Douluo: the Peerless Corrupt Monarch

I have been reading this novel on QQ. Let me put it this way, I like the setting very much. The ability structure is very complete and there is no unreasonable mindless enhancement. But once the plot involves Shrek, it will become very mindless and a bit dark for the sake of being dark, just like the recent ones about Killing the Dark Demon Tiger (Shrek knew the danger, forced himself on, and sold the protagonist) and Xuanzi apologized. It's a bit too brainless, the plot design is a bit too childish, and it's not exciting at all. I'm not against black, but I hope that the plot of Black Shrek can be shown with a little more depth. In addition, the character creation of the villain is too simple. Either the villain is stupid and easily angered, or the villain is too superficial, that is, there is nothing else to write about except being bad. I think that for character creation, the author still needs to use plot to deepen the description of the character, not only the villain, but also the protagonist.

The original work Dou Er mentioned: Unless restrained, evil soul masters have a strong dominance at the same level, and are almost invincible at the same level, giving people a feeling that they are ten times more powerful than black ones. But is there a possibility that in Dou Er's miserable living environment, evil souls who have no talent can still waste their time? The master had been cut to pieces by Shrek a long time ago. The evil soul masters who survived were either those who had only managed to survive and were mediocre and developed along the way, or were extremely ruthless with amazing fighting power and killed them all the way. That's why it gave people the feeling that all evil soul masters were particularly strong, because the weak ones had already been eliminated! 🙂

I find that there are always people who like to talk about Zhang Peng, saying that the people who were forced into it are miserable and pitiful. Yes, they are pitiful. Aren't ordinary people who are used as consumables by the Holy Spirit Cult pitiful? Even Zhang Peng, as long as he practices with living people, he is no different from other evil soul masters. It is possible to save the evil soul masters, but that is the soul masters who will save the future evil soul masters. Now these "eat" others, their physical salvation is the greatest mercy.

The Holy Spirit teaches that group. Except for a few who were misunderstood. They are all a bunch of CS, what's there to write about?

Looking at the introduction, it says that there is a reference to the forces of Nurgle, so that people who don't know Warhammer can see what the people of Nurgle look like.

So many adapted evil spirits. I just picked one that makes people physically uncomfortable. Bone dragon. Skeleton King. Mask of the Wraith. Nightmare. Blood Demon. Nether Sword. Isn't this appropriate? It's a bit too disgusting to hate this martial spirit. There seems to be some physical discomfort every time. Especially martial arts and soul skills. Make your body look like that🤢. It's really unacceptable. Withdrawn

I used Nurgle's template, but I couldn't write his chaotic authority and morbid love for life.

The author doesn't understand whale glue at all, and I was confused by asking the protagonist to eat a 70,000-year-old suburb of Beijing. Huo Yuhao's one was almost two thousand years old, but the protagonist's must be three or four thousand years old! As a result, the protagonist absorbed a three- to four-thousand-year-old soul ring. Are you kidding me? Not counting the years of absorbing soul rings, it would take at least five or six thousand years to absorb them.

Douluo is indeed a world view that is suitable to be stitched together with Warhammer. Tang San alone can think of ten ways to fall into chaos.

Many readers think that the 5-point possessor is too ugly. In fact, it can be a little more handsome, and it can be developed in the direction of Mortarion. You can wear armor all over and be an armored man

Although it's true that you can't eat people, there's one thing to say: with the protagonist's martial spirit and his state of mind, it's enough to become a super Douluo 🙂

Is this a cycle of three? ! Will the protagonist have a big belly and a big mouth? I won't read it if it's not long😏

Join the Holy Spirit Cult, Evil Martial Spirit, there are no particularly big cheats, you insist on the bottom line of human nature and don't try your best to climb up, and you have your life and death enemy Shrek, how can you take revenge? Finished

Being a Holy Son doesn't mean you have to be the right person. You can still continue to practice with soul beasts, and you can also get the full resources of the Holy Spirit Sect to tilt and increase the secret method of the ring. It's not a loss no matter what you think about it.

I discovered a characteristic of the author. The first two books both use the 100th chapter as the dividing point. They are both around the 50th level of the protagonist. They feel that they are not written by the same person. Before the 100th chapter, I felt that the novels were quite good. After the 100th chapter, I felt that the novels were quite good. After the 100th chapter, I was not even interested in looking through the table of contents. All kinds of crashes. I don't know if this book is the same.

The subspace invaded Douluo, and even the loving father came running over.

As mentioned above, this Dou 2 book starts with Holy Spirit Cult, but the original book does not describe how to cultivate the grassroots, and we don't know what the internal environment is like. Your second design is to make it a college-type Gu pool, and I personally feel that the writing is not as good as the dual-open Dou 1 book, because I have no desire to read this book. I also wish the author a good result.

I have just read a dozen chapters, and I feel that there are a lot of grammatical errors, especially what Scorpion Tiger Douluo said, they are basically all grammatical errors.

How can I put it this way? One of the reasons why the author's writing is not popular is that it is too watery, has low substitutability, and has a lot of unnecessary words. I have to say, I remember a famous writer said that if you want to write good articles, you must learn to delete articles. Many things written by the author have no effect on shaping the character image and advancing the plot, and many things are not written when they are thought of. There must be a few good ones, and then select a few from them to write, and discard the rest. And it's really hard to write if you're not with a group, so a lot of the content in the early stage doesn't need to be written so clearly, and you don't have to focus on this aspect, just write it in one sentence. Douluo fanfics don't need to be so long, in fact, most of them are completed in one or two hundred words, so some of the early development content can actually be completely discarded. Only by quickly joining the main line can people feel comfortable and immersed, and can also promote the plot. Anyway, it can better shape the characters than writing these

The main character is so holy, I want to watch "Killing Everywhere" and "Tomb Down"

Given the author's ill-fated fate, I feel like this book won't last long.

I really want to watch the protagonist bear the identity of the son of nature and see if the abyss considers swallowing it or not? 🙂

Pure Warhammer promotional article Having multiple female protagonists is just a mission requirement. In fact, the author does not want to write about female protagonists. They are all dog leashes.

Can anyone tell me if Shen Nong is an AI text? I'm a little scared when I see the double version.

It can be said that Noumenon Sect is the force that is most in line with the core values ​​of socialism. In Dou 2, if Noumenon Sect wants to absorb more Noumenon soul masters, it must promote policies with positive impact, such as popularizing free martial soul awakening, free basic education in the first and second rings, and a stable and fair social order. Increase the civilian base and increase per capita GDP. From this point of view, the Noumenon Sect is more like an interest group that starts out as common people, has ordinary talents, has unlimited potential, has different qualifications, is supported by teachers, has knowledge ties, and can break through desperate situations. I hope to rewrite the development direction of Noumenon Sect and avoid repeating the same mistakes. Don't completely fall to Tianhun or any country. The Noumenon Sect should build its own power, absorb the Noumenon Martial Spirits of various countries, deeply study the essence of Martial Souls and soul guides, and then represent the interests of the most advanced knowledge and technology of the human race. Tianhun Xingluo is an alliance of big nobles. It advocates suppressing civilian soul masters, collecting taxes on the awakening of martial souls - if you don't have enough money, you will sell yourself, and invisible taxes on various highly sticky consumer goods during the cultivation process - buying raw materials from civilians at low prices and selling finished products at high prices to earn a large proportion of technical processing fees. On the other hand, in order to develop technology-soul guides, Sun and Moon need to vigorously recruit civilian geniuses, popularize basic education, free martial soul awakening fees, and make junior soul master colleges almost free, and build grassroots political power. Therefore, the higher-ups will know about the soul masters awakened by Sun and Moon Danfan almost immediately. Comparing the sun and the moon with the Heavenly Soul Star Luo Xiang, the fundamental interests of the sun and the moon are closer to the Noumenon Sect. The marriage between Tianhun and Vina is more like selling one's butt. Vina's first interest is still the royal rule of Tianhun. For this purpose, the main body can be sent up and down to fill in the lines. After the backbone of the main body died in the battle and could no longer bring benefits to Tianhun, he turned to the next generation of leaders of Shrek, hoping to repeat the previous routine against the main body sect: Wei Na sacrificed his life in exchange for the opponent's life to fill the battle line.       ，，， At first glance, this seems to be a lot easier to cooperate with one country to find the ontology, but at the same time, it is difficult to cooperate with other countries to find newly awakened people of the ontology. With the emergence of the top combat power of the Noumenon Sect, those who have awakened the new Noumenon martial soul will be hidden, suppressed, eliminated, and studied privately by the nobles, royal families, and soul master families. Based on this, the Noumenon Sect should not move closer to Tianhun Xingluo, at least openly neutral. Otherwise, if the Heavenly Soul Sun and Moon start a war, what will happen to the original soul master who was born in the noble family of the Sun and Moon in the original sect, and the original son fights against the father of the soul master? Instead, they can start preliminary cooperation with Sun and Moon. Sun and Moon hire Noumenon Sect to help hunt souls and output refining medicine and soul guidance tools. The main body sect collects the main body soul masters, food system, and auxiliary system through the sun and moon. Then use the ice marrow from Dilongmen to contact the Snow Emperor, and exchange half for friendship and half for soul bones. The two extremes of Poisonous Snow Emperor are just right enough to go to the Sun and Moon Arsenal to steal equipment. The most important thing is that you can use the top soul master resources at hand, skip the whole body without looking for the official political power, and secretly look for the 79th and 89th level soul masters who are approaching their end, to help them break through the Soul Saint Soul Douluo and extend their life for fifty years. The soul masters of 7989 were unable to break through due to insufficient martial soul potential, so they actively or passively turned to researching soul guidance devices. They have been immersed in them all year round, and their soul guidance knowledge and skills are definitely among the best at their level. To rescue them at this time is just like reselling state-owned enterprises back then, and it's all for nothing. Cultivate a group of rare and guardian soul beasts, and build a high-quality soul beast forest nearby. Form an alliance of your own/origin and win over humanoid spirits, such as Titan Spirit, Healing Angel Spirit, and Holy Angel Spirit. During the Soul Master Competition, it can be considered that some of the young soul masters of the main body will not participate in the name of the main body, but will join other teams during the competition period in the form of mercenary bidding. The first is to make money, the second is to make friends, the third is to obtain information, and the fourth is to find the soul master conveniently. There is no analogy between the civilians of Douluo and the civilians of real society. The civilian class in real society is the main source of soldiers for the army and the main source of force for the army. The main source of force for Douluo's army is Titled Douluo and ninth-level soul masters and the soul guides they make. The main source of troops is 4567 ring soul masters. Therefore, the civilians in Douluo do not include those without soul rings. It can be said that ordinary people in Dou 2 have no bargaining power, but Dou 3 is slightly more respectable. What can really be counted are children before awakening their martial souls at the age of six, and 123 ring soul masters. These are the common people in Douluo. I will make some arrangements, please note it down, author First, use your power to collect as many body souls as possible, such as Nether Nana's family of three (mother and daughter's soul souls), exert influence on the body soul owners, and increase the sense of identity and belonging to the protagonist. After most of the second level martial souls join the Noumenal Sect after a thousand years, they will seek the right to speak or influence based on their numbers (merits). Strive to change the ending of Dou Er's original text. Second, cultivate an organic soul master to research and create an echelon, recruit people, and build a team. Looking for the soul master whose 7989 deadline is approaching. Research new soul tools that forge metal and use physics knowledge. Third, hunt at sea and collect cultivation resources. Qi-blood shrimp, Qi-blood bread. Cultivate food-based soul masters. Refining various types of elixirs for cultivation, foundation building, and limit breaking. Fourth, find ways to increase the soul bone explosion rate. Fifth, avoid facing the sun and the moon directly. After the linked soul guide comes out, you will never be able to win.

It feels like the protagonist is cultivating a clone for Nurgle. In the end, either the protagonist's consciousness is assimilated by Nurgle's power, or Nurgle's consciousness directly takes over the protagonist's body.

Is it coming to an end? It seems that the plot has come to an end.

I think the author is so awesome! Can update two books

It's not like some pigeons that don't update anymore

I'm getting bored, can you finish it quickly and write a new book? The AI ​​one is so stupid.