System Sent Me to the Wrong Place, So I Pretend to Cultivate in the City

The author is currently in kindergarten, but has no choice but to awaken to the literary system 30 years later. In order to become a top student, he stepped on the milk dragon and punched the small robot, and was finally forced to perform as an artist and write books. But the reward system is too sloppy, and all the classics given have been published by seniors. My ability is limited and I cannot cut out a copy of "Listening to the Fireworks at the Red Dust Inn Outside Qingming Mountain at Night", so I can only translate it manually... Regarding the widely circulated comments about middle school students writing books in the comment area, I would like to declare that they are pure fiction! [This author clearly has not graduated from elementary school...] [Don't praise me, I really think I am at the middle school level~]

It's so cliche. The embarrassment of pretending to be slapped in the face in the garbage dump to make the Return of the Dragon King still hasn't dissipated, and soon another 18-year-old girl comes to live with her from the sky.

The intention is good, but the writing is too flashy. After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I feel like I just write whatever comes to mind, the main plot is not prominent enough, the copy is mediocre, and it feels too tiring to read.

After reading a few chapters, I can conclude that it was not written by AI. AI is not that abstract. It can be seen that AI cannot completely replace humans 😅

I saw the latest chapter, what can I say, it's actually pretty good and the setting is very novel. But I'm thinking about whether this is an urban novel or a fairy tale? It is not impossible to say that it is impossible to cultivate immortality in the city, but the main character's skills have always been emphasized in the front, and the setting is not like a pure urban cultivation novel. And the heroine also felt uncomfortable watching it. It's okay to love a heroine purely, and it's okay to have a harem or be single. However, the pure love between the two heroines has several meanings, and I feel a bit awkward to watch it anyway. There is also a protagonist who is a sword-wielding immortal cultivator. You said that there is nothing wrong with the cosplay animation, the Chinese comics are also very good, and even the fairy-tale games are also good. If you come up with the soul collapse, I really can't stand it. Plus, if you don't like this element or don't understand it, I can only say that these paragraphs are skipped and read, and silently turn off the automatic subscription.

The subject matter is good, the writing is acceptable, and the content is okay, but it is too draggy and slow, and it is always full of water, no passion, and no fun. Leave a mark so we can get together and part ways

Has the author ever thought that by the time more than 100 chapters have passed, the protagonist will be able to overwhelm ordinary people with basic attribute points instead of relying on fairy power, and he will need to overdraw his fairy power during the competition? Is this reasonable? Also, the main character's energy and blood are already in three digits. If he doesn't rely on immortal power, I don't feel that he is any different from ordinary people.

To be honest, I have read more than 20 chapters. Regardless of the setting, it is okay. The author is like Changshu Arnold, whose left and right brains are fighting each other. So let me ask you, how do you solve the problem of the heroine's lifespan with a single fairy and two heroines? How do you give readers the confidence to keep reading? You are the only immortal but you don't choose the cultivation option. What kind of immortal are you?

I don't know why, but it's a good idea. If I insist on it, the whole fat guy will be bragging and spanking with the protagonist.