War God of the Wasteland

When I read the introduction, it was so interesting When I looked at the author, I instantly withered.

Is it okay to finish the book one by one? The crystal is like I can't hold it anymore. Can all your books be completed one by one?

Reading the book review, it seems that the author is a big eunuch, so I would like to express my humble opinion. The writing of this book is smooth, the setting is reasonable, and the details are handled very well. It seems to show a real cyber wasteland world, with a bit of martial arts science fiction, which is a bit too attractive to me. But the biggest disadvantage is that you may not be able to see the back of this book. Because the author is a great eunuch, we are fortunate to have a glimpse of a corner of such a world, and then leave with regret and disappointment. Eunuchs should be one of the cruelest things in the world. So I thought like this: when the author can't continue writing, why not change the angle and write it as a novella. Right? As long as the work has a beginning and an end, and the story is exciting and interesting, even though the length is a little short, no one said that an online article should have one or two million words. However, the consequences of doing so may be unsatisfactory income. Personally, I think there are several reasons why I can't write it down: I can't think of how to write the following story, I don't have an outline, I write it as I come up with it, I have no idea about the next story, and I think that no matter how I write it down, it won't be as exciting as the previous storyline, right? I personally think so. Since it is difficult to write so much in one breath, it is better to write a book in several volumes. The appropriate foreshadowing in each volume complements the unfolding world view. And as the story develops, the plot deepens, and the pace gradually accelerates, when a large chapter ends, it is reasonable to develop a new world view or a new power system at this time For example: For example, One Piece has been serialized for more than 20 years, and the story and power system have still not collapsed. On this basis, from the beginning of the story to the length of Cake Island, each chapter is full of imagination, story plot, emotional tension, and just the right fantasy color. After Cake Island, the power of Haki gradually overrides fruits. On Onigashima, Teacher Kai even said the words "Only Haki overrides everything". This is Oda's explanation of the new and stronger power system. Of course, the author does not have to write such a long story like One Piece. In fact, it is better than Oda. After the Frerenza chapter, the procrastination of the story is inevitably highlighted, and the next plot becomes weak. Therefore, the author can think more before writing, how to write the beginning of each volume, how to end each volume, how to reveal the foreshadowing as the story develops, and the outline. Finally, I'm sorry that my writing skills are limited, because my life is more about verbal communication and rarely involves the expression of written information. As a result, some words may not convey the meaning. Inevitably, some people think that I am superior and think that I am blameless in how the author writes. , But I am really serious. I typed this paragraph for a long time, and I also thought about how to help the author. I was afraid that the author would think that I was too daddy, but I still couldn't give much help because I have never written a book and am not a professional. It is difficult for us readers to understand the dilemma of not being able to write. In summary, I think the author is talented, but lacks solid basic skills, and does not pay attention to his works in terms of attitude. Perhaps due to various reasons, he did not persist in writing and failed to respond to the expectations and emotions of the audience.

It is a common practice to switch the narrative between the first perspective and the third perspective, but the author seems to do it too casually. My suggestion is that before switching the person each time, ask yourself why you want to make this switch, and whether you can do it differently. I think the person switching in the book "Pedro Páramo" is worthy of reference. Appropriate and restrained use of the first person to deal with intense emotions can increase the pleasure of reading while avoiding confusion in the narrative rhythm.

Sometimes it is in the first person, sometimes in the third person. Even the "psychological soliloquy" does not have transition words (such as "he said it in his heart, he thought about it"), which makes it very stiff. After reading Chapter 7, I really can't stand it anymore. Original text: Although Zhou Zhen and Yinghuo both said that you don't need to interfere, he knows in his heart that the three lords, especially Father Heishui, will never like us. Because we are different from King Huang Feng, we are not obedient Before this paragraph, I was still using the third person, but now it is the second person and the first person again. What do you want to express? Is it the protagonist's psychological activities? If it was in the third person, should it be written like this: Although Zhou Zhen and Yinghuo both said that Lu Chen didn't need to intervene, he knew in his heart that the three lords, especially Father Heishui, would never like them. Because Lu Chen and the others are different from King Huang Feng, they are not obedient This problem greatly affects the reading. Several readers have reacted, starting from the first chapter. At the beginning, it can be explained (barely) as a description of the character's psychological dialogue. Later, it can be said that the person's pronoun is confusing and the person's pronoun is very jumpy.

Practice martial arts in the wasteland. There is not so much food. Ordinary people in the wasteland mostly use their brains and talk less. As the wasteland environment continues to grow, human IQ is getting higher and higher.

Great, you have opened a new book again. I like authors like you who keep reopening and repeatedly producing high-quality free chapters.

The author of Cyber ​​Cultivation 2077? After reading one chapter, I felt it was not as good as 2077… I don't understand. The author is the same as the one next door who wrote about the demon master. They are obviously talented and have great potential. It has been several years, but every work ends as soon as the beginning is finished. He does not make any money, it is just torture. What are you doing? Even if you can't write a novel, why not write a novella? Promise me to finish writing it once? (If you have any finished books, please tell me and I will order them all right away)

After reading four chapters, I feel that the creativity is good, but the narrative level is too poor. The names kept changing, now Lu Chen, now me, now Xiaoqi, now Yinghuo... Who is the protagonist?

The author's settings and the smooth flow of the plot are top-notch, and I feel like there is a lot to do even if I become a screenwriter or a published author. After looking at the author's previous books, the author is indeed very talented. If he insists on updating "Not a Supervisor", he will definitely be able to get ahead, but only if he is not a "Supervisor"🤠😙😇😋