See Those Monsters? Attack!

It's been frustrating ever since he was targeted by Osborn; he's completely lacking in class. He's being chased by the Osborn Corporation, then blocked by the mutant organization, and later harassed by S. H. I. E. L. D. The key point is that the protagonist can't do anything about those forces and can only be chased. Then there's the issue of the novel's plot.

This novel is just... One time with a stranger is enough, and then she exposed her inexplicable bottom line, and what happened in the end? Investigating the background, then fighting monsters, keeping you constantly occupied, and everyone is silent as you read.

Dude, putting aside whether your writing is good or not, these prices are just outrageous.

I stopped reading after chapter four. The protagonist hasn't seen Marvel, so he doesn't know the plot. It would have been better to write about natives.

What's wrong with writing two sentences in an American comic and ignoring "China"?

Are prices really that outrageous? A bowl of noodles with double toppings costs $500. Someone says they'll pay you $100 a month, but you pay them $100 a day. An Asian gang can be found with hundreds of thousands of dollars. Separately with a woman, they'll offer you $30,000.

Prices are outrageous. A meal of Chaoshan cuisine costs $500. And that's not even a high-end restaurant.

Male enemies are sent to strategy dungeons, while female enemies are accepted; there's a reason why it's not popular.

The subject matter is good, but the plot logic needs improvement. Write a proper outline; don't get carried away and add unnecessary plot points that frustrate yourself and the readers, or create problems for the protagonist (like the woman giving the protagonist... If you don't want to finish the story, don't just write these nonsensical scenes). This will only increase reader dislike.

With a thousand collections and nearly two thousand followers, you're unbeatable, kid. Just keep entertaining yourself.