If You Can Be Reborn

I just read the author's last book and finished half of it. Tell me your feelings. This book is evenly matched, and it feels like there are some shadows of the previous book. First of all, although the protagonist in the last book opened the Crystal Palace woke up early, he paid very little, so this time I hope the author will focus on portraying the protagonist, because the stallion protagonist is no longer lovable, and they all come to read the novel. I think it is okay for the protagonist to fall in love with several women, but his responsibility and dedication must be portrayed. Instead of a woman pushing him away, the writing is like the good-for-nothing male protagonist in a Japanese light novel. And the author obviously has the ability to write about daily sweetness very well, but why not try to write more about daily sweetness between male and female protagonists, and write about the feeling of emotional brewing. Then as for the female protagonists, the author still hopes to write a few female protagonists in detail, instead of relying on adding more female protagonists. I only read the last book, and I think the portrayal of Gu Yan in it is very good. But after re-ordering the ending, I found that there seemed to be too much at the end. But the length is only 200 chapters, so I think it must not be well written. So wouldn't it be better if this book could focus on the male protagonist, simplify the female protagonist, and focus on portraying several female protagonists instead of seeing one after the other. After all, depending on the author, you are not the kind of person who focuses on writing about business, so romance articles can focus on your strengths and write more about daily interactions.

I looked at the writer level, lv5 but then I looked at the score of this book, it seems to be a mess I read a few chapters and commented after reading it. First of all, let's talk about the character of the protagonist. I know the author is a female author, but the male protagonist written in a male channel should not be too stupid, at least he should combine knowledge with action. Several of your previous books had this kind of problem. For example, you set up a character who is a scumbag, but you ended up writing a person who behaves and thinks very strangely. He is a scumbag but not a scumbag, and he is pure but not pure. He is written as a big fool. This is called character failure. The male protagonist's character failure is much more serious than the heroine's failure, and readers will run away a lot. The second is the logic of the plot. Don't give the characters a God's perspective. Don't give the characters a God's perspective. The plot will be too rigid and awkward, and will lose the sense of substitution. Then the reader's mentality may become that of having fun. In this way, the characters in the plot are no different from puppets, and there is a lack of logic. I think this shouldn't be a mistake that lv5 authors can make. Finally, the essence of the male channel is to have a good time all the way. Don't bring the bloody plot of the female channel (I don't know about this one, I haven't read it later) Let's talk about this one again, the old rules, let's talk about the three golden chapters. After reading four chapters, the first three chapters did not follow the plot and were quite bland, but the characters did not seem to be established, the introduction was bland, and the title of the book was average, which would be very discouraging for new readers. But it does not prevent fans of the author from reading it. But it seems that book fans don't buy it... So the author should polish it up, come on

Is this because the blind date was successful and they went to fall in love? ? How do you fall in love at your age? Listen to me, get up and code quickly!

What's going on with this book? It shouldn't be so overwhelming. Many toxic data are better than this one. I think the writing is okay.

It looks great, but the data feels so bad. Don't worry, I will always support it. The writing is really to my liking.

There are so few people, I guess it's because the track of the rebirth love story is too winding, and I can't finish it without some abstract gameplay.

The heroine didn't have an ex or a relationship record in her previous life. Can the author give me an accurate answer? I've seen several rebirths do this kind of setting, but I'm going to say it later. The kind of book with good writing is equivalent to eating delicacies from the mountains and the sea and suddenly feeding them to you⑩

This book is of such high quality, why is its popularity so low? Maybe it's a matter of personal taste. I feel that many books of the same type on the bestseller list are not as good as this one. Is it because the word count is too few? Oilfish sauce, you need to reflect on it.

The latest two pictures describe the college entrance examination in a very delicate and moving way, especially the night before the college entrance examination.

If I could be reborn, I would never get married if I had no money. If I had money, I would find an obedient wife like Shen Liushu.

Won the Easter match? 🙂 I saw Hairtail in the introduction, and then I saw the author's name, and it turned out to be alive.

Are there multiple heroines? This kind of writing wouldn't be very enjoyable if it didn't have multiple female protagonists.

After reading the beginning, I knew why this book was not popular. Things like rebirth are illusory, and the author made it too deliberate, as if the protagonist can predict the future.

Can you calm down and write a completed book with more than a million words?

It's a pity. He has talent and his own style, but the author himself fails to live up to his expectations 😥

I feel that the author's writing is quite good. Will my grades be better if I write pure love stories?

Has the author opened a trumpet and written a historical article 🤐

Is it bad luck to not update for so long?

It's true that the cover of this AI novel doesn't make people want to click on it. If I hadn't read your novel before, how could I have thought of an old author using this kind of cover?

Comrade Codeword Girl, can you calm down and finish writing a book with your own unique style? Even if it is a short story, if you want to write a long story with your writing style and plot rhythm like Ji Chaji Ji, you can refer to Ji Cha Ji Da to write it. Your character description is delicate but not "smart" enough, or in other words, this writing method is not long enough, so it is always easy to become a pigeon🕊Fly away with the outline (it feels like rushing to catch up with the progress of the game,) And sometimes the relationship progress is too fast, you can refer to Ji Cha Ji Da's book, except for the one about Raging Korean Entertainment Bulldozer, the relationship and career between the male protagonist and each female protagonist in each subsequent book are step-by-step, natural and interesting, rather than a blindly romantic series of love lines and all kinds of stereotypes... For example, assuming that the outline of a book sets seven female protagonists, the emotional/career interactions and mutual strategies between the male and female protagonists grow with each other, how many words should it take to write each emotional line/career line? I have planned it all in advance, and if I start coding again, will it be less likely to change? 🕊🕊Fly away Summarize a doggerel: If you are not strong enough in writing, you still need to practice, and the starting point of enlightenment has not yet been achieved! Comrade Hairtail quickly code words! Just because there are still dreams in my heart. Civilized communication, don't complain if you don't like it.

In the first chapter of the opening chapter, when I saw the heroine committing suicide after finishing the college entrance examination, I had already completely guessed that Su Yuyou was either bullied or caused by family environment. Then she was rescued by the hero and then disappeared in the later stages. I feel that ever since Shen Youchu became popular, most urban writers have regretted Bai Yueguang and the silly Baitian character, but the writing power is not enough to describe it.