Immortality: Starting by Choosing Hextech Augments

It's a rare Hex novel. I was attracted by the recommended book and read it and found that it's pretty good! The more I watch, the more I get addicted to it, it's quite interesting Except for some of the arrangements that are a little bit poisonous, it can be said that they are not poisonous points How can I say that the protagonist is a bit ambitious? Later, I relied on Hex to the point where I forgot about the shortcomings I had never experienced, and some areas that needed improvement (such as the completion of skills and skills, my own real essence accuracy shortcomings). Although I could overcome it with numerical values and sweat, my vigilance in this area grew slowly. It only takes beatings to increase my memory, but my memory is not much longer than Hex's. I was surprised, and one thing (there were only so many in total) was forgotten to use, and two things failed to keep up with the intensity and have not been online for a while But the above are all small poisons that can be selectively ignored. If you think they are big poisons, just come and scold me. As a novel written by a newbie, I can give it an 8.5 Out of 10 points, right? It's worth reading. Hex's writing is very interesting, and the attitude of the new author is very good, and the interactive activity is online (The author has overturned and rewritten the poisonous points in one chapter and issued a separate chapter to explain and apologize, which is gone)

What is Hex?

Before I read Chapter 31 of this book, I had always wondered why this book had no success, but after reading Chapter 31, I finally understood why, and the author obviously realized it. Why do chapters 31 to 35 cause dissatisfaction among readers? Because it is inconsistent with the early tone of the entire book. This tone is relaxed, not dark, and all the exciting points are based on the violation of expectations, which is a typical shock flow writing method. Senior Sister Jiang looked down on the protagonist in the early stage. Every time the protagonist was in the limelight, she felt awkward. This is actually refreshing for readers, but can you say that Senior Sister Jiang is a villain? No, but in fact, Senior Sister Jiang's position in this book is actually a minor villain. And he's a little villain who can be cleared. If the author can keep this tone, I can read it to the end. But I don't know why. The author may think that the readers of his book need some fighting scenes and blunt slap-in-the-face plots, but for me, this is the poisonous point. In Chapter 31, a brainless villain with a jumping face appears, and this brainless villain with a jumping face is actually the Jiang family. Then there is a problem with the identity of Senior Sister Jiang. She was originally a little villain who could be cleared, and readers even have a slight affection for her. So when the protagonist takes revenge, how should we deal with this problem? How divisive is this? This writing method is not impossible, but the author is not familiar with this writing method at all. Logically speaking, it is just a simple pretense within one chapter, and then the next chapter will immediately connect to a battle scene, killing the villain heartily. At this time, the author has returned to the previous writing style, and the protagonist has begun to practice alone. This is the second big poisonous point. The first time it offended the book's base, the second time because the villain made a fool of himself and the protagonist didn't show off, and the second time it offended the book's base again. So this book collapsed. I have read the kind of cool novels that don't have a face-changing villain from beginning to end. For example, Qingquan Ryuubi's Unscientific Beast Control is a shocking flow from beginning to end. No, even if it is a villain with a jumping face, the reader will not feel aggrieved from beginning to end. A little element of beast control is added to spice up the monotonous and boring training life. The pace of strength growth is faster, and the game is completed smoothly. The score is not lost at all, and the uniformity grows higher and higher. In my opinion, this author's proficiency in writing shock novels is enough to reach the level of 12 Kings, or even higher. It's just that he is very weak in selecting topics and title introductions, and has no pattern. It is completely the idea of ​​​​a novice author. First of all, the first point is that the subject matter selection is too niche. Hex is definitely not a popular theme, just a product that pursues hot topics. The second point is that the shock flow is not consistent. In the later stage, you have to write blunt and pretentious things that you are not good at to cater to people outside the basic base. I have to write a shocking flow and a Goudao flow again, which offends readers who want to have fun fighting. Swinging from side to side like a grass on the wall. Point 3, pure shock flow is boring. It is necessary to write some interesting daily adjustments and focus on creating brilliant characters. Make readers want to read more. In addition, the cultivation system is too monotonous. It is a monotonous shock flow, and the world view is still so weak. It is just a traditional cultivation system with no characteristics at all. So how do you advance the plot? How to create contradictions? As long as you choose a unique world view like Bear Wolf Dog, in my opinion, it is possible to surpass Bear Wolf Dog. Either you just write about farming style, it's also good to write about farming instead of fighting. It's like unscientific animal control. Both ideas can break the situation. No matter how much I say, I hope the author can find his own position. In my opinion, the author is a top master in farming, cultivating, character creation, relaxed writing style, and shocking genres of writing. No experience, no understanding of readers, no understanding of myself, no understanding of market trends, low subject matter, introduction, book title, and low structure. I am a novice author. Even with so many mistakes, this book can still be written like this, and the results have not fallen to the bottom. It can be seen that the author has good talent and perseverance. When reading the next book, I hope the author can learn from other great writers and become the next Bear Wolf Dog or Qingquan Liuxiang.

The advantage of this book is that it doesn't overwhelm the realm. It has 400 chapters on Nascent Soul. I've read several of them recently, and some of them are not bad at all. I'm still practicing Qi in Chapter 200, and there's another book that's still in Jindan with 700 chapters. The key is that there are a lot of words, 3 million words. It's really funny. It's really hard to find a book that is neither watery nor overwhelming.

You should be able to choose three times to upgrade from level 1 to level 4. Why do you only choose once? 😳

The pace is too fast, the protagonist feels like he can't stop, and the reader feels tired while watching it, so be careful to relax. Also, since it's a bit of a group portrait, you might as well explain the situation of several important supporting characters, and then design a reunion scene.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and rough writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the modest praises begin to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are on the fifth watch, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the great Confucianism's braided sutras are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling memory. Update may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates!

666 Is not salty anymore

This is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the author's mistakes will not be forgotten, but the disadvantage is that there are not a lot of interesting hexes. It's suitable for feeding and eating, but it's quite a torture to wait for updates.

As the realm improves more and more slowly, the presence of Hex enhancement is also gradually decreasing. I feel that the author does not need to be limited to the enhancement in Genting. He can also use the enhancement in Soul Fighting or city-state effects. It is even said that the enhancements unlocked when the protagonist ascends from the Nascent Soul to the Divine Transformation can allow him to open a store and spend spiritual stones or spiritual materials to purchase equipment, body forging fragments, etc., Which can just make up for the protagonist's lack of equipment and body forging growth.