After Rebirth, I Also Have Bai Yueguang

After reading more than twenty chapters, this book... The character and life experience of the protagonist are too childish. Although some questions are obviously very simple for adults, I don't know if they are made very stiff in order to portray the character of the female character.

The writing is very good, I hope more people will read it, otherwise the author will be a eunuch, so I am posting this

If the author doesn't plan to accept Su Xia, it's best not to write too many plots with a tendency to have a single arrow. If she is needed to promote the plot, it's best to put aside the relationship and explain it in advance. Readers will feel uncomfortable if there is no list of female protagonists. Readers of multiple female protagonists will also feel that the female protagonist is missing, and it will only be unflattering.

The writing is good, you can read it, the writing is very smooth👏🏻👏🏻

A high school student borrowed a car and drove to the city hospital, and everyone thought it made sense. . Isn't it a bit outrageous?

Lin Xi gave me the same feeling I had when I watched Shen Youchu, but not as naive as Shen. I like both

Why does it feel a bit like 2010?

A very nice novel. The emotional line is comfortable. 👍

The beginning of the novel is a bit "retro", but the rest of the writing is neither poignant nor poignant.

Brother, I think your writing is very good, the rhythm is very good, and it is very comfortable. Come on 😡😡😡

Come on, come on, come on, come on, I'll give you a monthly pass

Now the plot is relatively comfortable to watch, the reborn person has a sense of "rebirth", and the male protagonist's character and behavior are quite comfortable to watch. Come on

The protagonist's image is not three-dimensional enough, and he handles things like a half-grown man. His emotions are a bit pretentious, and the update pace is also slow, which is almost boring. I can only say that the slow update speed magnifies the shortcomings.

Regardless of the character of the protagonist, it would be nice if Rebirth didn't have those things that you can't love but can't get. I think the rebirth of the novel is all about Bai Yueguang, who you can't love but can't. After decades, do you still love her? It's pure nonsense, and I don't even care about falling in love. Come on✊

Hurry up and update, how long has it been since I took a break? 😡 I have to write 10,000 words a day, it will be on the shelves soon (when will it be on the shelves? It's too early to read the book)

I thought the author was the heroine of another book named Jiang Fanshu. The writing was quite good.

Teach authors a way to promote their works. Follow readers in the comment section of novels of the same type. They will look at your homepage and see your works. Most of them will add bookshelf to see how you write, hehe😜

Many places are written in a way that is inconsistent with common sense, and the setting at the beginning is also quite blunt.

Very attractive and beautiful. Suitable for staying up all night to watch it in one sitting

Now Jiang Yang's idea seems to be to "protect" Lin Xi in all aspects as much as possible on the premise that "not falling in love does not violate the bottom line of students" (even teach her to live independently in advance?), And then fade out of her life and choose to leave after the college entrance examination? (I seem to have this idea after reading the passage in the book), but does Jiang Yang actually know that this is a manifestation of "love" or a "desire to protect" the things he cherishes? It feels like the male protagonist didn't have much emotional experience in his previous life. It can really be seen that Lin Xi has begun to change little by little, and he is becoming more and more like a couple, but there is always a feeling of a castle in the air, and he is afraid that it will explode at some point (Ò ‸ Ó||) (I can't think of what I want to express. Instead of pretending to show off, I just want to see it more exciting when the male and female protagonists confirm their relationship!)

Come on, I'll give you all the monthly tickets. It's rare to see this kind of novel that makes me feel comfortable reading it. It's plain and simple, and it's not full of all kinds of violence.

After reading the first few chapters, although there are some places where the connection is not good enough, I really like the author's writing style. It feels light and bamboo-like, giving me a somewhat elegant impression.

I liked everything else, but it was too slow, too slow, too slow. A month passed in the book with one hundred chapters! ! ! ! ! !

Long and awesome😍😍

It's been a long time since I've seen such a fresh and pure love. Come on, author, don't give up so easily.

As the title says, after all, it's hard to find a book that interests you these days.

After reading the first few chapters, my character looks a bit like a dragon.

Come on, keep updating, this month's monthly pass will be given to this book

I ran through similar novels in Aⅰ Fengyue

In fact, the writing is okay, the writing style is good, and it doesn't look like a newbie. Come on, author.