I've Just Reached Level One, and You Want Me to Be a Puppet Emperor?

I really don't understand the role of the younger sister. If you want to reject it, please resolve the issue of blood relationship quickly. If not, tell her to go away. That's not to say you can't write about a biological sister. If you write about a younger sister, it's like writing about a lover. There is no sense of family ties at all, and the protagonist's attitude is always vague.

This is just a bicycle with no actual content. It probably won't last long.

I feel like I suddenly want to be an emperor. I should have more inner descriptions of the pig's feet, otherwise it will feel too abrupt and the transition will be too blunt. Moreover, Pig's Foot handles government affairs so carefully later on, you can add some Pig's Foot character, for example, based on the idea of ​​being in his position and seeking his job, which can make the image of Pig's Foot more vivid. In this way, in the later stage, because I was in this position, I gradually felt some bad aspects of this court, so I went to understand and see it. Then I thought the world would be better, so I took action proactively. Instead of relying on special events or tool people to promote each time. It's more natural.

Many of today's paying readers are intelligent, and they are really aimed at primary school readers. But have you ever thought that most of the paying readers are in their twenties to thirties, and generally they still have the IQ that they should have at this age.

Originally left. . One more thing. . The emperor is the embodiment of desire. Don't use the tricks of lying in the world of games. . Let's not talk about the author's common sense issues. . Abstract questions. . . Which emperor has time for romance? . No one can be seen except during holidays. . People who are carried away at night after finishing their errands while sleeping. . . . .

One thing I don't understand about your article is why there is a system penalty. This thing is from the Internet ten years ago. At that time, everyone was watching those heaven-defying plots in martial arts, so they didn't care about the system penalty. The key point is that now they are all cool articles. Isn't your punishment just a piece of cake? I don't believe any editor who said he couldn't sign a contract without writing about system penalties. He lived ten years ago, right?

The plot you are writing now has no main line, it is purely for the harem, for porn, you have reached the maximum level, what is the main line, just pick up women, have sex with women, wherever you go, you will receive them, wherever you go, all the women who appear, with names, become your harem, and then what? What do you want to do

Can such a weak and mindless novel be promoted? The starting point is indeed Xiaobai's world

I'm very curious about what you think of Sanjiang. Although the whole text is very fluent, it is very concise, and the writing and the theme are different. After reading the first part, I thought I was reading Ba Zong's writing, and there were no ups and downs, just ordinary daily life. If you want to write daily life, the system is also a failure, so how do you advance the main line? Is there a main line?

It's a cool novel, but the pace is too slow. From talking about the spring hunt to holding it, there's too much water during this period. Everyone in the Invincible novel is here to see the excitement. If you don't want to write a fast-paced novel, then don't write an Invincible novel, because the protagonist is so powerful, but the villain keeps dancing for so long.

When I got to Chapter 150, I just ran out of coins, so I stopped reading. The main reason is that it was interesting before it was released. After it was released, it has been keeping a harem, which is cool, but the characters are too flat, and the harem is too tough. I feel that the harem does not need too much, but at least if you add more to get along, it will not be like a husband and wife relationship at all, but a hot friend. This pure love warrior can't stand it.

Nervous, the ultimate brainless piece of writing. 5.5 Points

After reading more than 160 chapters, I finally came to my senses. This is a pure Liu Bei article. All the plots are foreshadowing, but because the master of river crabs cannot write it in detail, it looks very streamlined.

The protagonist has invincible military power and becomes the emperor. What else are you thinking about with such a stupid start? Reform. Not to mention every Chinese man, if most of them are in this situation, they will definitely take drastic measures and want to be the emperor for eternity and conquer everything. In the whole world, could it be the land of the king? On the shore of the land, could it be the ministers of the king? Once you have reached the top of your cultivation, you can no longer attack the country. We don't want to be a democratic republic. We can always use industrialization to develop productivity. If a cultivator has high strength and does not produce anything, he or she will not contribute much to society, so it is better to develop basic productivity.

There is absolutely no need to add so much inner drama to her in Chapter 19. I was so disgusted watching it. Who would write such a male video?

It doesn't have the saint level that it should have, and the book has always been in a state of superimposition of low martial arts and high martial arts.

Why force a system? Don't you know how to advance without a system?

No writing, just drool. If you drive a car, it's like a broken three-wheeler with missing wheels. If you want speed, you won't have speed. If you want it, it won't look good.

The plot is getting more and more complicated, and the only expectation is when the protagonist can take down the Queen Mother

Say it again. . . The review editor should be a woman. . .

There's a lot of nonsense, it's watery, the main plot is unclear, and the force value fluctuates, and there are some places where you can't read it with any brain. But then again, if you completely lose your brain and just skip it, it's okay. With the anti-routine setting and Alexandre Dumas, it's still worthy of the label of invincible flow.

From the beginning, he didn't bother to play tricks at all, but in the 400th picture, the protagonist started to play all kinds of tricks, and in the 721st picture, the protagonist killed a saint, and actually had to be surrounded by multiple people to kill him. It was confirmed, it must have been written by AI.

No man, I read more than a hundred chapters and thought about looking at the table of contents, but then I saw what the hell is an elf, and I suddenly switched from martial arts to Western fantasy.

Now I have seen the Jiang family. No, the author uses yellow as a comma. Can't he advance the plot quickly? Just write it properly. After subscribing, it becomes more and more serious. At the starting point, this kind of article cannot be written. It will be more fun to think about it carefully and use less routines. There are things like this that are more suitable than the starting point.

Hurry up, eunuch, don't waste time and open the next book.

After more than 400 photos, the style, wording, everything has changed. Did AI write part of it?

Yes

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Come on! Don't stop updating, chase your investment.

Have you accepted the Queen Mother now? I haven't seen the latest chapter yet.