The Fool's Infinite Journey

A terminator, crossdresser? Live streaming? Love cats? The conversations with teammates who don't wear clothes are all copied and pasted? Brother, please take your time and slowly screen out people A few comments all said that group portraits are well written. Which character did you write three-dimensionally? How does 120,000 words have anything to do with group portraits? Is it okay to spend money to buy more comments if the word count is too high?

To be honest, I haven't made a comment for a long time, but the writing is really good, but it is a bit selective at the beginning. An ancient person brings two pets he raised, but the pets still want to bite people. Just like the terminator you said, he has always been at the top, and the only thing he can do is self-destruction. In the early stage The difficulties brought him endless wealth later, but he couldn't use it. He was afraid that people would be too strong to challenge him, and he couldn't become stronger without him. When he got old, he was like a fatuous emperor. The new dictator also wanted to eat this cake, but he was too young, and he only had one weapon that could hurt others and himself.

Now I see three terminators at the beginning Capital terminator Fu Qing Prop terminator captain Gene terminator Bai

In Infinite Coins, the author writes that the protagonist is a half-saint, pulling and pulling. In the end, the hammer has no practical meaning. A wise man will calculate the protagonist's cleverness and it will be of no use. It is obvious to the naked eye that the author of this book is trying to push back on the setting of the idiot superman protagonist not to kill people. It is of little practical significance to push for a long time and be solved by a wise man. There is also the tension about the infinite trading setting of Yuanzu that can be seen at the end. In the end, these people struggled to write a trading market for the low-end ace evolution space, and then you ask him why he didn't write the ace infinite market from the beginning. He is a eunuch. It's really difficult.

There are too many narrations in Private Goods. It should be shorter. There are multiple character interactions, dialogues and behaviors.

I feel like I'm just enjoying myself. The first three chapters are incomprehensible. It feels like recording the extremely jumping thoughts in my mind when I'm mentally disturbed. It's so messy that it gives me a headache.

I contributed a few dollars to the author. This book is first and foremost the author's own book, and readers are incidentally. In summary, it's not the enjoyable article I want to read.

The work is quite innovative and thoughtful. But the combat power system and upgrade mode are hard to explain... Forget it, this is a problem in the later stage anyway... And Bai Chique's is not a trial, but a simple compulsory education... Others are fine, the old man's setting is too strange, as the bottom boss of the five-star level... There is nothing outstanding in terms of the knowledge level displayed or the skills to break the game, only the good impression of personal control... There is no impression that you can become a strong person/commander if you give some time to spread your power/enough resources. Not worthy of this star rating.

It is not easy to write a good group portrait.

Well, overall it's okay. It's like seeing a group of arrogant and irritable old people leading a group of strangers to force their father to hand over his inheritance. In the text, there are various criticisms against his own father for occupying the right to dispose of property, hindering him from happily creating a great career with his family property, and treating it as his own father's original sin. 😂 It feels like he wants to attack the existence of some grand rules, but. . Hahaha. . . The inner person has become a doormat who makes all kinds of troubles if he wants to split up the family property.