Rebirth Begins with Confession to the Squad Leader

If the author doesn't like it, he will delete it. After I post my opinion, I won't be able to read another word. I only watched the early stage, but I personally feel that I can accept it before Chapter 20, but I really can't after Chapter 20. First of all, the focus of the title is to confess to the squad leader. When commenting, I will only talk about my feelings about the love part. First, you confessed your love to the squad leader, and then you didn't think about what would happen? Even if they are birds, most of them know that at least they will work hard until the courtship is successful. They build a nest and provide food. The other party's response later is still unclear about the situation. Why confess if you don't talk about friends? I feel that it is to play on other people's feelings. Second, it's okay for the younger sister, the squad leader, and the school committee to all have female protagonists, but it can't be a female who is good-looking. The novel is written unreasonably, but it's okay, but the first few dozen chapters are really hard to watch. I accept all kinds of women. After agreeing to the squad leader, I go to home base and continue to find more people. Forgive me for my ignorance. I think this approach is a matter of perspective. Third, there are many places in the article about how to make a girl like you, but shouldn't these things be done to everyone? Just do it to a girl and then accept them in any way? On the one hand, these are things that guardians should have taught a long time ago. Can't they be engraved into instinct even after being reborn? On the other hand, women are so casual, so they can just coax and trick them? The fourth thing I really can't stand is that where you look at your college entrance examination scores, isn't it your decision long ago? If you have a girlfriend, you still think about where there are more good-looking girls. In order to cheat on yourself, is there any reason to cuckold the class monitor? Forget about your girlfriend, you should care about other people's feelings with your friends, or even with people you have a good relationship with, instead of finding a new one when your girlfriend chooses to trust each other and you choose to get to the home base. On the whole, I feel that the author may have let himself go, or there may be some problems with his three views. At least the basic issues should not be completely wrong. It is recommended to change the title. Rebirth begins with confessing to the monitor → Rebirth begins with meeting the monitor.

Pseudo-entertainment articles disguised as dog food articles, forced to show off, I am also drunk, can't I find my own position? I have to be wise, I am speechless.

It's just a short novel written according to a certain routine template. To put it bluntly, it looks like an assembly line product. It has basically no highlights. It feels like there are a lot of things to complain about, but I don't know where to start. It feels like copying songs and poems. The author has no relevant common sense, so he imposes various abilities on the protagonist. When he needs to use them, he often mentions them in one stroke, which makes the character creation very superficial and superficial.

I hope Codeword Princess can focus more on the relationship aspect in the new book. In The Empress, I felt that the protagonist and some female protagonists just got along with each other in a daze, which made me confused. Since you yourself said that you have wanted to write about cities a long time ago, then you should carefully polish the new book and strive to make the second book better than the first and more logical. Strive to write every heroine in the book well and make their characters fuller and more distinct. In my opinion, if every heroine in a book is liked by some readers, then the book is very successful.

I saw the shadow of Youchu in Youshui, but she is more assertive than Youchu, and she is also a rare white moonlight in the world. I hope the author can give Youshui a better ending than Youchu, and fill my heart. Finally, the author's writing style is so good that it makes people want to fall in love after reading it.

The new book needs to be read. Please take a look at it. If you feel it doesn't suit your style after reading it, it's not too late to leave. Thank you. (Friendly reminder, this book will be a little more emotionally focused. If you want to see a plot that keeps showing off, you don't have to click in.)

That's it~~

Confession in public is still in the classroom. Don't tell me that the young man is high-spirited and fearless. First, it will affect the atmosphere of the school, and both will affect myself and my so-called female friends. Although youthful impulsiveness is the standard feature of youth, this public confession is inevitably a bit mentally retarded. There's nothing wrong with that in college, but this isn't college.

The most unpleasant thing to say in the entertainment industry is J Nest

It's over, I want to fall in love, why didn't I meet girls like You Shui and Chan Yi when I was young 😭😭😭😭

I've seen a lot of urban novels, but I don't see many harem novels complaining about female protagonists like this. I rarely see readers of harem novels complaining about why they don't have a harem in single-heroine novels. There is a group of readers who like the harem and delete the book when they see it. If you like the harem, it is so easy to delete the book when you see it. It's clearly written in the harem story and it's not about pure love for a scumbag. Just like a fish seller in a vegetable market, you must ask the boss to stop selling fish and sell tofu instead.

Alright...

If I continue to raise books, I will commit suicide🔨🔨🔨

I hate the main character who has a harem, but I really like reading harem novels.

At first glance, I thought I was entering a pyramid scheme.

Why hasn't it been updated yet, eunuch?

Although it's annoying to write about harems in entertainment, I support harem stories. It's better to write about harems of capitalist bosses.

The book is not bad, but is the girlish sentiment always bad? Confess your love to Qin Youshui, and then confirm the relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend. During this period, I fell in love with a girl online and agreed to get admitted to Yanjing. For Zhao Chaner, I chose the same university as Yanjing University instead of Qin Youshui, Yanjing Normal University. She also deceived Qin Youshui into telling me the so-called odd and even numbers to choose the school. At the beginning of the talent show live broadcast, beauty Xu Wanyue was buying a car and collecting credit cards. Bar beauty Li Yuqing, plus your character card's cousin Lu Xiaoning. Chapter 32: 6 women, enough scum. You said that if you write a thousand chapters, why not write hundreds?

The writing and plot are both good, harem. . . . . . Farewell,

I saw a hint of Chen Gou in the front, so I really shouldn't write about him. The Shura Field in the back made me tired and upset, and I was so criticized that I lost my subscription even if I didn't subscribe. It's better to write this kind of thing earlier if the writing is good. Some people actually like the relaxed Shura Field where they are jealous and quarrelsome.

Fortunately, I didn't chase him. He jumped into the street as expected.

The success is also the writing style, and the failure is also the writing style. So far, I have seen where I met someone to pick up a conversation in a bar. I'm a little discouraged, but I'd like to mention it to the author. Although it's normal to process words artistically in a book, your online article about a man and a woman's polite conversation in a bar is still a bit dramatic, especially when you add in reasoning. It's not an ordinary drama. Urban Internet articles about urban life should start from reality. You make me feel like I'm watching a third-rate TV show writer show off his brains. It's not flattering. In reality, no one would talk like this.

The data is very messy, oh, it's very disturbing to look at.

What happened to the promised update? You forgot.

The stable update indicates that Chapter 106 is completed

The plot is old-fashioned and has nothing new. It was a routine that was bad a few years ago.

🤓🤓🤓 Does Code Word Ji lack the name of a supporting character? I want to make a guest appearance😁😁😁

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

If you don't accept the heroine, you will accept the supporting female character first? Don't know what to think

The protagonist and the heroine are not in the same university. It should be convenient for the protagonist to start a harem. After all, it is not a novel with a single heroine. I don't like it very much.