Chi Xiao!

The writing feels great. There are no extreme people there, no one is murderous, no one is jealous of evil to the extreme, and everyone is like this, as long as you point it out. Cultivation also has a Taoist heart. It not only attaches importance to the practice of magic, but also pays more attention to the understanding of the Taoist heart. It has both killing skills and an immortal heart.

I am practicing the Shushan method in the world of cultivating immortals Longevity starts from the Calabash Sword Technique The old demon of Shushan is practicing the Shushan method in the world of cultivating immortals All of them are eunuchs

The writing of the female characters is too embarrassing. If you don't know how to write a female protagonist or a female character, I suggest you go for a relationship or get a pedicure. Don't be like a virgin and it's all fantasy. Or just learn from Squid and open a book to practice emotional scenes.

Your name sounds familiar. Where have you read it? Is Lao Deng reincarnated?

It's not a eunuch toad's trumpet live broadcast, standing on his head and eating sex!

A hodgepodge of toad stuff. In the past, toads wrote books with a relaxed, logical and youthful spirit. Nowadays, toads are writing books, rushing and urinating, which brings out the impatience and weakness of middle-aged and elderly men. This book is packed with plot points and the plot rushes very quickly, lacking logic, and seems to be rushing the work.

It's a big shit 😰 It looks so good, but somehow it makes the protagonist want to attract women with his bad mouth. You can't make people angry. I said, 😒😒 You deserve to be thrown into the street😒😒 fn=49]😒 If you don't have the ability to write about women, do you think the female characters you write are particularly good? 😒😒😥😥

I thought it was a serious genius stream, but after doing it for a long time, it turned out to be a plug-in person. If you say you want to give out plug-ins, don't call yourself a genius. Whoever you give your plug-in to can't practice cultivation?

It was okay before, but suddenly became 💩 after it was put on the shelves. I suspect it has been sold to a studio.

This book is written according to Akagi😁😁😁

Was it cut somewhere and opened here?

The protagonist is the kind of person who is not a good person himself and doesn't look like a good person to anyone else 🙂🙂

This heroine is really annoying and artificial. Physically uncomfortable

The writing was quite good at the beginning, but after the heroine, the style became literary and high-spirited, which didn't match the previous worldview at all. It's a pity that the turn turned back to a novice novel.

Otherwise, just use a name and send it to eight people, which will make Wang Zhong feel uncomfortable.

Here comes another one. It's true that the quality is not good, but the quantity is enough. Is there any progress?

It doesn't have that smell, but it looks like that of a eunuch

I'm sick of watching Sword Immortal, can't I change the way I play it?

In fact, I think it's pretty well written, but I'm just not sure about your update.

After reading it carefully, the main plot pays homage to "The Fairy Gourd", "Akagi" and "One Sword Cut Through the Nine Heavens". Not to mention, although the plot is familiar, the rare thing is that the continuity is very good, but it is a pity that the ending is so bad...

Okay, I have to write it in red, and I also have to write about that person's back. I can't continue writing, can I?