There's Something Special About This Red Chamber!
这个红楼有点妙！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 573k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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195Chapters
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The author simultaneously tries to portray the protagonist as incredibly powerful, even daring to disobey imperial edicts, while also subconsciously suppressing him, making him subservient to the Jia family. For example, when Jia Jing arranges a marriage, the protagonist, despite his unwillingness, obeys the dictates of his parents and the matchmaker. This stark contrast is why you couldn't continue writing.
They created some kind of "Heart and Soul Network"... Which immediately broke the immersion, making it hard to watch anymore.
The Heart Soul Network is a nonsensical plot device, with the entire storyline driven by the addition of new cheat codes. First, there was Minecraft, then the Beauty Record, and now the Heart Soul Network—a cheat code that appears abruptly without any foreshadowing. And to make matters worse, this cheat code automatically spreads to everyone, allowing even complete strangers to use it without prior permission from the protagonist. That's just ridiculous.
Suddenly adding several original female characters to the story is too cruel.
Everything else is fine, but it's really unfair that a few girls were given so much screen time for no reason. I came here to read about the Dream of the Red Chamber plot. If I want to read original content, why don't I just go read some urban harem novels?
When he defied the imperial decree, he claimed to be severing all worldly ties, but later, upon arriving at the Jia family mansion, he became a completely different person. The protagonist's personality changed so drastically, creating a strong sense of dissonance. I hate reading novels like this; they're disgusting and extremely uncomfortable to read.
Why did they suddenly add a Tartar invasion plot? It's so abrupt and out of context. If this happened in the original story, what about the immortal cultivator Master Jia? He would have been dead long ago.
As I read on, I felt a bit awkward, a bit stuck in the middle, and the writing was disjointed and disjointed. The author should pay more attention to the details; 70% of the content consists of the protagonist's inner monologues, with very little dialogue in the main story.
He wanted to write about "I am the only law," but then went back to the Jia family to flatter them, exposing his weaknesses and poisoning his beliefs.
The protagonist is truly amazing. Even when others are attacking his homeland and about to destroy his country, he's still indulging in self-admiration. He's exceptionally talented.
The beginning was alright, but it got boring after the author changed the protagonist's identity to a prince. The later part, which turned into a spiritual energy revival, became even more boring.