War God of the Wasteland

The synopsis looks interesting. Upon seeing the author, I instantly lost my nerve.

Can you finish one book? Even someone as hard as me can't keep going. Can all your books be finished in one volume?

Judging from the book review, it seems the author is a eunuch. I'd like to offer my humble opinion. The book is well-written, with a reasonable setting and excellent attention to detail. It presents a real cyberpunk wasteland world with a touch of martial arts and science fiction, which is incredibly appealing to me. But the biggest downside is that we might not get to see the rest of the book.

Switching between first-person and third-person narrative perspectives is a common practice, but the author seems to have done it too casually. My suggestion is to ask yourself before each perspective switch why you're making the switch and whether it could be handled differently. I think the perspective switching in *Pedro Páramo* is worth considering.

The use of first-person and third-person pronouns is inconsistent, and even the "inner monologues" lack transitional words (such as "he said in his heart" or "he thought of"), making the writing feel very abrupt. I couldn't take it anymore after reading Chapter Seven.

Practicing martial arts in the wasteland. Where would they find so much food? In the wasteland, most ordinary people tend to think less and talk less. Over time, the wasteland environment has led to a rise in human intelligence.

That's great! You've started a new book! I love authors like you who keep restarting and consistently producing high-quality free chapters.

Who is the author of Cyber ​​Cultivation 2077? I read one chapter, and it doesn't feel as good as 2077… I don't understand. The author is just like the one next door who wrote "The Painter of Demons". One is a koi and the other is a pigeon. They are both obviously talented and have great potential. It's been several years, and every work ends as soon as the beginning is finished.

I've read four chapters and the concept seems good, but the narrative is terrible. The point of view keeps changing – sometimes it's Lu Chen, sometimes it's me, sometimes it's Xiao Qi, sometimes it's Ying Huo… who exactly is the protagonist?

The author's setup and smooth plot flow are superb; I feel like they could easily succeed as a screenwriter or a published author. Looking at their previous books, the author is indeed very talented. If they consistently update without abandoning the story, they'll definitely succeed—but that's only if they don't abandon it! 🤠😙😇😋