbing, but you are still afraid of killing people? ? ? Secondly, after the robbery, the gangster stripped the person naked and tied him in the middle of the battlefield of the city's life and death battle, with a face like "I didn't mean to kill anyone." . . Forget it, no more complaining about this bastard. Then, let alone the interaction between the protagonist and the three classmates, the way they are driven into the central battlefield by the author is extremely brainless. In a battlefield where people are dying at every turn, when I saw an unknown barrier, I entered without even thinking about it. . . The companion didn't react, didn't come out, and didn't make a sound when he went in. It was as if he was dead, but the protagonist didn't care about anything and just followed him in. . . I have never been so reckless since I was playing games in elementary school! Still a high school student? A battlefield where people die easily? Even playing house is not so casual, right? There is also content after thirty chapters. Why is the level 4 female protagonist trying to fuck a level 10+ alien but being rejected, and scolding the male protagonist for not daring to fight beyond the level? . . I scolded him three or four times. . . The highest number in your city is only 20+, right? Not much in total, right? You are so awesome, why don't you go to rule the world before reaching level 14? Obviously there is something wrong with her brain, so she posted a bunch of people begging the author to kill her. Then just like this, two of them, one at level 2 and one at level 4, were running around in a battlefield of 20+10+. Nothing happened and they were very relaxed, just like watching a big show. . . The promised battle of life and death will involve killing people everywhere? Even when watching the show, they thought the level 29 battle was too fast and difficult to see clearly. . . I won't say this anymore, just watch the show. Level 2 vertical and horizontal 20+ level battlefields are nothing. I just think that the protagonist is the author's own son, which is different. But then the death of An Jing's father was so disgusting! The strongest alien wanted to use Anjing to threaten Anjing's father, the top three strongest man here. When he punched Anjing, Anjing's father - instantly teleported from the battlefield where he was fighting others to being in front of Anjing, and was punched through the chest. . . This bloody trick, this teleportation bug. . . What's even more disgusting is that after having her breasts pierced, An Jing immediately started to act sad and crazy about sex, and the protagonist and the heroine came to the battle to persuade her. What? You ask me where the strongest foreigner with the chest piercing went? Why not keep killing people? I don't know either! I guess once the chest piercing action was performed, it was just like Jing Jing's father being teleported over and having his chest pierced, and the author teleported him away! Didn't you see that the protagonist and heroine were teleported from a few hundred meters away to persuade them to be quiet? So, it is enough to read Chapter 20, and the next chapter will be even more poisonous. Don't believe it? After the chest piercing, there is still a level 2 protagonist to save everyone! How to save? Open the skill of doubling the strength, doubling the speed, and sucking three levels of blood! Isn't it enough to block a 20+ boss whose strength and speed are dozens of times his? What? How can you fight with someone who has doubled the amount? He is the protagonist! Why else would the book reviews unanimously call it poisonous? Not even a single reader came to defend the author! If the protagonist's strength of 1 is not directly set by the author to be stronger than the strength of 10, why are we all shouting poison? Finally, the author should fix it quickly! At least it's not so poisonous! Obviously the first twenty chapters are so beautiful and interesting, and the subject matter is so imaginative, why are the latter chapters so poisonous? You are so poisonous!

It's really poisonous. I couldn't stand it after seeing the deputy city lord collude with the aliens to kill Annan Star. The setting is a life-and-death war with the aliens. But a few scumbag students went out with the mentality of playing a game. They rushed in when they saw a cover, and then some gangsters with scumbag fighting ability blocked the road and robbed it. My classmate's father was killed in front of my eyes. On the way back to the city, a few people were still joking as if nothing was wrong, and they still wanted to go back to play games. They must be mentally ill.

The protagonist and his friends are all a bunch of naughty kids! Specialized in making trouble! What more poison do you want?

The friends the protagonist knows have almost all the poisonous points. They are so poisonous that no one would want such a friend.

How can I put it this way? I really can't stand the four idiots in the early stage Stupid

Which editor with incorrect views recommended this kind of novel with incorrect views? Can I report it?

Let me give you a point of view. The villain is made to be dark and ruthless, but the protagonist's character is so funny that he looks like a retard in comparison.

What does the author think, even if the plot is advanced, the supporting characters will not be so poisonous, right? An Anjing tricked his own father to death, and a flowery woman dragged the protagonist off to the battlefield, and finally stole the protagonist's loot. What's even more awesome is that his own father was suspected of betraying the human race and ran away when the situation was bad, and he ran away openly.

I don't know what to say. To be honest, after reading Chapter 60, I have been poisoned. Now I see that woman and I feel annoyed. That woman is really poisonous. I usually read books without thinking, but this is really a bit poisonous. The last character that made me feel poisonous was a piece of grass in front of the boss' door, eh. . The name should be this, after all, I haven't read it for half a year. There is a rabbit in the book who competes with this woman. She thinks she is aloof, selfish, arrogant, and kneels down to the big boss. She is completely brainless. After reading this chapter, I said that the woman almost always sneered when she appeared. I hope she won't appear again or just give her a box lunch. I was really poisoned. I skipped this chapter when I saw this woman.

I feel like these collections are just brushes. There are so many poison spots in the front. Two or three don't matter. If you have more than a dozen, you're awesome!

Please respect the profession of writers and stop misusing it; please also respect the group of readers, who still have some brains. .

When I read the introduction, I wanted to complain about half of the sun. Anyone with some basic knowledge knows that half of the sun cannot be blown away and the other half still exists 😒

In the first 20 chapters, strength persuades people to quit. Is that the heroine? Bronze to see the king PK? Where is the brain? Has your fighting ability already dropped?

The author has changed his vest, and there is a black cat in the early morning search