Chinese Comic Chat Group: Bad Minghua Really Doesn't Want to Be a Boss

Alas, I have no interest in the natives.

Mao Yong didn't speak, and the conversation was all water.

There are no time travellers, just plot characters.

The biggest problem with this kind of novel with purely indigenous characters is that there must be no OOC characters, which means the characters must be stable. And I think the standards for purely indigenous OOC novels will be lower than those with time-travel protagonists.

The big problem with Chinese comics is water. After a long time of trouble, it is either a big deal or no progress at all If you really dig into it and write it - it's easy to talk about it one by one, but if you want to connect multiples, you will find that it is very scarce Especially with one person, if you make trouble for a long time, it will be a big deal. Where is the upper limit of force, Luo Tian Dajiao makes me vomit after watching it Many plots are about Mi Laoer letting himself go and pretending to be profound. If you want to write a story about rewarding multiple worlds, it is a waste of time Super Seminary is inexplicable and self-motivated in the end. It is only the second creation of the League of Legends. The core is weak. Do you still chant some slogans in the early years now? Female channel replaces the core, I don't know why I went there As for Corpse Brother, because animation was cut in half in the past, the chance to become a popular IP is gone. There is too little understanding, and the audience is really small. The actual comic power has expanded, and there are many rhythm problems. Sentiment really accounts for a lot of it. What's more, 567 itself is almost dragging itself to death because of Wang Xiaofeng. It is clinging to its laurels and not pushing the plot. Changing the name to a childhood animation chat group or something, choosing some works that have a lot of sentiments, a beginning and an end, and a complete narrative, isn't it better than now?

Who has never been young?

It could have been a good book with a good subject matter, but the indigenous protagonist and the poor plot perfectly blocked all possibilities.

The routine of the time traveler is still fixed, just like an online game, you need to upgrade to pass the levels. In order to highlight the time traveler, the other characters were written too c.

Using indigenous characters, the sense of immersion is very poor, and the image is more comical, which makes it worse. How do you solve this?

Alas, there is no main character and the main world perspective, so it's so tiring to watch. When you write a fanfic without the main perspective, you don't give us any sense of immersion. It's tiring!

It's so watery, I have to have an inner monologue to say a word.

The author would like to tell you that this kind of group portrait novel should not really have a protagonist. It can only be said that Minghua is the strongest among them, but his own mobility is not high. Forcibly using him to promote the character design will easily collapse. It is better to write a little bit about each character's world plot when advancing.

What do you think about adding a large section of Douluo to a novel that is mainly based on animation? It also doesn't look good. Please change it quickly.

Three chapters a day is too much, but the effective information is low and there is too much content. I guess I won't be willing to pay for it in the future. There are many people in the chat group, and everyone has to say something when something big or small happens. Basically, the plot progress is not promoted at all. Reading this thing is just too much free time and I want to waste it 🙂

To be honest, if you don't add some tasks such as the invasion of the Lord God's illegal travelers and the fourth natural disaster players, etc., Which can be solved by a large group of friends, or the characters from the comprehensive comic world can be added to the daily comprehensive comic world fusion, etc. To expand the world view and a merit system that is beneficial to the overall upgrading of the world, otherwise it will feel like it is all a fixed routine after seeing it. I feel like aboriginal chat groups are possible, but the worlds you can join are too restrictive. You can also join the gourmet captives of specific food series, Shoji, which will be released in July. The new Hot Pot Iron Sand King NieR Era Gintama 999 Villager Stone Age Early Digimon Pokémon Multiverse is still here Anyone who has childhood Gomidi Princess Sofia, Transformers, Sony's Wreck-It Ralph, Zootopia, Cars, or Wall-E can all be added, and then you can also add time and space turbulence, characters from other worlds, and things like sending people back to other worlds for weird invasions.

Can the title of the book be changed to Zhutian Chat Group? The original Adventures of Jackie Chan was produced in the United States, which does not fit the title. Besides, I don't think it is necessary to pay so much attention to the place of origin of the group members. If you read more, you will know that the group members will be added later. It's nothing more than Xiao Yan, Lin Dong, Han Li, Ancient Emperor Luo Feng and Ye Fan. They are all fixed routines. Something new is the mysterious Klein Spirit Cage, or it is related to the original Bengming game. If you watch too much, it will be boring and too rigid. Besides, it's not like the latest foreign reincarnations of Spider-Man, Superman, One Punch, Re Raisuki Onfrien, Puella Magi Madoka Sailor Moon and Kamen Rider can't be added. On the other hand, can original plots be added in the future, such as the common fourth natural disaster invasion of the illegal traveler system of the main god, and the group members work together to solve the problem of outside invasion, directly expanding the world view from the fixed few to the real world view of the world?

Brother, it's very beautiful, brother, it's well written.

Another blow! In the world of Wu Liuqi, everyone else is flying with swords and flights, so there is no need to blow the golden light spell of one person.

I really want to persuade you to quit, but for the sake of Xiaoji Island, I'd better watch it for a while.

I feel okay. Aboriginal people do not apply fixed templates. It depends on how the author writes later. I hope he won't follow the original plot and create his own innovations.

I feel okay. Aboriginal people do not apply fixed templates. It depends on how the author writes later. I hope he won't follow the original plot and create his own innovations.

The cover is a bit ugly, please change it to something better.

The author's writing is quite good, but the author's first book seems to have a lot of bugs.

It feels very strange. Everyone else is the protagonist of the story, but Minghua is a supporting character. Although other people in the book don't know it, I felt it didn't match when I read it.

I think it's better to change the part where Bai Xiaofei gets the secret book, otherwise it will feel too bad.