Douluo: Why Did Haotian's Abandoned Son Go to Wuhun Palace?

It deserves its title as a masterpiece. The main highlights of this book are the elders of the Wuhun Palace, the growth of the protagonist, and the changes in the surrounding characters. They are all very well depicted and are not just a pretentious slap in the face.

This one will do too

The author really doesn't know how to choose a female protagonist. He writes a few female supporting characters whose original works are not good at all. Does he want to give away girls? Another party that won't dismantle CP

After reading so many Douluo fandoms, no one has played Soul Ring, which is a reference to Ten Years Lone Bamboo Soul Skill Pole Vault, which makes me very disappointed.

I don't know since when, Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling replaced the original positions of Ning Rongrong and Xiao Wu and became the must-try heroines of the new generation of Douluo 🙂

I don't understand why the author would write something that is not very popular as the heroine. Isn't Douluo Qian Renxue a must-have? It is very popular and accepting it can also help the protagonist. The author said that her status is sensitive so she will not accept it. I don't understand where the sensitivity lies.

Are these two useful? It can be said that Dugu Yan and Xiancao can be related in the early stage, and Ye Lingling is also a top support, but the emotional scene you wrote is really too stiff, and the heroine has not appeared in many scenes since she came out! These two are like two vases. Most of the protagonists team up with the talented second-generation ancestors of the Enshrinement Hall. They don't have a role in playing games or hunting souls. This makes the heroine very unattractive. By the way, these two are very unpopular as heroines! Many people say that Dou Yi's Qian Renxue is stupid, but her stupidity does not prevent her talent from being the best in Douluo Continent forever. She has an innate twenty-level god-level martial spirit + top-level fairy grass. The protagonist's current hard talent is not as good as Qian Renxue, plus According to the divine examination passed down from the family, he will definitely be a first-level god in the future, and the angel god is also a self-created god-level god with a higher upper limit than ordinary first-level gods. He can be ranked in the top five among the eighteen first-level gods. He can expect to be a half-step god king in the future, and it is not impossible to become a true god king! "It doesn't matter if she is stupid. The protagonist can suppress her and she will listen to her advice. Isn't this good?" As the wife of a future first-level god, she is also a powerful wife in the divine world (after all, there are only two goddess kings in the divine world, and the first-level god is already very strong). Look at the two you gave us now, one is Dugu Yan and the other is Ye Lingling! Let's talk about Dugu Yan first. Her talent is not very high. Originally, even if she was cured of the poison, she might not be able to become a Titled Douluo in the future. Now, the enhancement of the fairy grass has overwhelmed the Super Douluo. It is impossible to be a Ultimate Douluo! Even if the protagonist takes you to the God Realm in the future, you will only be a second-level god at most. What can a second-level god do? A bottle of oil is useless!​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out that her martial soul is indeed very good, and it is not incomprehensible to be called the "miracle in the martial arts", but even if her talent is strengthened by the fairy grass, it is impossible to become a god king. She is not qualified for the goddess of life, and there is no godship related to healing among the first-level gods. She also killed a second-level god! The difference between Dugu Yan and Dugu Yan is that one can never become a god in his lifetime, while the other has a small chance of becoming a god! It's all the same, it's useless. But some people will say that they will have a lot of effects in the early stage, but think about it for yourself, do the second-generation ancestors in the Enshrinement Hall need them as teammates? Dugu Yan is purely useless. Ye Lingling's treatment is pretty good, but isn't there already a healing angel? It's not very useful! It's useless in the early stage, and it's even less useful in the later stage! Do these two roles have any substantive role? I hope the author can change the priorities of the heroine, and don't focus on the two characters in the current character card. Take a long-term view. The protagonist is the heir who has been favored by the Shura God King, the future God King. I hope the heroine's strength and status can be more suitable for him. There can be some drag, but don't focus on the description! This book is actually quite well written. Don't leave any flaws or holes in the emotional drama.

Every time I see a fan who writes about Douluo that I am interested in, I get really upset. The filter of childhood allows me to see the reaction of those who abuse Tang San, and as an adult, my mature outlook on life allows me to see the reaction of people who do not abuse Tang San. However, I quite like Douluo's world view (very suitable for the idea king) and want to read it 😐

Why do you have to work for Wuhun Palace? Obviously they almost wiped out your family, killed many people in your family, and found reasons for them, all because of Tang Hao. So I would like to ask, whether it is Tang Hao's side or Wuhundian's side, they can be regarded as enemies, why do they have to be dogs? Can't you do the opposite? Isn't it good to overthrow Wuhun Palace and destroy Haotian Sect? A little white flower that must be written

At the beginning of Wuhun Palace, the author still wants to go to Qian Renxue,

After reading more than 200 chapters, to be honest, I jumped in and ordered it, but the plot is basically coherent. The author should understand what it means. I read the fandom for fun. I can accept your foreshadowing. You want to rise first but the plot development is really too slow. The author of the book Tai Chi Xuan Zhen should read it. His rhythm is very good. It should be skipped in the early stage. There is no need to start writing from the age of 6. I thought that after you explain the main background, you will jump to a few years later. In the end, most of them are about how to practice and portray supporting characters. It is completely unnecessary. There is nothing worthy of exploration or foreshadowing in the early stage. You can also write about the character description later. You can even wait for the protagonist group to have a certain strength before describing it.

There are no big poisonous spots, but there are constant small poisonous spots. Various setting conflicts. The setting of the previous chapter will be changed in the next chapter. It doesn't affect the plot too much, but it just makes people read it poorly. Overall, it's pretty good, much better than other Douluo shithole fans.

Why do the heroines have Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling? They are both badly written, and these two characters have no feminine charm at all. Don't you find it disgusting for Snake Girl?

Like Douluo natives, they get the memory of the time traveler, instead of the time traveler traveling to Douluo

Many authors like to write about the four slave clans. The Contra family likes to be slaves to others. Even if you go to the empire and become a noble, you will have more freedom than being a slave.

As of the date of posting, this book has updated 389 chapters. Currently, only 3 of the latest chapters have not been subscribed. I read this in one go and did not put it aside for too long. I think I have the qualifications to say a few words ... When I first read it, this book was called "Douluo: The Unparalleled Vicious Weapon in the Hall of Worship", or the Fierce Weapon, it doesn't matter. The first three chapters, or the first six chapters, are very, very well written, so good that I once thought I was back in my teenage years, when I read online novels for the first time, and came into contact with fantasy themes for the first time. Of course, this evaluation is too subjective, and part of it is the beautification of memory in the brain. Newcomers can get a 20% discount when reading this evaluation. The first 6 chapters completely describe how a family that has hit rock bottom starts over, Yang Wushuang's heartache and sorrow, Yang Changan's ambition and determination, the family's dilemma of survival, and the joy of finally having a chance to turn over. Reading it, it gave me the feeling that this is not Douluo Continent, but a traditional fantasy novel. I think Douluo Dalu should be written this way, because it is based on traditional fantasy novels, and the various fan fictions that follow are based on its special power system and the abstract characters and plot of the original work. Therefore, using the traditional fantasy writing method can better reflect its background and arouse the emotional resonance of an old man like me. ... Further on, until the fairy grass plot, my evaluation has been slightly lowered. Because starting from the fairy grass, the plot of this book has returned to the common level of Douluo fans. It is no longer the traditional fantasy of a down-and-out boy counterattacking, but begins a formulaic change of qualifications, seizes opportunities, becomes stronger, and so on, and then accepts the divine examination to become a god, and leads the harem who have also become gods to the divine world. It's not bad, it's written like this because the foundation of Douluo's original work is too weak. If you want to write something else, you can't write it. At most, you can develop soul tools, torture Tang San, and finally become a god. So relatively speaking, this book can write 1.3 Million words without being as watery as possible, which is pretty good. Of course, I won't talk about some watery parts in the middle, but I can barely accept it. ... The so-called success is Xiao He, failure is also Xiao He. This book starts with a traditional fantasy novel and embarks on the classic path of fairy grass to become a god. As it goes on, the plot of this book is not much different from other Douluo novels. As a result, I have a mentality that it is not a pity not to read it. In other words, it is an achievement. What makes the author's excellent achievements is his solid writing foundation. What prevents his achievements from making breakthroughs is also his solid writing foundation. The author is the kind of talent who can keep the minimum limit. If I open a novel website, I will definitely spend money to poach the author to ensure a stable output of high-quality works in order to survive the weak development period. ... In short, this book is worth reading. At least it was very readable until Tang San ran to Poseidon Island, but if you continue further, you will get tired of reading.

Why don't you just let the AI ​​come up with a name?

After a bad start, or a series of bad starts, I can only say blessings.

Speaking of which, Jin Shuo'er was written about in the early stage, and this girl's current strength is indeed no weaker than that of the protagonist group in the original work. It turns out that this girl is not the heroine. I thought she would be the original heroine 😥

The real weakness of the heroine is that she directly uses the NPC heroine from the previous book. The previous book only had a little emotional line and not many NPC characters. As a result, this book did not absorb the shortcomings of the previous book, but directly applied them. I really can't understand it. If you write like this, you might as well just have a single female protagonist or two female protagonists.

The title of your new book makes it seem like the protagonist has awakened the Clear Sky Hammer and gone to the Hall of Spirits. You might as well write "Douluo: The Peerless Soul-Breaking Spear of the Hall of Enshrinement". The new title might as well be for a new book.

The most disgusting thing about reading this kind of fan fiction and villain writing is that the disgusting characters never die and just run away and then pop up again next time.

The significance of the two heroines, Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling, is all mentioned in one stroke.

Tang San in this novel is very consistent with my objective impression of him. He is a selfish villain. Well written.

I really don't have any expectations for the development of Wuhun.

I think what he said makes sense. If the author writes a second book about fighting, you can refer to 😁

A question suddenly occurred to me, could it be that Bibi Dong had realized something was wrong with Yu Xiaogang a long time ago? Maybe she really fell in love with him when she was young at first, but after being the pope for decades, she actually understood it, but she was unwilling to admit that she fell in love with a useless person back then. Because in her senses, Qian Xunji did nothing wrong and was raped in vain. In this way, she could understand that on the one hand, she was very kind to Yu Xiaogang because she was her true love after all, but on the other hand, Yu Xiaogang asked her the secret of how to cultivate twin martial arts but did not tell him. He is a person who realizes that he is wrong and then brainwashes himself that he is right.

The name suddenly changed. I was flipping through the bookshelf and still wondering which book it was.

Personally, I think Douluo 1 is the best-written one. The plot is reasonable and the content can withstand careful study. The most important thing is that the protagonist and his family were very cautious in the early stage. I felt a strange sense of immersion in the situation of walking on thin ice. Mavericks also made my eyes light up. The slap in the face of Shrek and Yu Xiaoan were also well written. The protagonist did not have any cheats that were too outrageous. I saw many fans stuffing all the good things into the protagonist and getting everything he wanted. It felt too fake. I never dreamed of doing this, and it also filled in a lot of pitfalls in the original work, and the protagonist's combat power has not been reduced to good reviews. There are definitely shortcomings. The heroine has almost no sense of existence. There is no emotional scene in Love Continent, which always feels like something is missing. Overall, the shortcomings are not concealed. Please keep updating 🙂

Author, your book is better than the last one, and it seems to be more popular. Why do you say the results are not good?