Douluo: Jade Poison Emperor

After reading it, I voted for all eight votes for reading this book. The character and behavior of the characters in this book, or the character and behavior caused by the changes in the world line, are fairly consistent with the original characters. The Shrek Seven Monsters have less scenes, is Tang San considered the final boss? Although it is just one chapter. Xiao Wu's appearance was to inspire Tang San to go berserk and sacrifice. It can be seen that the author does not like Ma Hongjun and Dai Mubai, even though these two have been their underlings for more than ten years. Fans often think that the heroine Zhu Zhuqing is so good. Finally, I found a few Oscars out of millions of words. Yu Xiaogang's treatment could be extended, and the confrontation with Bibi Dong could be expanded. The ending seems to have not been written (after Tang San and Tang Hao knew there was a problem with the configuration of the soul ring), and the only out-of-body conscious beast spirit in the series was not studied. Bibi Dong also promoted the plot. Did she appear in ten chapters? I didn't write down any step in the ninth exam. Until then, Qian Daoliu had been suppressing his power. Dugu Bo is probably the one with the best ending among the fics. There is no heroine after the heroine commented that she could not write. In the middle of this book, it is considered invincible in mainland China. However, after writing several books together, except for the ending, which was written a bit too fast, it is not unfinished. Moreover, the ending is something new by the author. In fact, except for the characters, more than half of the plot is designed by the author and connected with the original work. Finally, I hope the author will be discharged from the hospital soon, and his feet, lungs, and spirit will all get better. Above

The author updates 6 times a day, so awesome

It's very good. Although I came from a video software, the author's content is still great from beginning to end. He has perfected a lot of settings and filled in a lot of holes that the original work did not fill, allowing us to see a more vivid Douluo Continent. Although the writing and settings are slightly flawed, this fanfic is already great. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

A Scorpion Martial Spirit and a Snake Martial Spirit will be pressed to the ground and rubbed by Shrek 7 Calabash Babies in the future. I can still think of this scene

I've been dying ever since I met Dugu Yan. We don't understand why it collapsed like this. It's like the author was demoted.

Write female characters as male characters and love as friendship

Books are okay, just considered food and fodder. But the last 20 chapters have been really good. I joined the academy and wrote 20 chapters, and the plot is very fascinating. The plot of these 20 chapters can be summarized as follows: After entering the sky, Dugu Yan pulled her, and even pulled her on the protagonist. After pulling, she couldn't move. After she was able to move, she didn't call the teacher, and let the protagonist carry her disheveled to school for a while. . . Then the whole school started to spread bad things about the Dugu family without doing business. It was true that they were not afraid of death and were idle. All the students in the school only had scraps in their minds. All the students were avalanche and not afraid of causing trouble. I didn't expect this development. This is the first time for so many fans to write about Dugu Yan. . . .

I feel that the plot in the last few chapters has become more and more boring... Before, it was quite sensible and not cliché, so the emotional scenes were awkward Now the plot has begun to become cliché I am from a noble family, but I still sympathize with the slaves, and I want to be with them before I become a god. Lu fights against the abolition of slavery And because a woman he doesn't know has to spend so much money (more than 10 million), plus offends people... The plot is getting more and more cliche, and it's getting worse and worse Forget it, I have to support it for a while, I'll pick it up later.

What's the difference between the protagonist and Tang San? They're the same double-standard dog. The heroine is no different from the same one. She goes to be the son-in-law of the Dugu family and doesn't give any of the celestial grass to anyone else. She keeps it all to herself. After all, Tang San, his friends and the master brought benefits. You didn't give any benefits to the heroine, but only helped them catch the poison? ? ? The corner of the mouth is too disgusting!

Add the Eight Spider Spears to the scorpion legs of the Scorpion Martial Spirit. Not only will the scorpion legs have an attack bonus but also a poison bonus. Maybe the Martial Spirit can evolve a second time.

What the hell, a little level 20 great soul master is already valued by Xue Ye and Qian Renxue, not to mention the second thousand-year ring, even the first thousand-year ring. I get it, succubus, right? Withdrawn.

But if there are no problems with the plot, I think the food is more than enough. I am optimistic about this book 🙂

Don't write about women, you are not suitable. The quality has dropped drastically after coming to Tiandou. There is nothing wrong with using your strengths and avoiding weaknesses. If you want to eat fairy grass through Dugu Yan, just get better directly. It is better to be abrupt than this grinding. The latest chapter, that Dugu Yan went on a poisonous rampage? , Do you have to write a sentence to the yellow waste at the end? Brother, if you take a photo like this, at least I am here to read cool articles.

As long as the follow-up plot doesn't involve sperm and forced intelligence, you can still follow it.

Oh my god, after entering Tiandou Academy, it feels like it was written by a different person.

Later, I directly used AI to continue writing, I love your mother! Get your money back!

It's fucked, the build sucks. Originally, Dugu Yan could bear it, because the core of this book is definitely construction, but for the sake of Ice and Fire Eyes, he took the initiative to modify his route and mixed things up. It was too difficult to stretch, and the construction was basically rotten. In the later stage, he could only rely on hard cheating.

The writing was good at the beginning, but as soon as I entered school and started to lose my wits, the whole article became watery, boring and brainless. If you don't know how to write about love, you don't have to write about it. The writing is terrible and I can't stand it at all.

Ever since I was told that I can't write about emotions, I found that the heroine has no content at all and is just a pure pendant.

The plot of Dugu Yan in the academy was really not very good. I gave it to my daughter for no reason. The whole person is like a straw bag, very stupid. Also, the author said that he wanted to write some facial villains to promote the plot between the male and female protagonists. I don't think it's necessary. Moreover, the heroine goes crazy and becomes incontinent, which is quite vulgar. If you hand me the pen and I write it, the protagonist and she go hunting for soul rings, but his grandfather is still offline. Her grandmother went with them. As a result, I was accidentally delayed. The protagonist and he were chased by spirit beasts that were ten or twenty levels higher than them. The male protagonist settled Duguyan and asked her to help rescue the soldiers, and then he supported two and several others by himself to show his strength. Maybe something went wrong while absorbing the soul ring. The hero used his breath to help her stabilize. He even helped Duguyan improve the quality of his martial soul or resolve some internal troubles. Or when absorbing the soul ring, a thoughtless evil soul master stirs up trouble or a soul beast comes around, and the protagonist easily solves the problem. Then after the heroine absorbs the soul ring, she sees the male protagonist carelessly cleaning up the battlefield. Invisibly increasing the character of the male protagonist. And when you kill monsters and explode a soul bone, and then the male protagonist doesn't need it and it's just right for the female protagonist, he makes a favor and directly sells it to Duguyan or exchanges for something he needs. Old people will never take advantage of the protagonist. At this time, I will do some self-defeating. (What, even though the two of them worked together, most of the credit belongs to him, but he gave me such a precious thing as the soul bone. He also said that I can't use it. How could some people not use the soul bone and so on.) It's almost done. Or go out for training and encounter an evil soul master. You can write about everything. What's there to write about about the fights in the academy? And this one That poison and mixed poison. It's better to make it clear. It would be bad if someone made a fuss about it after it became popular. Don't play this on the edge. I want to eat purple bombs.

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The narrator explains too much. After explaining, he has to extend his divergent thinking. I can't stand it.

Is there any Shennong? It seems that in Douluo fandom, there are quite a lot of monthly tickets.

There is a sense of separation between the front and the back, it feels like two different novels

It doesn't look good. I saw more than 30 chapters and it was withdrawn.

Drive high and go low, the setting is brilliant, but ever since I met the heroine, I have become more and more idiotic.

How could Qian Renxue be a talent in the Hun Sect? Is there anything wrong with your brain?

The subject matter is good! There is too much nonsense in the introduction of the first ten chapters, and it is a waste of ten chapters that can basically be explained in a few sentences. Keep your sentences as concise as possible

The author didn't fill in the female protagonist, I would like to ask who are the female protagonists?

Thanks for trying the poison. What kind of equality is there in the extraordinary world? There is no equality in reality, let alone the extraordinary world of novels. And the extraordinary bloodline of Douluo Continent is supreme. If you mutate a martial soul, you will either become useless or be arranged by a high-level soul master for your whole life No matter how evil you are, you are not asking for equality. You do not have the immortality of the Son of Destiny, and you do not have particularly good resources, such as fairy grass, soul beasts to sacrifice high-quality soul rings and soul-power bodies. Why should you use your little excellence to play with the family heritage of dozens of generations and thousands of years. Others also create a knowledge monopoly for you. I really thought I could float at will like those time-travelers. Traveling to that world is not the real world.