My Family Is Too Powerful, so I Can Only Go to the Chat Group to Show Off.

It's so written 😥😥😥

Although this novel is not completely mindless and idiotic like many other cool novels, the protagonist is often troubled by things that make people feel frustrated. This plug-in itself is meant to be a holy thing in front of others. In other words, this thing will destroy the order of other people's world. If you want to earn points, you cannot be a good person or a good gentleman. After the basic tone is set, the protagonist has many options for what to do. For example, every time he goes to a new group, he gives gifts to everyone. On the surface, this is a gift, but in fact, a curse is placed inside that will cause an attack within a certain number of days, and will lead to death if the person does not take the antidote for a certain period of time. Let me ask you, a group of people who pursue power, can they resist opening this thing? The curse broke out as soon as he opened it, and he had no choice but to listen to you if he wanted to live. Some people must be noble and feel that their lives are not important, so they will always care about the lives of their relatives and friends. After all, in most movies, the protagonist either saves his own life, saves the life of his relatives, or saves the life of the world. Anyway, there is always something he cares about. Take the plot of Ip Man's episode as an example. The protagonist can attack his relatives and friends, or even himself. For example, give them a curse that will occur at regular intervals. If you have too many attacks, you will die without an antidote. See if he really endures it once or twice, will he beg you to go? Even if he really doesn't want his life, they still have something to ask for. Without anything to ask for, it would be impossible for the movie to cast him as a key character. Let's talk about Ip Man again. Even if you can't do anything to his wife, children, relatives and friends, you can use national justice to pressure him. You can tell everyone you can contact in this hour that I can save this country, but because of a selfish villain, this villain's name is Ip Man, so I failed to save this country. Then there will be many people who will help you put pressure on him.

I think it's pretty good. It's not too mentally retarded. It's already above the standard for Shuangwen. Moreover, the main world has clear hidden plots from the beginning, and there won't be a coin-killing villain that suddenly pops up in some articles. The monthly vote has been cast, the evaluation potential is OK, and I look forward to the follow-up.

The world is too low, tasteless, and cannot attract people

You write Kung Fu movies or ghost movies that don't have much combat power. No matter how powerful your protagonist is, I won't feel good about it. I will only feel good about someone who is really powerful and has a high level of expression and is shocked.

Qidian's classified recommendations are really amazing. Is this a hot book nowadays? !

The writing is not bad, but the feeling of satisfaction when showing the saint in front of others is not very good. Moreover, the protagonist's talent is indeed outrageous. It seems that the vitality of their world in the main world is all artificial and thin. How can they break through so quickly?

The writing is too dry, just like eating dry bread with dry butter in the desert. It's not interesting at all.

Let me say a few words after seeing Chapter 17. Your writing is really messy. If you write about one person's martial arts world, you should rewrite it to follow the plot. It's useless. If you don't write it to follow the plot, then write an original one! It's a mess, one is from Japan, the other is from Hong Kong

Is Pigfoot's family not that strong? They are all scammers, it feels weird

It is completely impossible to tell that the protagonist belongs to the top family in the world of cultivating immortals. The protagonist's ability is at best a high level of martial arts.

If you think about the fact that his family's constitution cannot be inherited stably, you will know what this is.

Two people enter one world...