Myth of the Strange Dao

Now that I have seen Tianting Pantaoyuan, I feel that the protagonist has not made much progress since he was reincarnated until now... How can I say that he has been practicing in the real world and dungeon for so many years, and he has seen it before, but he is still frightened by everything he sees, and is scared first. Everyone I am afraid of everything from monsters to bosses. After all, if I can't defeat it, I can understand it, but it's really a fairyland. But all the saints have seen it, and all kinds of saint disciples are also rare. How can I be frightened by the heavenly soldiers and the peach-picking fairies...

How should I put it, there are some problems with the settings and the logic doesn't make sense. In this kind of cultivation in the underworld, people are just consumables. Anyone who does something or practices will have a lot of people die, not to mention that practicing self-cultivation will cause backlash and resuscitation. Also, if you see a ghost, you will die if you know the ghost. Ordinary people are endless and inexhaustible. It stands to reason that everyone will be dead within 10 years. Not to mention the mythical period, where one to two million people were sacrificed at every turn, let alone those who were traced with infectious tapes.

I've been following it for a long time, so let me tell you what you think after reading it. The writing foundation is very good, and there are basically no problems. But for the weird genre, it's hard to write that kind of thing. Of course, it's normal for people with a normal mental state to not be able to write it. It's recommended to play some dark games, such as Dark Souls, Blood Curse, and Dead Space. But there is a problem with the way of writing. The key is that there is no comparison. The third and fourth floors of the main world are already so bad that it is difficult to get worse. The same is true for people. Basically everyone is evil, and I feel hopeless. It is a pity when beautiful and pure things rot. It is painful when the best good intentions lead to the most miserable ending. People who have fallen into the cesspit will not mind staying a little longer. In the end, I think it's not easy to balance combat power and atmosphere. Just like Resident Evil, Gatling can't even take a few shots from monsters and monsters, so it can't be said to be scary. To create an atmosphere of despair, the protagonist should try his best and be powerless.

This author is really awesome. He has written three books and has basically made no progress. How should I put it? Angry at his inability to fight, sad at his misfortune.

Now that I have caught up, I would like to make some small suggestions first 1 The plot is sometimes too dry, as if I am reading an outline. You can try to insert some branch lines, such as solving real problems, describing them in depth, showing saints in front of others, etc. Don't just mention it in one stroke like before 2 The plot is too rushed, one dungeon after another is being chased and beaten, it makes people breathless. The Taoist world and my family Yang Na can adjust it a bit. The main character here I don't know why he is working hard as his life is getting more and more desperate. It feels like the main character is living more and more inhuman 3 The proportion is getting closer and closer to the copy. Since it is a dual world, the balance will be broken and the readers will be biased. The later you want to write about another world, the more difficult it will be to deal with it. It is easy to collapse I gave a lot of suggestions and said it was good 1 The atmosphere is very good. Personally, it is the best atmosphere I have written except Tao Wei Xian 2 I have a lot of imagination, and sometimes I can guess the plot, but it doesn't develop according to the plot I guessed Finally, the author writes well, and readers will add up to a little, so come on, more and more will not be enough!

There is a problem with the worldview. The world is full of ghosts, and cultivation relies on ghosts, so it cannot be called ghosts. When educating, we cannot only mention the terror of ghosts. Ordinary people only know the terror of ghosts. How can there be no problems? The unknown is scary. With basic knowledge about the dangers, advantages and prevention of ghosts, who would still panic?

Why do I feel like it's another line that pushes my boundaries 🙄? I've read the first few dozen chapters and it's really interesting. I plan to keep following it. But the same old story has appeared again. The plot characters, NPCs, and "BOSS" are far ahead of the protagonist. There is no chance to "pretend" at all. They are all about taking advantage of others, opportunistically, and making some soup. . .

I don't know why, but this book is becoming more and more petty. It's a good story, but it just doesn't seem smooth enough and feels frustrating. It's time for a climax to change the pace.

Why are they all Yang Jian? I have read at least three books about Yang Jian. Is Red Semen bad? Is Yun Neutron bad? Why are there so many people in Fengshen catching Yang Jian? I'm going to vomit just looking at Yang Jian

Why can't I read this dark novel? ? Is there light in my heart? ?