Warhammer 40K: Forged Steel Brothers

The author's writing is very good, not a novice novel, and there are very few warband themes. If he keeps writing, the results should not be worse than the Warhammer novels at the top of the rankings, but I hope the author pays attention to the following points: First of all, the problem with the Warhammer novel is that the story of GW has not ended, and only now the two original bodies have returned. This novel will definitely not be able to consume GW's hard work. I suggest the author to think of the ending early, otherwise it will be difficult to wrap up later. Secondly, another problem is that the war gang develops in the real universe. Although it is in a bad place like the Maelstrom, the empire basically doesn't care about it. But if the trouble gets bigger and the empire is determined to attack you, you probably won't be able to handle it. So have you thought about what to do if you are discovered? Are you going to fight hard, run away, or wash your hands? You have to set up your ambush early. Then, regarding the development of the warband, it is not possible to rely solely on the oil man for technology. If we develop independently, how to organize the talent pool and how to create technological advantages in the cesspit is also a problem. Chaos pollution is everywhere. It will take Caul 10,000 years to complete a new set of equipment. It is too difficult to go further. Without technological advantages, how can we fight against the Imperial Army who are reclaiming mountains and seas? However, it should still be possible to develop some technology with the Wotan Alliance (dwarves). Management is also a problem. Most of the Astartes Chapters can only manage a planet. The Smurfs can manage a territory the size of Ultramar, but no matter how big it is, it is hard to say whether it can manage it. However, even Ultramar should not be able to defeat the Empire. Management should only rely on AI, and then it returns to the previous technical issue. What will you do after you grow and develop? There must be a program or goal to unite people's hearts. Nowadays, when there are few people, it is difficult to unite through loyalty. When there are many people, it will be difficult. Maybe it is the result of small followers everywhere. The lifespan of the protagonist is also a problem. Unless a space warrior stays in the subspace, he will basically not live for 40k. However, the protagonist's power is in the real universe. How to solve this problem, whether it is a stasis position or the chaos of subspace time, the protagonist is not online, no matter what, the development of the power will be out of control. Finally, if a force in the Warhammer world wants to compete in the Central Plains, either the protagonist himself is a boss, or there is a boss behind him as a backer, and the boss must be at least a god-level, otherwise there is almost no hope.

To be honest, the more I watch, the more I feel that Perturabo is indeed inferior to Dorne, and is lagging behind in all aspects. Even if Terra is given to Perturabo, he will not be able to hold it. He kept saying that others were taking advantage of him, which was just an excuse for him to give up halfway and asked to take on the important responsibilities. But when he couldn't do it, he said that others were taking advantage of him, completely forgetting that he asked for the important responsibilities himself, and then ran away halfway. He said that his adoptive father was using him, but he not only gave up his son as his successor, but also stopped his daughter from taking care of him as his mother, sister, and lover. In the end, Perturabo even drew blood from his home planet to rebel He said that the Emperor was using him, but it turned out that the Emperor told him from the beginning that the future would be very difficult and that you would have a hard time, and he accepted it himself. When it was over, he couldn't stand it anymore, so he didn't say anything, but asked for more dirty work, and then held a grudge against other people. It is said that Horus used him, but the rebellion turned out to be of his own volition. He wanted revenge, as if he was not using others. Let alone the rebel faction, they could not defeat Terra without him. The great rebellion was only possible with the help of the four gods. With him or without him, it would not make much difference. Perturabo has always said that he is steel, but the fact is that he has proven time and time again that he cannot bear heavy responsibilities. He says that others are taking advantage of him, but no one who is really good to him has a good ending.

The Empire is not a thing, Chaos is just a Tuosi. It is okay to fight against the Empire and develop independently, but it is not even as good as a Tuosi to help Chaos fight against the Empire.

This book is story-driven, and I have no problem with the choice of conflict points. The question is whether you are a native Space Marine or a renegade. If he doesn't die, isn't he just cannon fodder? If you play operations, can you still play Ultramarines? ? The natives don't have a sense of belonging. How can they face the opponent's champion if they don't hang up?

The author's writing is good, but some readers have read too many articles, including the beginning of the original body, the reincarnation of the yellow-skinned mouse, and the reincarnation of the star god. If you encounter someone who is a bit normal, you can't stand it, so don't worry about them, just filter out the ones who read interesting articles.

Is there anything wrong with the pig's trotters? From the introduction, he is a native. If the aboriginal has not yet died, how can he hang out in the cesspit of Warhammer? Many things written are far-fetched.

Why are you alive without Chaos Resistance in Warhammer? Without Primarch-level strength, how can you change the galaxy? You can't just be a troublemaker, right?

I'm getting married, and I hope everyone is happy.

I just love this one, I can play with it myself

I read eight chapters and couldn't find any sense of empathy at all. He was said to be a slave who was not the leader of the Primarch Legion, but he seemed to be righteous, but then he turned around and treated ordinary people as slaves, killing hundreds of people without any reason. What is the meaning of this story? Is this something that modern people can like with their values? !

As long as you keep updating, this book will be successful.

Once the extermination order is issued, this book will die violently.

It's meaningless. The protagonist who is more chaotic than chaos destroys a planet with a population of 10 billion.

Protagonist image

The protagonist's empire should be very happy to recruit people. They have no Chaos mutation, do not believe in Chaos, and are even hostile to Chaos. They will also work hard to farm and advance technology in their own territory.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the author writing that a starship can travel 150,000 kilometers per second with just one kick of the accelerator. A Moon-class cruiser's speed is 2,000 kilometers per round in about an hour. Do you understand that the speed is 2,000 kilometers per hour? The battleship has a speed of 1500 kilometers per hour, the light cruiser has a speed of 2500, the escort and the expulsion speed are about 3000 to 3500. With a speed of 150,000 kilometers per second, I am curious about what the author had in mind when he wrote it! ?

Author: You want to say that it's okay not to cheat the protagonist, and it's okay not to have a system, but how can you, a native, write about it? Just like in the original novel, you appear as a person who doesn't exist at all. Do you understand what I mean? When you write about time travel, you at least understand the forces and what happened. Are you writing about the stories of the indigenous people in the original novel?

Extinction makes that very abrupt and feels inexplicable

When I first read it, I felt it was well written. But I read the comments that later on the protagonist ran into the pseudo-emperor again? ! Is there really a sudden change behind this? If so, could the warning be given a little earlier?

Another good book has been finished. It feels like yesterday after reading it for a long time.

The style of the book is steady and steady, the author often provides illustrations, and the character of the protagonist is well arranged, and the ending is also very interesting The shortcoming is that it cannot do without the official framework after all, which is a pity, but not blindly making it up is also a strategy. After all, the work is not finished, which is understandable. The overall feeling is Warhammer Food + Grass, the author has worked hard 😌

His framework and plot direction are very well constructed. There will be no unfinished business, and a perfect closed loop will be formed. But the content is a bit sparse, and the details are also relatively few. In fact, you can completely extend the line and write more interesting stories. The daily life of each character, between brothers, and between companies. Between worlds. A sideways description and portrayal of the empire from the perspective of politics, economy and culture. You can write anything. Even if it is inconsistent, as long as it is consistent with the general environment, you can write it in. Also, there is still too little depiction of the chapter's development. It can completely reflect the daily life and battle process of the battle leader. You can fill in some of these things, and finally fill in the frame and content. Fill in some strange settings and stuff all the mess into it. The main thing is to have a large amount of food. Need to add more details and add some settings. I take the plot outline and direction of the novel as a negative, mainly depicting the daily life of Warhammer and the daily life of the chapter leader. The protagonist must be portrayed more vividly, and the battle group must be portrayed more vividly and vividly. The development of the Chapter, the image of the Empire. There are also the details of daily life. There are also a few special characters. It would be better to treat them as the main subjects when depicting them, just stew them in a cauldron with various settings in the Warhammer world or mix in some details of life that are consistent with the logic of the general background. It can even talk about some philosophical issues as a person's thinking and decision-making. It is definitely a very famous Warhammer fic, although it is a bit niche. Yours is in line with the characteristics of the Warhammer world, focusing on a large amount of food and a large pot of stew. Big brawl. His worldview is too big. You can write anything. If any big boss builds another book based on his career outlook, I think it would be very, very good. Although this novel is unlikely to be popular, if he really has a large quantity, sufficient management, and sufficient quality, he should be able to break through the circle.

Even if it was only a secret, at least the Chapter remembered that the Primarch knew that a hero who had twice exiled the Daemon Primarch had fought for the Imperium.

It's a very good work, the content is well conceived, the plot is reasonable and detailed, and it's quite consistent with the original work. Why isn't it popular?

The best Warhammer 40k fanfic 😭 Where is the author? This writing ability is definitely that of an experienced author.

The Emperor is invincible. You don't believe in the Four Gods. Does not believe in the Emperor. Even his own original body betrayed him. There's no way you can survive. You don't believe in the Emperor, you can't even resist the Four Gods. How come you haven't been corrupted by chaos for such a long time?

There is a book next door with a plot very similar to this one. Some of the passages are exactly the same.

Aren't you going to write a new book? This Lord of Forged Steel is really well written.

Although this book is okay

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