The Empress Wants to Possess Me Privately

There is nothing new about it, it is an easy way to evacuate historical web articles from the harem, and it comes standard with the time travel + system. The book is not long, but the harem is huge. The male protagonist's name is Mu Changqing, which always reminds me of a certain female protagonist in "I Really Don't Want to Read the Movie", which is a bit of a joke. After three years of traveling without achieving anything, the system suddenly gave him a task to treat smallpox. Then he met an official lady by chance and then came into contact with the empress. After that, Mu Changqing got a piece of land and planned to make money by selling perfume, plows, potatoes, etc. The daily use of red wine, hot pot, soap, and modern paintings shocked women. Copying poems in poetry societies and serializing novels in newspapers and periodicals were also indispensable. Controlling the locust plague and defending against enemy invasion also depended on the protagonist. Outline-style writing is very fast-paced, has almost no details and rationality, and is completely impossible to read with your brain. There are many female protagonists. In the first volume of Chang'an Fengyue, there is the empress Chu Zhi and her slaves Feng Hua Xue Yue and the Four Concubines, as well as official ladies, flower shop owners, lolita, female generals, and doctors. The second volume goes down to the south of the Yangtze River and adds bandits, oirans, princesses, and Taoist nuns, and the third volume goes up to the Tianshan Mountains. The description of some heroines has certain characteristics, but there are so many heroines crammed into such a small number of words that it is impossible to describe them in depth. The end result is extreme homogeneity, except for the identity label, they are essentially the same. The protagonist's fast-food strategy guide is boring. Perhaps the biggest advantage of a cup of concentrated water that is lighter than boiled water is that it is non-toxic, non-toxic and non-depressing. After being sucked by Sister Lily, the author published a new book "Rebirth, Starting from Heartbeat" one day later. This book has decided to end. The power of poisonous milk is so terrifying. The new book is about urban rebirth, and the author's writing skills have improved. If the harem was smaller and the plot was more detailed, it would probably be better than this book.

No one is reading? Can you give me some advice on whether the writing is good or bad 🥱

A message to the author: Hello, hairtail boss. I just got into your book through a recommendation. I have read Chapter 82 now, and I saw the situation about the Virgin Bitch at the end of the chapter. I support the boss in deleting the post or even directly replying to it. I have posted the specific comments at the end of the chapter. Also, thinking that I have already written the words anyway, and to put it bluntly, it just evokes the topic, I would like to make some immature suggestions to the boss. Let me say it first, I am not here to ruin things, I just hope that the boss will write better and better, so that we readers will have better things to watch and more excitement.         ，，， For example, if the protagonist has no family background or foundation, he can go against the Xu family without incurring revenge. This is a bit forced to instill intelligence in the villain. Hairtail Boss describes the people in that world as very kind-hearted, but intersperses a lot of dark methods (the emperor was assassinated, Wei Xing was assassinated, the Xu family's unscrupulous little conspiracy to steal the protagonist's business, etc.), Which feels a bit inconsistent. According to this situation, the Xu family was slapped twice (once because they failed to recruit and were not given face). The other time was a complete slap in the face at the poetry competition. Zhou Yuan's poems were better than Mo Bai's. The protagonist took the first place and turned around and said that Mo Bai won the championship. It was extremely insulting. It was not only insulting to Zhou Bai, but also even more insulting to Mo Bai. This is like what the Olympic gold medalist said I don't want the gold medal, so I gave up the first place to the third place. Does the third place have the face to go up and accept the award? This is worse than the food that comes from nowhere! ), I suffered a loss (I failed to try to steal the protagonist's business, but was falsified by the protagonist, which hurt my reputation), I didn't even think about taking revenge immediately, and I still waited for the protagonist to develop for a while before giving out experience points. And in my opinion, from the perspective of the Xu family, I would think this way: This Mu has no family background, unknown origins, and no foundation, but the emperor values ​​​​him very much! Kill him and you can test the emperor's bottom line. Second, it can give a signal to my people and neutral people in the court that the emperor values ​​​​more safety than I value, and it shows my strength. Third, you can seek to seize Mu's property and family wealth, and the business will make a lot of money every day. Money and silk are very attractive. The four lonely civilians were fortunate enough to enter the county, and if they died, their children would be dead and they would have no worries. At most, the emperor could use this as an excuse to exchange benefits with me. This wave is not a loss. . . Therefore, in the previous chapters, Hairtail Boss lacked a protagonist's description of the constraints on the Xu family, or a prevention method for the Xu family, or even a method of revenge. I even guessed that those readers who randomly said that the protagonist was a virgin bitch also derived from this aspect and concluded that the protagonist was a softie, and united with the protagonist to spend their own money to save the locust plague, so they spoke radically and randomly. . . . Therefore, the hairtail boss can add some political planning or personal means to strengthen the protagonist's toughness and, more importantly, show the protagonist's mature mind. From the current point of view, the protagonist's mind belongs to a relatively naive and simple type: I don't offend and no one offends me (I didn't enter the wrong order), I treat others well, others treat me well, human nature is always kind and conscious, and the heart to guard against others is indispensable - it does not exist. . .         ，：（，，，，） . . The second is to increase the political planning of the protagonist (for example, using voice shares to win over some neutral and powerful people in the court. Individuals will die quickly if they live alone. A money-making business without the protection of powerful people cannot develop based on common sense. A three-year-old child walks through the bustling city with a lot of money to understand). . . The third is to describe some of the protagonist's methods of developing armed forces (those who are not loyal to the royal family, but only loyal to the protagonist's power, such as recruiting refugees, opening a college to catch babies, and adopting military management for education, etc.). . . Also, important suggestions, vivid characters, and common sense. . . The Hairtail Boss's book is good as a mindless show of affection, but I hope that the Hairtail Boss can write a masterpiece like Yueguan, Banana, and Jie Yu 2. Also, I have only read Chapter 82. I will continue reading and hope to review your book in the future. . .

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​] I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words between the words. There were four words written all over the book: "Persecute You Shui"!

Hua Ji

Love it, love it. Finally there is another harem story that I can read! I love this style so much. It's neither humble nor arrogant, nor does it pretend to be a monk. The characters are rich in emotions and the speech is logical. The rhythm is relaxed and comfortable. I thought there would be no more besides chickens. Come on, author. It's available for full order without any ambiguity!

Build a building, pay 20 on the first floor and 100 on the first floor...

I didn't expect this to be over. It seems that the girl was not missed? It seems that she was missed again?

Queen

It was night, Chu Zhi, dressed in a phoenix robe, stood on the terrace of the palace and looked at Chang'an City at night. "It's autumn, it's so cold at night, how can I stand alone on the terrace." After saying that, Mu Changqing walked up behind Chu Zhi and put a coat on her. Tightening his tight coat, Chu Zhi turned to the man and said: "How did you know I was here?" "I bumped into Yue'er when I just came here." Chu Zhi rolled his eyes at Mu Changqing: "It's not just that I bumped into it, right?" Mu Changqing said righteously: "I came here specifically to find you." Smelling the faint scent of Mu Changqing that belongs to Yue Ji: "Death Sign" "Haha" After saying this, Chu Zhi stopped looking at Mu Changqing and turned around to continue looking at Chang'an. Mu Changqing also calmed down, hugging the waist of the person next to him, watching this prosperous age with her. The two of them looked at Chang'an in the autumn night and were speechless for a while. "Changqing" "I'm here" "When did you fall in love with me?" "I don't know, maybe it was the first time you transformed into your cousin and came to the suburban courtyard. Maybe it was the first tryst between you and me that year, or maybe it was the picturesque scenery when you stood on the Qingfeng Tower and looked at the West Lake." Chu Zhi turned slightly, looked into Mu Changqing's eyes and said seriously: "It's the hanging pot that saved the world during the smallpox in Chang'an, it's the god descending to earth when the building is about to collapse, it's the startling glimpse from the Qingfeng Tower, it's the first sight of ten thousand years..."  "I am the empress of a country, and I thought I only valued you as a courtier. It wasn't until that Xianyi suddenly came to you that I realized that you were already an indispensable person around me. I couldn't let her take you to the Yun Kingdom. I didn't want to turn against you. It wasn't until something happened later that I realized that it was love..." "Wan Ling..." Before Chu Zhi could finish speaking, she felt her body instantly being restrained into a strong embrace, and her unfinished words were drowned in the affectionate kiss. The slightly cold tongue slid into the mouth, greedily grabbing her breath and exploring every corner vigorously. This moment of throbbing made each other forget everything around them. At this time, there was no queen, no one under the palace who might be looking at them, there were just two hearts leaning together. After a long time, the evening wind gradually subsided, and the moon was in the sky, bright and gentle. The soft moonlight made the night calm and peaceful. After slapping the man who didn't know how to show mercy, Chu Zhi signaled that he couldn't hold on anymore, and Mu Changqing's lips finally left Chu Zhi's delicate lips. As the two people separated, a silk thread was pulled between their lips, shining brightly in the moonlight. Mu Changqing held the weak Chu Zhi in her arms and laughed silly.          ，:""          "，，"          "Humph, it's good that you know that Hua Ji Chong will never care about these things if you don't care about them. If you don't cherish them and let me know which sister has been wronged, I won't be able to spare you." "Haha, as you command, my Queen." After thinking about it, Mu Changqing said to Chu Zhi: "Qing'er's letter said that the snow lotus on Tianshan Mountain is about to bloom. In a few days, I will take you to see the lotus pond on that mountain." "But what will happen if I leave the palace?" "You haven't been out of the imperial city for a long time, so this time I will take you to visit." "As for official matters, you don't have to worry, they will take care of it for you." "Them?" A smirk appeared on Mu Changqing's face, "If you are away during this period, Zhixi will listen to the government behind the curtain for you." "Sister Zhixi, this is not good." "Don't worry, the world is at peace now, and there will be no problems with so many sisters to help." "Okay." "Then you pack up and set off tomorrow."

To be honest, the writing is really good. I finished reading it in one go, looking forward to the follow-up. The author should write more stories like fairies in the household, senior sisters in Daoli, youth in spring and autumn, 😏😏😏. I love to watch sister-brother romances. Hahaha. The most loving ones are when the male protagonist is treated like a younger brother and is pampered.

Da Meimei

For me, qc is optional, qs is a must.

Taste in the world is happiness.

Don't write y novels in the future. It's thankless.

， It's cold as the year progresses, and I don't know what time it is. This is a quiet house outside the city of Chang'an, with rockeries and flowing water, a short bamboo pavilion, where you can hear the red rain in the spring, appreciate the lotus in the summer, view the old grass in the autumn, and sing the ice soul in the winter. You can enjoy it in all seasons. "It's snowing." At this time, in the pavilion next to the lotus pond, there was a delicate woman, wearing a spray green narrow-sleeved double-breasted skirt, lined with a lotus-colored embroidered gold orchid tube top. The upper edge of the tube top and the skirt of the skirt were both light blue. She was tied with a palace ribbon around her waist and tied with a colorful wishful knot at the right waist. Looking at the crystal in his hand, the corners of his mouth curved in a touching way.        ， "What are you looking at? Now that you are pregnant again, you can't stay cold." A handsome scholar came from the other side of the corridor, covered her with a big red feather veil and a crane cloak in a white fox, and then hugged her gently.                                                                                                                                                           but then she was a woman and a mother had been a mother for many years said. She leaned gently in his arms, her pink face stained with red clouds, holding a catkin tightly, looking at Qiong Fang falling into the lotus pond: "I'm thinking about the winter of three years in Qingyuan." But that is the starting point of everything. The saddest thing in life is that things are different and people are different, and the luckiest thing is that things are not the same as people. Some things have long been forgotten by the years, and some moods have never been stained with dust, whether it is for him or her. "The snow that year was not as tender as it is now. That heavy snowfall displaced so many people, and the disaster was followed by a great epidemic. Wan Ling was heartbroken at that time." He gently put his hand on her shoulder and looked at her blushing earlobes. Her ears were invaded by his hot air, causing her to shrink her neck, and her face became more rosy. However, looking at the increasingly heavy wind and snow outside the pavilion, she still let sadness creep into her brows, "If there had been Yizhuang at that time, there wouldn't be so many people leaving." Seemingly feeling that the topic was a bit heavy, the man smiled and said: "At that time, I don't know which girl sneaked out despite the epidemic, otherwise she wouldn't have been caught by me." After that, he rubbed her little hand. She added rouge to her face: "So you were thinking about this at that time. You should have asked Mr. Wu to drive you away, so that you would not be bullied by you now." As she said this, she retracted her body a little more so that he could hold her tighter. He smiled, squeezed her little hand, and hugged her arm tightly: "I will never let you go." Feeling the warmth of the person in his arms, after a while, she nodded imperceptibly, hummed softly, and tightened her grip on her hand.                                                                                                                                  Suddenly, a pool of spring water is thrown into chaos, and the soul is entangled in the two hearts. Some people, at one glance, will make a lifelong mistake. I plan to marry you and live in peace for the rest of my life. Even if you are ruthlessly abandoned, you cannot be ashamed. She feels extremely happy and satisfied with her current life. She handles the affairs of Yizhuang, takes care of the flowers and plants in the courtyard, occasionally chats with her sisters, and hides in his warm embrace when the wind, frost, snow and rain come. Where do you go in heaven and on earth? The taste of the world is pure joy. This made her occasionally have an unreal feeling. Although he broke into her heart for no reason, she originally just wanted to be by his side. She could look at his eyebrows, look at his profile, and hear what great things he had done, which made her heart warm. What I was most afraid of at the time was that looking back on the past was all wrong, and I had to drink a cup of melancholy alone and stay with me for a few years. Now she has been married to him for many years, and the fruits of love have already been conceived. The family is happy, and the sisters are harmonious. Occasionally, she wakes up at night. Although the warmth in his arms is still there, she is afraid that it is just a dream. One day she will wake up from the dream and sigh that old love and new dreams have come. He knows the thoughts of the person in his arms and has memorized her temperament many years ago. Not only her, but even he himself will occasionally have unreal feelings. He was caught off guard and came to this world. At that time, he was alone, walking around, full of curiosity, and he had a system to control the world. But now that I have my beloved wife and concubine in my arms, my children are around my knees, I only have tenderness and concern in my heart. Occasionally I take a nap in the afternoon, look at the white clouds outside the curtain, feel the gentle breeze in the forest, and I am afraid that things have changed and people have changed, and the happiness in the past is nothing more than a dream.        ， But fortunately, he was never confused.        ， "Look." " He stretched out his hands and let the jade butterfly fall into the palm of his hand. When he looked again, one side had already turned into jade dew, and the other side was still intact in his hand. She was a little surprised, but she still grabbed the hand with water droplets, and complained: "You are so old, I'm still playing in the snow, and I'm not afraid of catching cold, eh..." The feeling in his hand was not cold, but warm. He smiled and wrapped his hand around hers. Only then did she remember that this hand had just held her tenderness tightly, and now it was still gentle.       ，，， So we embraced each other, the beauty remained the same, with our fingers clasped tightly. "It's snowing." She said softly, still leaning in his arms. "Yes, it's snowing." He replied with a smile.

The showers have not stopped, the remaining lotuses are hanging low, and the rain flows along the eaves, thus isolating the inside and outside, and it is a vast area. Someone prepared a cup of clouds on the rocking chair and watched the wind and rain outside the curtain. Occasionally, the wind would come and bring light rain into the arms. A woman came from the inner room. Her clothes were elegant and full of autumn water. She did not apply pink and white, but her color was like morning glow reflecting snow. She had bright eyes and white teeth, and lotuses grew at every step. Seeing that the scholar on the chair had already met Zhou Gong, Qiong's nose wrinkled slightly, and she turned back to take out the thin quilt to cover him. Looking at the sleeping face on the chair, listening to the wind and rain outside the curtain, she unconsciously thought of the past, when she was running on the grass with a sky-high bun, her face was as red as peach blossoms, and her brows were green as willow leaves. Silent and easy to get angry, that is the most beautiful age, but you don't know when you fell in love with this bad guy? I don't know the origin of love, but I am deeply in love. Perhaps it was the galaxy she saw on his back that night; Perhaps it was the piece of candy she fed him with her own hands; Perhaps it was the dinner party that caught each other off guard; Perhaps it was the nervous and expectant inquiry in his arms that day; I thought I couldn't get the answer, so I just listened to the sound of rain and let my thoughts wander. Perhaps, from that glance on the river bank, the ending was already decided. He walked away in shame, but sniffed the green plum. That was the first encounter. It was obviously the most distant memory, but it was very real. Thinking about it now, it is still vivid in my mind, which makes me blush. The kite with the same name as her still remains with her, and the draft of the appointment letter also witnesses the past with the kite. Although the years are long, because there are people carrying me, I don't feel that my clothes are thin. Looking at it, I unconsciously felt a little crazy. I woke up suddenly, but my face was flushed. She moved her feet slightly and wanted to leave. Suddenly, she felt her body tilt slightly. She let out a soft cry and was hugged by someone. The rocking chair under her body also made a "squeaking" sound. "What are you thinking about?" Came a reassuring voice from above. She rubbed his chest slightly, her blush still lingering, and she clenched and loosened her little hands: "You bad guy, why are you sleeping here? My sisters are not here now. If you catch the cold, I have to take care of you." "It's true, I don't dare to let you take care of me." Hearing this, her face was annoyed, her silver teeth were slightly grinded, and she was about to speak out, but she was covered by Bao. The person below also hugged her tightly, lowering his head in his ear. She smiled and said, "Then please trouble Miss Yun to keep me warm." She looked up into his eyes, with a pretty face, lowered her head, grabbed the skirt of her clothes with her little hands, inhaled slightly, and looked at him again: "You, bad boy!" ... "Bad guy, when are we going back?" She asked lazily, her face slightly red. She didn't know how much time had passed, but she could already see the scenery in the courtyard. The wind and rain take a break, waiting for the sky to rise. "Just wait for Jiayue to fall into pieces." The man touched her hair and said helplessly: "When I came, I was swaying towards the clouds, and I was still in the morning. I thought she was a drunken dreamer, but I didn't expect that she was running around and working hard. It's so easy to find leisure." But there was a chuckle in the arms: "You bad guy will be a drunken dreamer when you go back, the four sisters of Fenghuaxueyue But they are all here. Humph, but now I have the exclusive possession of her." He thought of the beauty at home, and felt a pain in his waist. The eyes of the person in his arms were filled with danger: "Bad guy, what are you thinking about?" He looked at the person in his arms, her beauty had not faded with time, but she still had a mature charm. The two were harmonious and integrated. The girl flying the kite is always there. Unconsciously, his lips touched her ear, and he kissed her gently: "I'm thinking about the drunken dreamer at night." The man instantly blushed with embarrassment: "Bah! You are a slut!" But he squeezed into the man's arms and covered his cheeks. Today's rain has a hint of chill, and a few drops of rain fall with the eaves. A gust of wind comes, bringing the moisture of the soil and grass. He pulls the thin quilt and tightens the person in his arms. Beside me is half a cup of residual tea, and in my arms is the warm fragrance of nephrite. The next year after I left, I was in Jiangnan. Dream about flowers blooming.

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Is it possible to describe so many female protagonists? , If the writing is not vivid enough, it is better not to write at all

To be honest, the writing is quite good. If the exposure is high enough, many people will read it, but many people don't know about it.

The book is okay. I feel a little better after reading it. The plot is gradually getting better. Come on, read it slowly and order it all.

There are so many heroines, I'm a bitch, can anyone tell me if I can watch it?

Dear book friends, let me tell you a personal experience. I have read a novel in the same system as this one before, but the hero and the empress are brothers and sisters. It is also a system, but too many people read books. In the end, the author couldn't hold on any longer. The novel ends with the system being a prototype that escaped from a highly civilized coup, and then encountered a deserter (another system) on the battlefield. The world of high martial arts was chaotic and interstellar armor, and the Iron Man Hammer 108 single general had a sense of déjà vu. The wreckage of the bad guy's mecha at the end has eerie Morse code flashing on it (I'll definitely be back). For the first time, I had a deep understanding of piracy and felt sorry for the author. This time I won't do it in vain. I will support it to the best of my ability.

Why is there only one update recently? Come on, hairtail! I hope the handling of Chu Zhi and Xianyi is better The emotional portrayal of Hanhan and Hua Ji are both good Of course shopkeeper Qin is also very good But to be honest, the handling of the following women feels a bit hasty (personally, I don't like it, don't criticize it) How can I put it, Mu Changqing's personality charm is indeed great But the emotional portrayal of the following women, such as the boss, Xue Ji, and Dr. Su, is very little and slightly careless. So I hope to describe more about women's inner worlds and let us see the transformation process of their minds. Anyway, come on, hairtail! The recommendation votes are all yours! The monthly pass has not been saved yet😌

Yunzhixi

It's very well written. This is the only novel I've fully ordered. Come on!

HanHan Pingping is more than thirteen years old, and the cardamom leaves are in early February.

Yunzhixi

Why do I feel that male protagonists are cowardly towards female protagonists?

Liu Qing