This Is Swallowed Star, Not Resident Evil

The three chapters are extremely poisonous, causing several big lumps. But everyone swore that it would be fine after three chapters. I endured the nausea for three chapters. Chapter 8 I can't stand it and leave. I believe your evil deeds. Writing a fanfic about Devouring the Starry Sky, I can't even figure out the basic settings. What a shame for you.

According to the setting of this book, the low level of the dungeon may be due to the problem of openness. From what I read in the first few chapters, the protagonist's openness is very consistent with the first-level evaluation.

He was directly poisoned and died. What I was thinking about didn't even enter the tomatoes.

It's too poisonous. Is this for children? Do you still have proof? It's no longer popular now. Gou is the king. What's the point of waiting for you to become great?

Chapter 2 can't be solved directly by me! In addition to the age of the time travel, the protagonist is already 40 years old, but the protagonist behaves like a primary school student. Can the author confess how old he is?

The three golden chapters are written as three chapters of defense. I can't count the poisonous points in the three chapters. 😄

It smells like a girl's novel from ten years ago

In terms of basic settings of fan works, it is best not to make too many mistakes. If the basic settings are too wrong, the overall evaluation will be lowered. No matter how much and fluently you write, it will be a thankless effort. Because I think it can still be read, I am making suggestions, and it is also to improve the quality of the work, which is beneficial to both readers and authors. I won't talk about the previous questions. I have seen the world of Blood Luo. After the world lord dies, the world inside his body will explode. What is being searched for is the stuff that explodes from the world inside his body, not the storage ring. The inner world is the most convenient and safe storage place for realm owners. Generally, valuable things are placed in the inner world. Not long ago in Xueluo World, I also saw a description of a higher gene multiplier of the Manka Star bloodline. Such errors in basic settings were too dramatic and lowered the evaluation. If humans have bloodlines with more than 2 times the genetic multiple, Blood Luo Crystal and Black Warrior will be worthless. Human blood represents the realm of cultivation that can be achieved in adulthood without practicing cultivation, such as planetary level and stellar level, and there is no description of genetic multiples. If the bloodline has a gene multiplier bonus, wouldn't the original bloodline evolution agent be able to increase the gene multiplier? Can the Blood Luo Crystal be so valuable? The three earthly brothers in the original work used the bloodline evolution agent, but there was no description of their gene multiples or how many times their power increased. Gene multiples involve taboos in the original universe, and it is not easy to improve them. If it is more than 10 times, even if it is a special life, it should not be able to reproduce in the normal way. The Golden-Horned Behemoth should have the highest gene multiplier among ordinary lives, and its reproduction is a life-for-life method. Judging from its reproductive ability, it looks a bit like a special life. Although the original work does not say whether humans have more than twice the number of genes, there are many corroborating claims from the side. For example, the effect of the bloodline evolution agent mentioned before, such as the number and reproductive capacity of the population, such as the confidential information authority of the Blood Crystal, only those with Venerable and above can be circulated through auctions. Only high-level immortals from big forces can know this. Immortals who are not from big forces don't know this. Luo Feng said after he successfully cultivated the Nine Tribulations Secret Code in the second calamity of the human body, it could be comparable to the blood of the demon royal family, which proved that the demon royal family only had 6 times the genes. This was also one of the reasons why the demon royal family looked down on the human race. Resources that increase gene multipliers are generally only accessible to venerables. Below the Immortal level, the only resource that can be stably produced is Blood Crystal. The most critical point is that the original book said that the human body is very small in the universe, usually only a few meters high. This is also a reflection of the low gene multiple. Look at how tall Luo Feng's human divine body is, and then look at the immortal height of ordinary humans, and you will understand. Finally, let me talk about my views on the world background setting. The setting of cultivating immortals in the main world is a bit weird, because this setting of gaining benefits by conquering the world is more like the wizard style, which is wrong with the background of cultivating immortals. Especially after the world master made the world public, other people's approach to assisting in the strategy was genocide, which has no morality at all. No matter how bad the world of immortal cultivators is, only demon cultivators will exterminate life indiscriminately for the sake of profit. There is also a void setting similar to Cthulhu, which does not fit well with this world background. In this type of strategy for the heavens, there is such an unclear setting, which feels inconsistent. Because this anti-human setting is not only unreasonable, but also makes the plot look a bit messy, as if there are some extra things that don't match the style of painting.

It will be boring to abuse the master later... The greater the change in the world, the greater the backlash. The greater the backlash in the world, the more the protagonist will change. Isn't this an infinite loop? In the end, either the world will be destroyed or the protagonist will be gone →_→

The beginning is extremely poisonous, the female author or the kid brother? Let the author write a short play 😅😅😅😅 Who doesn't know the ultimate virtue of cultivating immortality? Are you afraid that you won't be enslaved quickly enough?