There's Something Special About This Red Chamber!

The author also wants to make the protagonist so awesome that he even dares to violate the imperial edict, but also subconsciously suppresses the protagonist and makes the protagonist humble in front of the Jia family. Jia Jing proposes marriage, but he is clearly unwilling and obeys his parents' orders to find a matchmaker. Such a serious separation is the reason why you can't continue writing.

I made some kind of soul network... It suddenly became a drama, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

The inexplicable Heart Soul Network, the plot is all driven by the addition of new hooks, first the MC, then a beauty record, and then the Heart Soul Network, and it is a hook that does not appear unexpectedly at all, and even if it is a cheat, this hook will automatically spread to the public so that even people who cannot reach it can use it without the protagonist's permission in advance, which is outrageous.

Everything else is easy to talk about. It's inexplicable that the girls wrote so many scenes in the original version. It's too toxic. I came here to see the plot of Red Mansions. If I want to see the original version, I'll look for the urban harem novel. Can't I read it?

When I was resisting the imperial edict, I talked about cutting off the fate of the world, but when I arrived at the Jia Mansion, it was a completely different story. The contrast between the protagonists' personalities was too great, and the sense of separation was too strong. I hate reading novels like this. People who read them are disgusting and uncomfortable.

Why did you suddenly add a plot about the Tatar invasion? It has no beginning and no end. If this was the case in the original work, why would Master Jia, a cultivator of immortality, be dead?

It feels awkward when I read it, and it feels a little bit neither good nor good. It doesn't read smoothly, and it's awkward. The author should pay more attention to the details. 70% Of the whole story is the protagonist's inner dialogue, and there are very few plot dialogues.

I wanted to write about my own method, so I went back to Jia's house to lick it, exposing my weakness and being poisonous.

The protagonist is really awesome. He was attacked by others at his doorstep and the country was immediately destroyed. Yet he is still intoxicated with himself. He is quite outstanding.

It was okay in the beginning, but since the author changed the identity of the protagonist to a prince, it became boring. It becomes even more boring when it directly turns into spiritual energy recovery later on.