
Hard Work Pays Off in Swallowed Star
我在吞噬星空天道酬勤
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- Ongoing
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- 567k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The first one looks great, but by the 56th photo, it's really invincible. It's so humorous that a world leader has to owe favors everywhere for planet-level resources.
The protagonist of the humorous realm lord and small farmer, the original realm lord has a net worth of ten Hunyuan units. When the three brothers from the earth go out to the realm lord's world to dig for cosmic crystals, it is calculated by 100 million. A realm lord can't even buy planet-level resources and still needs favors. What's even more humorous is that the protagonist has to fight the Space Genius Battle after a year and a half after reaching the planetary level. . If you want to say that the protagonist is a barbarian or a god, and you add cheats, I believe you will be ranked first. The top ten players have higher basic talents than you, their teachers are all kings and lords, they have unlimited resources, their secret skills are stronger than yours, and they have practiced longer than you. If you can rank first in this way, then you can rank in the top ten without any cheats! Luo Feng does not have an immortal legacy and cannot have the money to upgrade.
It's just the Earth chapter with a different layer of skin, so it's better to just start with the Earth chapter.
There are currently more than 50 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. Even though In the Planet is a bit long, it also inherits some of the shortcomings of the original work. Just like Luo Feng, he was hostile to others for no reason. There is also an enemy who wants to destroy the protagonist. I hope I can focus on training and improvement in the future. Even if I go to the battlefield, it will be better than inexplicable conflicts. Because human society still has rules to some extent, it is difficult to take revenge. This will lead to being messed with but unable to fight back, which looks very aggrieved. The Earth Chapter of the original work almost persuaded me to quit, because the protagonist of the original work was very frustrated. Then, after the earth's peculiarities are revealed, the content becomes more aggrieved. Later, it was basically all about fighting and killing, which was the same style as during the cultivation period. I personally feel that the best part of the original work is the cultivation and growth period starting from the genius battle. Whether it is exploring secret realms or fighting and killing, they are all filled with a lot of processes and unfamiliar vocabulary that are useless later. For example, secret realms, place names, races, things in secret realms or battlefields are quickly forgotten after reading them. Except for some opportunities, other content will not be of much help to future development. Therefore, I think the battlefields and secret realms in the original work are garbage time, and you can choose to reduce the relevant content. It is better to add some other aspects of content, such as the relationship between the protagonist and the people around him, getting good things, etc. In short, it relies on the plug-in ability as the core, and in the process of increasing strength, it cooperates with the plot to obtain various benefits and benefits.
The original ancestor is a teacher, it is useful
I've seen several books about people who worshiped the original ancestor as their teacher. What's the use? First of all, he won't teach you. He will let Chaos Frozen teach you. Secondly, he won't give you any treasures. Even the giant ax Chaos doesn't have the most powerful treasure. He was locked up again, and if something happened it was Chaos and the others who helped him. Then what? When you become invincible, destroy the world beast, and release him, do you still want to call him master? Interesting?
The original secret method of creating a clone? His name is Yuan, not Yuan. If there is an original work, humans will not cultivate and just wait for the protagonist to come out, right? Some novices always like to innovate blindly for their own sake.
Bug, once you reach immortality, your body cannot be taken away. The male protagonist actually guessed that a venerable ancient god of time was used by the higher-ups of the human race to seize the body of the cosmic-level human race. What kind of shocking wisdom is this?
Author, are you serious? It took more than 200,000 years to become an ordinary immortal, and it took tens of thousands more years to wait for the garbage to be accepted by the Lord of the Universe as his disciple. You must know that in the original work, the most rubbish understanding of the main laws of the original secret realm has 15 floors of Tongtian Bridge, and the highest one, except Luo Feng, has 18 floors. In this way, no one is qualified to be accepted as a disciple by His Holiness.
I've read a few chapters, and although many of the settings are similar to those of the Earth chapter, I think it's okay. The writing is pretty good. I support it! However, I would like to ask, when is the current timeline? Was it before Luo Feng was born? Or at the same time as Luo Feng? 😁
Suddenly I discovered something. There seem to be 1002 advanced universe countries in the book now? And the original work seems to be about 1008 advanced universe countries? In other words, there are still 6 universe nations that have not yet been established? How much earlier is this timeline than the original work? According to the growth rate of the protagonist of the online novel, by the time Luo Feng is born, wouldn't the protagonist already be the strongest person in the universe?