Hard Work Pays Off in Swallowed Star

The beginning was great, but chapter 56 was truly amazing. It's hilarious that a realm lord has to go through so much trouble to obtain planetary-level resources.

The humorous protagonist is a world lord and a peasant. In the original story, the world lord's net worth is ten Chaos Units, while the three Earth brothers can dig up cosmic crystals in the world of world lords for hundreds of millions. Yet, a world lord can't even buy planetary-level resources and has to rely on favors.

It's just a reskinned Earth arc; it would have been better to start with the Earth arc directly.

Currently, there are over 50 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. However, the planetary setting is a bit long, and it inherits some of the original novel's flaws. Like Luo Feng, he's inexplicably targeted and ostracized. He's unfairly blamed and gains an extra enemy who wants to kill him.

I've seen several books about people taking the Primordial Ancestor as their master, but what's the point? First, he won't teach you; Chaos and Icebound will teach you. Second, he won't give you any treasures; even Chaos and Icebound don't have a single supreme treasure. Third, he's imprisoned; if anything happens, Chaos and Icebound will be the ones to help. And then what?

The original creation of the clone technique? His name is "Yuan" (原), not "Yuan" (元). If there were an original story, wouldn't humans just wait for the protagonist to appear instead of cultivating it? Some newbies always like to create their own wild and unfounded innovations.

A bug: once you reach immortality, you can't be possessed. The male protagonist actually guessed that one of the Time Gods, a Venerable One, was used by high-ranking humans for possession by cosmic-level humans. What kind of astonishing wisdom is that?!

Author, are you serious? Someone who took over 200,000 years to become an ordinary immortal, and then spent tens of thousands more waiting, was taken as a disciple by a Universe Venerable. Keep in mind that in the original story, even the most pathetic Primordial Secret Realm cultivators had 15 levels of the Bridge to Heaven, and the highest, except for Luo Feng, had 18. And yet, none of them were qualified to be taken as a disciple by a Venerable.

I've read a few chapters. Although many of the settings are similar to the Earth arc, it's still pretty good. The writing style is quite nice. I support it! However, I'd like to ask, what timeline are we in now? Is it before Luo Feng was born? Or is it contemporaneous with Luo Feng? 😁

I suddenly realized something: there seem to be 1002 advanced universe nations in the book now? The original work seems to mention 1008 advanced universe nations? Does that mean there are still 6 space nations that have not yet been established? How many eras ahead of the original story is this timeline? Based on the growth rate of protagonists in online novels, by the time Luo Feng is born, the protagonist will probably already be the strongest person in the current universe.