Players Invade Cyberpunk

1. About the content and plot The excessive "black slave" problem raised at the beginning of the article has been alleviated after the number of players has increased, or it has been covered up by other rich plots, making it less uncomfortable, and it can basically be watched in the later stages. 2. Player group image creation In terms of player group image creation, some player templates are quite interesting, but the problem is the same as before, too templated. After reading through it, there are few main players that stand out and make an impression. If anyone is really impressed, they are the Super Earth trio, but these three characters also appeared very late. The only other things that left a slight impression were a bun and an Egyptian pregnant woman. Can you believe it? I even forgot the names of the four players at the beginning. This level of templates is evident. My suggestion to the author is to use less clichéd jokes and strengthen the characterization. Choose a few characters with potential and high popularity, expand the character template, enrich the story content, and strengthen the interaction between the protagonist and other characters. Don't always engage in "black slave exploitation". 3. Shelf Arrangement and Reading Experience The timing of this book's release is not right. The author is new to the platform and gets anxious as soon as he gets the chance to publish his article. This is a big mistake. Starting Point is different from other platforms. Here it is not that the sooner the book is released, the better, but that it is necessary to fully understand the relevant promotion and activities. It is reasonable to release it around sixty or seventy chapters. This way, it can not only get traffic push from the platform, maximize benefits, but also readers can have a deeper understanding of the work through the first 60 chapters. Personally, after reading it for a long time, I realized that I had to spend money to buy more than 50 chapters. I wanted to give up the book and change it. Fortunately, those few chapters happened to be about Lucy, which piqued my interest, so I continued reading. The content at the end is pretty interesting, and I bought it and read it all until the update on the 15th. 4. Analysis of advantages World view setting: The novel uses the second grade period and the rules of games and group running as the background to build a world view, and the overall structure is qualified. There may be a minor problem with the confusing timeline at the beginning, but fortunately there is no serious OOC (Out-Of-Character, that is, behavior that is inconsistent with the character's personality). The author has done sufficient research and adapted the characters appropriately, which basically fits the original character. Readers who like this kind of world view will not be disappointed in this aspect when reading. Moreover, this kind of subject matter is relatively new, and you will find it interesting when you first encounter it. The world view and the subject matter are highly compatible. The only fly in the ointment is that the author still needs to improve in terms of group portrait creation.

Our descendants will fight again, hey, hey, hey, hey!

I don't quite understand that the system can build a website in seconds and cover the cyber world data, but it actually tells the protagonist that he is afraid of public opinion war. . . . Are you really a system? You can manage the cyber world network, but you can't control the original world network. Do you still have to abide by the laws of the Internet? Everyone is harmonious and loving.

First paragraph I can only say that the protagonist is too greedy. Some of his behaviors were so outrageous that I even doubted whether he was the ancestor of real capitalists, or even worse. Even if you treat players as cheap labor, if you want them to do things for you, you have to give them relatively good positive feedback. People are willing to sacrifice their motorcycles to help you, so you have to show some respect, right? If there is no feedback, players will be timid in doing things in the future, just to minimize their losses, which will undoubtedly greatly reduce the enthusiasm of the players under them. I think the most unreasonable thing is in the early stage. It is obvious that using some cheap equipment can improve the combat effectiveness and overall quality of the players under his command, thereby striving for greater benefits for oneself, but the protagonist is still caring about the trivial cost. Second Paragraph Regarding the theme of "The 4th Natural Disaster", if you want to write wonderfully, the group portrait content must be handled extremely well, and the different choices of players with different personalities must be shown. But for now, this aspect is still a bit underdeveloped. Although a variety of players are set up, it still feels too generic to me, lacking depth and realism. I plan to buy the 10 chapters after they are released to see how the quality is. I am not in a hurry to make a full decision yet.

After being convinced, the player is summoned and wants to take away whatever the player gets. And it's still free. Let players build the entire base, and then let players pay to live in it. Is it a human being? Also put in that gag. I don't think there's any problem at all. The author doesn't think it's funny.

Although the subject matter is very attractive, it is not good-looking. It seems to be a player invasion, but in fact it is written more like a group of clones of the protagonist, without any thoughts of their own. The author takes the protagonist as himself, and the protagonist treats the players as employees, as cattle and horses, but not as players. If readers were to take on the role of a player, they would probably have to kill the protagonist even if they were banned!

It's too stupid. It sells exoskeletons to the cyber world. This kind of b-thing is made casually by a slightly bigger company. If this evil point is not changed, it will no longer be seen.

Save money: I borrowed a cyberpunk shell to write my own settings. If you don't mind this, you can read it.

I thought I could write something new. Isn't it just using the skin of Cyberpunk 2077, just like the novel that summons players? When I saw the small details, I thought the author was very attentive, which was different from other similar books. What I want to see is players venturing into cyberpunk, not players working as slaves for the protagonist. Besides, the first element of a game is the gameplay, followed by the image quality. Is it fun to be a black slave? Isn't it enough to experience the real reality? If you don't let me do this, I won't let you do that. You have to do what you ask me to do. Who will like to play? No matter how good the picture quality is and how realistic the game is, if the gameplay is not good enough, the best thing to do is give it a try. Writing books using the same templates will not make you a master. Those masters who write similar books look very similar but have completely different connotations. They use similar frameworks to write different and interesting stories instead of using different frameworks to write the same story

It's well written. I hope the protagonist will set up a company. I've seen too many mercenary routes. Players can have every route, but the protagonist is more high-end. After all, the potential for development is not small. If it is just a mercenary middleman, it feels like the layout is too small.

Either create an original cyberpunk world like Foxtail, or write it according to the original plot of the game. . . Now I'm using other people's plots but pretending not to understand. It's very awkward.

La, I feel like the player is too retarded and rushes to renovate the house

You might as well build a new world by yourself

I came here to see cyberpunk, not to see how you fight guerrilla warfare in Latin America and return to the jungle. There are very few trees in the cyberpunk world, right?

I've seen the latest one. The flaw in your book is why players waste so much time on you. It's not automatic with one click. The time ratio between the real world and the game world is different. Also, accept that David's mother. It's so hard to jump. Why are you interested in such an old woman? She didn't even go for surgery

I seem to have seen the poisonous point of treating players as🐢💢 somewhere... Is there no chivalry here? !

A good idea was wasted in the hands of a bad guy.

Now the author keeps hinting that this is a real world. I always find this kind of plot very boring🤔

Many novels of this type will have such a plot, in which countries in the real world obtain advanced technology from virtual games. But this is very bad. Players will be controlled or influenced to actively or passively seek benefits for the real country instead of working for the protagonist. If players don't play for pure joy, it's not the fourth natural disaster.

They are all fighting with Arasaka. I feel that I need to quickly farm and develop technology to increase the number of players. Otherwise, the player's prosthetic technology and battle damage recovery cannot keep up. If Arasaka comes, it will be difficult to fight. The Chimeras in Dog Town are all black technologies left over from the corporate war.

When we started to put out the fire, luckily my mother noticed something was wrong. Damn it, I said I would raise dozens of more pictures, and there was nothing wrong with it. If you fucking looked at each of these pictures, I would have cured your low blood pressure.

Giving money to others is like pouring water on others. This is not a rude thing. I have never set out to give out money like this. It is just because of my head. Mann's team went through the motions and the main character, who had no missing arms or legs, was given 40,000 euros. It really didn't stop him. Save the president of the United States, except for the money to study for a Ph. D., He only had so much money in total.

To be honest, when I saw Chapter 381, I just felt like I was hooked💩... As a senior cyberpunk enthusiast, from (Cyberpunk Red) to (Cyberpunk 2077), I don't guarantee that I understand everything, but I guarantee that I know more than the author... This feels like you are watching the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and then Later, Cao Cao directly gave all the soldiers and horses to Liu Bei and found a place to hang himself... It's not that you can't create a second time... But yours is not logical at all and does not conform to the world view at all... I don't understand why the author wants to write Chapter 381 and suddenly make everyone in Night City become saints? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I didn't dare to read this chapter anymore. I doubted the author's manuscript and outline. If someone reads it, I hope you can explain it to me... Because of this matter, not to mention Arasaka, Military Technology, a top company like Yeshi, which has this project, Wash Anyone running for mayor can let his wife find out... It's the AI outside the wall. Unless the black wall is gone, even if the black wall is gone, the AI will only attack humans... And this thing should not be done by the protagonist, so it is neither the protagonist nor the indigenous people... Aliens? This is very different from the original setting, okay? So I'm sorry, 381 gave up………….

The "players" in the novel basically use various stereotype templates, and there are not many normal people, so the readers have a poor sense of substitution. When there were few players in the early days, the story mainly relied on the interaction between the protagonist and the indigenous people, which seemed okay. In the mid-term, there will be problems when there are too many players. Because "veteran players" are all valuables, they cannot be described according to the strict "strategy group" model. They can only rely on players to pretend to be crazy, act foolishly and make mistakes, and NPCs to fight with the air to advance the plot of the game. It's okay once or twice, but it gets boring after a few times. It has become inevitable to open high and go low. In a "super large open free exploration" game, there must be a normal-thinking strategy team to take care of the whole story (it can be the protagonist himself or the player).

Exoskeletons without intelligent AI drivers are useless. Otherwise, why would big companies still research those prosthetics instead of directly researching exoskeletons? The physical strength is not as strong as that of V Zhentian. You will basically die if you wear it, let alone the cheap ones. The source code of intelligent AI has long been lost behind the black wall, and various companies are also trying to capture the circulating AI behind the black wall. In fact, if you want to cheat, it is best to use AI. If you train the AI ​​well and build a powerful server, you can basically fight against the company. AI can help you iteratively create various weapon ideas. The network can also help you resist intrusions, including intrusions into enemy networks.

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A pure passerby review. After seeing the industrial version of the water plant, the author has great ambitions and a big layout. It is true that a game similar to Fallout is true, but how can I say that I have played the game. The enemies in the Fallout world view are relatively weak, so if the game is realistic, you can use some garbage real-life weapons to resurrect players and push the development of the looters, and then pick up some high-tech weapons to fight against them after they develop, such as artificial humans and other high-tech weapons similar to the game academy railway brotherhood. However, in Cyberpunk 2077, although low-level gangsters can be beaten with guns, the game is also numerically balanced. Really, those players whose high-tech prosthetic equipment only has modern ordinary weapons will give away their heads even if they feel like being resurrected. It feels like the big gap is like a cold weapon versus Gatling, which can wipe out a large area of ​​​​all kinds of weapons in seconds. After all, in 1970, there was still a fantasy technology generation gap and no numerical balance in the game. To be fair, your player's 2000 hand-made weapons cannot break the armor of 2075, and there are so many perverted hacking methods in the game. It is impossible for your akRPG in 2000 to destroy the tanks of 2075, which is the development of the fantasy Big Bang technology tree. Unless there are some high-tech weapons, the result is that ordinary exoskeletons are still powerful flying brick type. I believe that they can fight spam predators in radiation. But fighting in Cyberpunk 2077, which feels cooler and more advanced than radiation-powered armor, is just a dream, just like the green skins of wow. It really makes me wonder. Also, the companies are said to be so powerful. Night City is indeed controlled by the companies. Does he really want to encircle and suppress him without tanks, planes and cannons? I don't believe it. A force that is not afraid of losing a nuclear weapon would care about using small toy-like armored vehicles, drones, various light armored weapons, and even powered armor in the city. Then he fights a hammer war, he threatens the hammer people, and he can't even handle 2,000 African armed players. How can he pretend that the country launches a war to suppress the uprising? Then the main character's game is also very big. Even if it is big, it is said that his game is almost like a black wall. The problem is that I read the background game introduction on the Internet. The black wall is created by the global elites sent by the network supervisors. How does the black wall, a man-made thing, feel like the great Luo Jinxian has jumped out of the three realms and is no longer omnipotent in the five elements? And the system is not equal to the black wall, but includes the black wall ability and is a universal wishing machine. Doraemon, because he can not only control reality but also give the protagonist various high technologies out of thin air. Isn't this reasonable? You have to explain why the system has the blackwall ability to instantly kill all kinds of AI hackers and why it can have a Doraemon treasure bag and pull out a bunch of things, right? Otherwise, let me be honest, what kind of protagonist does this system need? What kind of players do we need when the protagonist has such an awesome system? Just step on your left foot with your right foot and go up to heaven to conquer the universe, okay! Then, although the author wanted to write according to that mode, the plot was unreasonable and the numerical values ​​were unreasonable, and the group portrait was not a group but a single image. They all looked like they were playing games, they were just bad at playing games, they didn't like to learn, they were obscene and obscene, like a professional counterpart to Night City, and then they forced themselves to pretend to be good young people who conformed to their core values. Isn't that such a stereotype? Can't they all be written differently? But I think the best thing this author writes is making jokes. At least no matter what the subject matter of the novel, making jokes is like an abstract video that makes some people giggle. . . I feel that the author's subject matter is very good, but his imagination is not very good. The weapons given to players are too low, and the high-tech enterprises are too weak. You have to fit in with the social background of the game and not make it up, otherwise it will be like some comics where the combat power has collapsed and it will be boring and useless. It can be said that the imitation does not reach the essence, and the appearance is similar but not the spirit.

It's okay to use your brain, but it's unacceptable to push back on religion and ideology. Not everyone is a materialist, not to mention that the vast majority of people in the world are idealists. This kind of preaching that is absolutely correct makes people speechless.

There is too little player content. The interaction between the protagonist and the indigenous people was well written. Goldfinger's use is too stupid, why must he rush to do big things? The recycling bin is such a big killer, why not do some small business first? Why give players cash? Just like contribution points. Anyway, it's left hand and right hand. We don't tell the players common sense about worldview setting. At least we let them know the environment they are in and how to live in this world. I despise the players for being naive, but they don't explain it clearly, and they don't let the players explore on their own. The player is essentially the protagonist's golden finger and tool man, but we don't see how the protagonist uses it. The black slave can also squeeze and mobilize enthusiasm, but it is not shown.

The first one to light up